高考英语 书面表达专题指导与练习讲评（图画式作文）练习讲评一课件.ppt

2012届高考英语书面表达 图画式作文 练习讲评一 下图叙述了你和父亲散步时所发生的事情 请根据下面6幅图 用英语写一篇题为anaccident的短文 短文必须包括以下内容 1 图中讲述了一个什么故事 2 女孩的言行说明了什么问题 3 你对此事有什么感想 注意 1 对于图中所发生的事情可以适当发挥想象 增加有关细节 但必须合理 2 词数 150左右 标题已经给出不计入总词数 anaccident 第一部分描述漫画 一 提炼要点 第一幅图 有一天 我和父亲在湖边散步 一个女孩骑自行车路过 结合后面的图中所反映的内容可以推断女孩骑车的速度很快 第二幅图 我们要将第二 三两幅图连起来看 才容易提炼要点 根据第三幅图可以看出是有人掉到湖里了 根据第一幅图可以推测是骑自行车的女孩 结合常识提炼出下列要点 听到人可怕的尖叫声和有什么掉到水里的声音 转过头看到女孩在水里挣扎 在喊 救命啊 第三幅图 第四幅图 我和父亲快步跑过去把女孩拉上岸 第五幅图 我和父亲把女孩掉湖里自行车也弄上了岸 第六幅图 对这幅图我们要展开合理的想象 根据图中 我 头脑中的问号 可以推断 我 感到非常困惑 为什么 结合常识 得到了别人的帮助 理应表示感谢 再根据图中 女孩已经骑车离去 可以推断女孩连声 谢谢 恐怕都没有说 这样推断才能为后面谈谈感想埋下伏笔 遣词造句 注意多重表达 onedaydaddyandiweretakingawalkbythelake agirlrodepastataveryhighspeed weheardafrightenedscream therewasabignoiseofsomethingdroppingintothewater somethingdroppedintothewater makingabignoise weturnedandfoundthegirlstrugglinginthelake thegirlwascryingforhelp weheardthegirlcryingforhelp dadandiranaspossibleasquicklytowardsherandpulledheroutofthewater withouthesitation dadandiranquicklytowardsherandsavedher wealsomanagedtogetherbikewhichfellintothelake wewerealsoabletopullherbikeoutofthewater thegirlrodeawayevenwithoutsaying thanks ihadthoughtthegirlwouldsay thankyou tousbeforesheleft butshesaidnothingandrodeaway ifeltquitepuzzledatherbehavior ifeltquitedisappointedatherimpoliteness 二 描述漫画 连贯成篇onedaydaddyandiweretakingawalkbythelakewhenagirlrodepastataveryhighspeed thensuddenlyweheardafrightenedscream followedbyabignoiseofsomethingdroppingintothewater weturnedandfoundthegirlstrugglinginthelake cryingforhelp withouthesitation dadandiranquicklytowardsherandpulledheroutofthewater wealsomanagedtogetherbike almostimmediately thegirlrodeawayevenwithoutsaying thanks ifeltquitepuzzledatherimpoliteness 第二部分发表感想 围绕女孩的无礼行为自拟感想 对自己 为什么要帮助别人 帮助别人是明德 不是图别人的感谢 对女孩的无礼进行评论许多年轻人不懂礼貌 这对建设和谐社会非常有害 自我劝慰比起帮了别人反成被告的人来说 我们还算幸运 毕竟我们没有被人冤枉 遣词造句 注意多重表达 helpingothersisthetraditionalvirtue wedon thelpothersfor thanks wedon thelpothersbecausetheythankus manyyoungpeopledon tknowhowtobepolite manypeopledon tknowwhatbeingpolitemeans itdoesmuchharmtotheconstructionofharmonioussociety itisveryharmfultoconstructingharmonioussociety comparedtothepeoplewhoofferedtheirhandbutwerelateraccusedofcausingtheaccidents howluckywewere afterall wewerenotdonewrongtobyothers irememberedstorieswherepeopleofferedtheirhandbutwerelateraccusedofcausingtheaccidents howluckywewere afterall weescapedbeingincludedinsuchstories 连贯成篇asfarasi mconcerned helpingothersisthetraditionalvirtue wedon thelpothersfor thanks butnowadays manyyoungpeopledon tknowhowtobepolite whichdoesmuchharmtotheconstructionofharmonioussociety however comparedtothepeoplewhoofferedtheirhandbutwerelateraccusedofcausingtheaccidents ifelthowluckywewere afterall wewerenotdonewrongtobyothers 参考范文一 onedaydaddyandiweretakingawalkbythelakewhenagirlrodepastataveryhighspeed thensuddenlyweheardafrightenedscream followedbyabignoiseofsomethingdroppingintothewater weturnedandfoundthegirlstrugglinginthelake cryingforhelp withouthesitation dadandiranquicklytowardsherandpulledheroutofthewater wealsomanagedtogetherbike almostmmediately thegirlrodeawayevenwithoutsaying thanks ifeltquitepuzzledatherimpoliteness asfarasiamconcerned helpingothersisthetraditionalvirtue wedon thelpothersfor thanks butnowadays manyyoungpeopledon tknowhowtobepolite whichdoesmuchharmtotheconstructionofharmonioussociety however comparedtothepeoplewhoofferedtheirhandbutwerelateraccusedofcausingtheaccidents ifelthowluckywewere afterall wewerenotdonewrongtobyothers 参考范文二 onedaydaddyandiweretakingawalkbythelakewhenagirlrodepastataveryhighspeed thensuddenlyweheardafrightenedscream followedbyabignoiseofsomethingdroppingintothewater weturnedandfoundthegirlstrugglinginthelake cryingforhelp dadandiranquicklytowardsherandpulledheroutofthewater wealsomanagedtogetherbike almostimmediately thegirlrodeawayevenwithoutsaying thanks ifeltquitedisappointedatherbehavior wedon thelpothersfor thanks butnowadaysmanyyoungpeopledon tknowtobepolite whatapityitisforoursocietyandforourcivilization atthesametime irememberedstorieswherepeopleofferedtheirhandbutwerelateraccusedofcausingtheaccidents howluckywewere afterall weescapedbeingincludedinsuchstories 同步练习 2012届 四川省成都石室中学高三月考 以下四辐图所反映的是你上周六在你家附近的公园里的一条湖里救起了一名落水儿童的经过 请根据图画所反映的内容 写一篇英文周记 叙述事情发生的全过程并简要谈谈你的感受 至少两点 1 周记的开头已为写好 不计入总词数 2 词数 150左右 3 参考词汇 pavilion 公园 花园中的 亭子itwassunnylastsaturday iwenttotheparknearmyhometospendmyweekendasusual 参考范文 itwassunnylastsaturday iwenttotheparknearmyhometospendmyweekendasusual ataboutnoon iwasenjoyingmyreadinginapavilionnearalakewhensuddenlyiheardsomeonecryingforhelp ijumpeduptoseewhatwashappeningandwasshockedbythescene inthedistancealittlekidwasseenstrugglinginthewater whilemanypeoplestandingbythelaketooknomeasuretohelpthekid believeitornot ievenheardsomepersonssaythatitwasnoneoftheirbusinessanditwasfreezingcoldafterall withouthesitation ipushedthroughthecrowd rushingtotheriver