陕西省延长县高考英语二轮复习 作文品析（2）.doc

陕西延长县2016高考英语（二轮）作文品析（2）【2016高考训练题】书面表达 (满分25分)假设你是王林，寒假期间你要到伦敦旅游，请你根据以下提示给你的英国好友alex写一封信，请他推荐一个旅馆，要点如下：1 介绍你伦敦之行的目的；2 停留时间：5个晚上，从2月8日到12日；3 房间要求：预定一个房间，房间不一定很大，但要有浴室；可以上网； 注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。dear alex,_【参考范文】dear alex, how is everything going recently? i am writing to you in the hope that you can recommend a hotel to me. to experience different cultures and broaden my horizons, i will visit london during the winter holiday. when i am staying there, i want a single room with a private bathroom for five nights, from feb 8 to feb 12. i hope that the hotel you recommend to me should be located near the bus station so that i can take a bus conveniently. in addition, to keep in touch with my family and friends, i hope i can gain access to the internet in the room. i would appreciate it if you could help me. i am looking forward to your early reply. 接连发生的酒后驾驶致死案，引发了社会的高度关注。2009年8月15日起，全国行动，重拳整治“醉驾”，各地出台措施，狠扎醉驾痛穴。请你根据以下内容，以treasure our lives为题在你个人博客上发表文章，奉劝司机朋友们珍爱生命，切莫酒后驾车。案例：2009年6月30日，南京司机醉驾撞车，5死4伤。呼吁：关爱生命、社会、家人；拒绝酒后驾车；自我防范措施：考生自拟(至少两项措施)参考词汇：醉驾drunk driving；路人 pedestrian写作时注意格式，词数100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。treasure our liveswith the number of cars increasing in cities, traffic accidents occur frequently, calling serious attention across the globe and becoming a major concern in our society today.【参考范文】treasure our liveswith the number of cars increasing in cities, traffic accidents occur frequently, calling serious attention across the globe and becoming a major concern in our society today.on june 30, drunk driving in nanjing resulted in five deaths and four injuries. such traffic accidents have not only killed many people but also ruined the life of many others. harmonious society calls for people to treasure their lives as well as their family and the society itself. drivers must obey the laws and say “no” to drunk driving.to our relief, some laws and regulations have been worked out to punish those who drive after drinking. however, i believe that more can be done to prevent things from getting worse. for one thing, severe punishment should be carried out without mercy. for another, the sale of alcohol should be limited in restaurants.for the sake of safety, pedestrians can never be too careful while crossing streets and all people should never run red lights. only when everybody obeys traffic rules can we enjoy a happier life.2016书面表达训练某校校园网准备为高三毕业生开辟一个英语专栏，现面向全校征稿。请你以“an unforgettable experience in my high school”为题，用英语写一篇短文，记述自己高中课余生活中的一件有意义的事并谈谈感想。注意：1.开头已为你写好， 不计入总词数； 2.词数120左右。 an unforgettable experience in my high school how time flies! it will be only a month before i graduate from high school . but there are some experiences i will never forget. 【参考范文】an unforgettable experience in my high schoolhow time flies! it will be only a month before i graduate from high school. but there are some experiences i will never forget. here i would like to share some with you. in recent years, the school clubs are developing vigorously and i also joined one of them, the writing brush calligraphy interest group.every thursday after school, we gather in our school library. after being handed out paper, writing brushes and ink, we begin to observe the teachers demonstration attentively, and imitate every character written on the blackboard. sometimes we have a heated discussion to learn from each other among the group members , and every week we copy out some ancient poems.in the past three years, i have made great progress in writing with a brush .some of my assignments have been exhibited and i was often praised by my teachers. in a word, not only does the calligraphy practice give me a lot of physical and mental pleasure, but also offers me a chance to have a better understanding of traditional culture.【2014陕西省商南县高级中学高三上二模】书面表达（满分30分）假定你是李华。你的笔友jane最近因为学业繁重，身体感到不适，严重影响了学习。因此，她发e-mail给你，寻求你的帮助。请你根据以下要点提示予以回复。写作要点：1合理的饮食；2适度的锻炼；3充足的睡眠。4. 注意： 1短文词数不少于100； 2开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；3可根据情况增减细节，详略得当；dear jane,im sorry to hear that you are feeling ill these days. _best wishes.yours sincerely，li hua【参考答案】书面表达：【one possible version】dear jane,im sorry to hear that you are feeling ill these days. in your letter you asked me how to stay healthy and keep attentive in class. here is my advice.first, have three meals a day and never neglect your breakfast. keep a balanced diet. for example, eat nutritious food like fresh vegetables, fruits, eggs and fish. second, taking morning exercise every day is a nice choice. as we all know, everyday exercise helps build a strong body. you can do some sports, such as running, walking, or playing ball games to refresh yourself if weather permits. but, remember not to exercise outdoors in a smoggy day. finally, dont stay up too late to make sure you have a good sleep every night.if you do accordingly, i believe youll feel well soon and you can listen to your teacher energetically and attentively.best wishes.yours sincerely，li hua2016书面表达训练 高中生考入大学后，是否要立即为其配备笔记本电脑呢？对此，有人赞同，有人反对。请你根据下列表格的内容写一篇英语短文，并发表你的看法。 支持者 反对者a. 是对子女奋发努力取得好成绩的肯定和奖励b. 方便今后的学习，随时随地地可以上网查阅资料1. 给有些家庭增加了经济负担2. 大学学习条件比较优越，有足够的计算机房供学生使用你的看法（至少两点）注意：1. 对所给要点逐一陈述并适当发挥，不要简单翻译。3. 词数100左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。is it necessary for freshmen to have a laptop when they go to university? different people have different ideas. 【参考范文】is it necessary for freshmen to have a laptop when they go to university? different people have different ideas. the supporters think that students deserve a laptop as an award for their great efforts and achievements. in addition, having a laptop in hand will bring m