读后续写--Arthur.ppt

ContinuationWriting 读后续写 读后续写 提供一篇350词以内的材料 要求考生依据材料内容 所给段落开头语及所标关键词续写一篇150词左右的短文 满分25分 新高考考试说明 评分原则 本题总分为25分 分5个档次给分 Step1 Readforbasicinformation 1 tone 情节基调 AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday funny ahappyending Step1 Readforbasicinformation oneday whenhewasonthewaytowork alongParkAvenueneartheFirstNationalBank Arthur ayoungman Arthurhelpedayoungmancarryasuitcasebutmadehimselfasuspectofthebankrobbery 2 content 6W Howwillthestorydevelop When Where What How Who Why thesuitcaseinhishand Mainidea Oneday ArthurhelpedayoungmancarryasuitcasealongParkAvenueneartheFirstNationalBank butmadehimselfasuspectofthebankrobbery Step2 Predictpossibleplotdevelopment Theunderlinedkeywords ParkAvenuetheyoungmansuitcaseinthebackseatloudnoiseofanalarmthebankrobberytheshoutspeoplethebankthief Tip1 Thekeywordsthatrespectivelystandforthemostimportantinformation themaincharacterandthemainobjectshouldbechoseninyourwriting Step2 Predictpossibleplotdevelopment Findoutthekeyclues 线索 basedonthebeginnings Para1 Ashewasrunning Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind Stop stop Para2 ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur isinsidethesuitcase What Step2 Predictpossibleplotdevelopment tone funny ahappyending money otherthings Tip2 Focusonthegivensentenceofparagraph2first Andsomeinformationinitmustbementionedinparagraph1 Tip3 Usethekeynounsinthegivensentencestoinfermoreinformation KeyWords ParkAvenuetheyoungmansuitcaseinthebackseatloudnoiseofanalarmthebankrobberytheshoutspeoplethebankthiefParagraph1 Ashewasrunning Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind Stop stop Twocharacters ArthurandtheyoungmanArthurmightrealizethattheyoungmanwasthebankthief Arthurtookataxiandwenttothepolicestation Theyoungmanwantedtogethissuitcaseback Theremaybesomemoneyorsomethingelseinthesuitcase Theyoungmanmay not bethebankthief Paragraph2 ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur Para1 Para2 Para1 2 Tip4 Usethecharactersandtheiractionstoinfermoreinformation Step2 Predictpossibleplotdevelopment Paragraph2 ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur Arthurtookataxiandwenttothepolicestation InParagraph1 Arthurmighthavesaidsomethingtothetaxidriver Forexample Sir pleasetakemetothepolicestationquickly Ihavesomethingimportanttoreporttothepoliceman WhatwillArthurdointhePoliceStation InParagraph2 theremaybeaconversationbetweenArthurandthepoliceman Tip5 Writeproperconversationsbetweentherelatedcharactersineachparagraph Step2 Predictpossibleplotdevelopment Haveatry Paragraph1 Ashewasrunning Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind Stop stop Arthurmightrealizethattheyoungmanwasthebankthief Arthurtookataxiandwenttothepolicestation Arthurmighthavesaidsomethingtothetaxidriver Forexample Sir pleasetakemetothepolicestationquickly Ihavesomethingimportanttoreporttothepoliceman Correct logical reasonable richinvocabularyandsentencepatternUnderlinethekeywords Step3 Draftacontinuation 起草续篇 Paragraph1 Ashewasrunning Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind Stop stop Arthurrealizedthattheyoungmanwasthebankthief Hecontinuedrunning stoppedataxiandgotintoit Hesaidtothetaxidriver PleasegotothePoliceStationassoonaspossible Ihavearobberytoreporttothepoliceman Thenthetaxiwentaway Whichkindismoresuitable therefore however inaddition besides what smore furthermore onthecontrary ontheotherhand unfortunately suddenly allofasudden tohisjoy worriedabout withthehelpof addsomedetails Usedifferentstructures Usetransitionalwords 衔接词 Step4 Polishyourwriting Paragraph1 Ashewasrunning Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind Stop stop Arthurrealizedthattheyoungmanwasthebankthief Hecontinuedrunning stoppedataxiandgotintoit Hesaidtothetaxidriver PleasegotothePoliceStationassoonaspossible Ihavearobberytoreporttothepoliceman Thenthetaxiwentaway addsomedetails Usedifferentstructures Usetransitionalwords Givemysuitcasebacktome Hearingthis Arthurimmediatelyrealizedthattheyoungmanwasthebankthief Sohecontinuedrunninguntilhestoppedataxi Thenhequicklygotintoitandsatinthebackseat Outofbreath breathlessly Arthursaidtothetaxidriver Themomentthetaxidrivergottherequest hedrovestraighttothepolicestationwithouthesitation likeanarrow straighttothepolicestation Step4 Polishyourwriting Paragraph1 Ashewasrunning Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind Stop stop Givemysuitcasebacktome Hearingthis Arthurimmediatelyrealizedthattheyoungmanwasthebankthief Sohecontinuedrunninguntilhestoppedataxi Thenhequicklygotintoitandsatinthebackseat Outofbreath Arthursaidtothetaxidriver PleasegotothePoliceStationassoonaspossible Ihavearobberytoreporttothepoliceman Themomentthetaxidrivergottherequest hedrovestraighttothepolicestationwithouthesitation addsomedetails usedifferentstructures propertransition Step4 Polishyourwriting Haveatry Paragraph2 ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur InParagraph2 theremaybeaconversationbetweenArthurandthepoliceman Theyoungmanwantedtogethissuitcaseback Theremaybesomemoneyorsomethingelseinthesuitcase Theyoungmanmay not bethebankthief Step3 Draftacontinuation coherent correct logical reasonable richinvocabularyandsentencepatterns Underlinethekeywords ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthurranintoit shouting there sabankrobberyandIknowthebankthief QuicklyafterArthurtoldhisstory thepolicemenstartedtorushtothebankwithoutdelay Whentheyarrivedatthespot theyweresurprisedtofindthatthepeoplewhogatheredbeforethebankwerenowcrowdedaroundtheyoungman whoseemedquiteworried Finally Arthurrealizedthathehadmadeamistake Theloudnoiseofthealarmwasincorrectlymadebythebank ssystemandnothinghappenedtothebank buttheyoungmanwasworriedthatsomeonehadstolenhissuitcase Paragraph1 Ashewasrunning Arthurheardtheyoungmanshouting 动作 behind Stop stop Andatthatmoment 时间 Arthursuddenly 时间 realized 心理 thatmaybe 心理 theyoungmanwasthebankrobber Arthurwasabitfrightended 情感 andhecontinuedtorush 动作 untilhesawataxi Hestoppedit jumpedinwiththesuitcaseandtold 动作 thedriver Gotothepolicestation please Themanshouting 动作 behindisthebankthief Thetaxiracedawaylikethewind Paragraph2 ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStat