XX年雅思流程图小作文范文.doc

XX年雅思流程图小作文范文 优秀范文赏析(一)： Howtomakechocolate Thediagramshowsthestagesintheprocessofmakingchocolate. 【所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时。流程图必备三个词：process：整个过程,stage：阶段，step：步骤】 Chocolateesfromthecacaotree,whichisgrowninpartsofSouthAmerica,AfricaandIndonesia. 【开头不能冲上来就直接介绍cacaotree，而是通过主题词chocolate引出，否则显得太唐突】Thetreeproduceslargeredpodswhichcontainwhitecocoabeans.Firstly,whenthepodsareripe,theyareharvested,thebeansareremovedandtheyarefermentedforseveraldaysinlargewoodenboxes. 【三个句子的并列：“句子A，句子Band句子C”。】 Duringthefermentingprocess,thebeansturnbrown. 【流程图特点之五：要适当地添加个别图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来的的一些内容，否则可能达不到字数要求。但是一定要把握尺度，千万不要加上自己的主观观点，否则会扣分】 Next,thebrownbeansarespreadinthesuntodry.Theyarethenputinlargesacksandtransportedbytrainorlorry.Afterthis,thebeansaretakentoachocolatefactorywheretheyareroastedinanovenattemperaturesofbetween250and350degreeCelsius. Afterbeingroasted,thebeansarecrushedandtheoutershellisremoved.Thispartisnotneededformakingchocolate.Finally,theinnerpartofthebeanispressedandliquidchocolateisproduced. 优秀范文赏析(二)： Brickmanufacturing *Clay:typeofstickyearththatisusedformakingbricks,pots,etc. 【满分范文】 Theprocessbywhichbricksaremanufacturedforthebuildingindustrycanbeoutlinedinsevenconsecutivesteps.Firsttherawmaterial,clay,whichwasjustbelowthesurfaceofsoilincertainclay-richareashastobedugupbyadigger. Thenthelumpsofclayareplacedonametalgridinordertobreakupthebigchunksofclayintomuchsmallerareas,whichfallthroughthemetalgridontoaroller,whosemotionfurthersegregatesthebitsofclay.Sandandwaterareaddedtomakeahomogenousmixture,whichistheneitherformedinmouldsorcutintobrick-shapedpiecesbymeansofawirecutter. Thosefreshbricksarethenkeptinadryingovenforatleast24andamaximumof48hours,severaldozensifnothundredsofbricksatatime.Thedriedbricksarethentransferredtoaso-calledkiln,anothertypeofhightemperatureoven.Firsttheyarekeptatamoderatetemperatureof200-1300.Thisprocessisfollowedbycoolingdownthefinishedbricksfor48to72hoursinacoolingchamber. Oncethebrickshavecooleddownandhavebeehard,theygetpackagedanddeliveredtotheirfinaldestination,beitabuildingsiteorstorage. (215words) 1.xx雅思写作表格题小作文参考范文 2.xx雅思写作Task1小作文满分范文 3.xx雅思作文政府类预测范文 4.x