英语书面表达之漫画写作.ppt

英语书面表达之漫画写作 2010年江苏高考作文新增图画型作文 这种题型更能考查学生的分析问题的能力 因此深受命题者的青睐 考生应注意认真审题 一旦审题有所偏颇 不容易得到高分 此类作文首先要描述图画 然后介绍图画背后所反映的问题 最后联系实际发表自己的观点 漫画作文 议论类 攻略 读图 解意 谋篇 1 读图1 漫画的题目眼睛2 漫画的画面细节3 漫画的文字观点4 漫画的夸张寓意 2 解意1 辨明褒贬 找准角度 联系生活 明晰主旨注意 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息 clues 切记要认真阅读 3 谋篇 3parts 1 describethepicture2 interpretitsmeaning3 giveyouropinionsaboutthephenomenon Someusefullsentencestructures Part1DescribethepictureThepictureistalkingabout shows Thepictureshowsacommonphenomenon Thepicturedescribesaninterestingphenomenon Inthepicture thereare is are doing Thepictureaboveisabout Let slookatthepictureabove first Part2InterpretthepictureItseemsveryridiculousthat However thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere Thepictureshowsthat Itistheexactreflectionof Thepictureindicatethatwe Nowadays itisacommonphenomenonthat Thisisasatirical 讽刺的 cartoonwhichdescribesvividlyakindofcommonphenomenonamong Part3GiveyouropinionsIthink believethatAsfarasI mconcerned Inmyopinion Frommypointofview should Itisbetter advisableto Iconsideritnecessary PartCPolishupyourarticle 1 Touselinkingwordsifnecessary表示平行 对等或选择关系and aswellas togetherwith notonly butalso 表示转折关系but however inspiteof although otherwise while表示对比关系onthecontrary insteadof ononehand ontheotherhand 表示因果关系so therefore asaresult of because owingto dueto thanksto 表示时间顺序关系first second then next finally foronething foranother intheend 表示递进 强调关系besides what smore inaddition worsestill aboveall表示解释 说明关系suchas forexample forinstance inotherwords andsoon表示结论inshort inbrief inaword ingeneral onthewhole inconclusion 2 Tousecomplicatedstructuresifpossible PartD注意1 保证三要素 体裁 时态 人称正确体裁 议论文时态 一般现在时人称 第三人称 避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误1 误解图意大忌 2 企图幽默可笑 3 不明寓意白写 4 中心不明混乱 控制字数 没话说PK太啰唆 结尾要精辟 Conclusion 一篇好的英语漫画作文 仔细审题 准确立义 规范行文 整洁书写 注意 1 仔细品味图中文字的幽默 无奈 要适当发挥想象 不要做简单描述 2 词数150左右 Tomostoftheparents itisnoeasyjobtokeeptheirchildrenawayfromthepersonalcomputer NearlyallparentsarethinkingofthemosteffectivewaystomaketheInternetsaferfortheirchildren Theirsolutionsareasfollows SomeofthemthinkadvancedhardwarecanbeequippedintocomputersfornetworksecuritywhilesomeparentsprefersecuritysoftwareavailableontheInternet Ifthesedon twork theywillcoverthescreenwithunderweartoprotecttheirchildrenfromharmfulinformation Nowadaysitiswellknownthatteenagernetworksecurityhasbecomesoseriousthatthewholesocietyfocusesonit Inmyopinion muchattentionshouldbepaidtothisissue Asparents theyaresupposedtocommunicatewiththeirchildrentohelpthemmakegooduseoftheInternetwiththeirstudy Additionally itisourgovernment sresponsibilitiestotakeactionstocreateagreenerInternetenvironment Asforourselves weshouldbuildupstrongself awareness Itisimportantforustoconcentrateontheusefulinformationratherthancomputergamesandsoon IfonlyIcouldkeeparealbird 下图描绘的是现在人类面临的窘境 请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文 描述这种现象 说明其产生的原因及后果 并发表你的看法 Nowadays humanbeingsarefacedwithanembarrassingsituation Inthecartoon wecanseeamantalkingtoapaperbirdkeptinhiscageandbesidehimisavastdesertdottedwithendlesstreeroots Obviously birdshavelosttheirhomesaspeoplehavecutdownallthetrees Asaresult humanshavelosttheiranimalfriends Thescenemayseemridiculousandunbelievabletous butitmaybecomearealityinthefutureifwegoondevelopingeconomyregardlessofthe damagecausedtotheenvironment Nowinsomeplaces treeshavebeencutdownwithoutlimits Somescientistssaythattherewillbenovastforestsin20or30yearsandmanyspecieswilldieout Itisreallyaterriblething Therefore weshouldrealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectionandliveinharmonywithouranimalfriends 随着人民生活水平的提高 人们愈发关注食品质量安全 三鹿 奶粉事件引起人们广泛关注 商家的社会责任感与企业道德 人们健康的相关法律保证 根据下图写一篇150词左右的短文 可以切合题意有所发挥 短文首句已给出 不记入总词数 Aswecanseefromthecartoon manufacturers milkstations milkcowsandevengrassaretryinginvaintomakeexcusesforthemisconduct Aftercarefulconsideration wecometorealizethatthedrawerwishestocallourattentiontothelackofsocialresponsibilityandbusinessethics Withthechangeofpeople sideology peopletakeitforgrantedthatwemakeafortune Drivenbythepursuitofprofit somemanufacturersgotoextremestomakemoneybyproviding thecustomerswithfakeorinferiorproducts Acaseinpointis Sanlumilkpowder whichisconfirmedtocontainapoisonouschemical Asaresult numerousinnocentinfantsbecomethevictimsofthemilkfood Inthelongrun suchillegalactsnotonlydamagethedairyindustry butthecredibilityofthesocialmechanism Tomymind itishightimewetookeffectivemeasurestopreventsuchcrimefromhappeningagain Itisadvisabletopassrelatedlawstopunish whoeverproducespoisonousfood Onlyinthiswaycanweestablishaharmonioussocietywheremanufacturestakeupmoresocialresponsibilityandcredibilityandpeopleenjoyhealthyfood 2010年1月份 上海同济 华师大 华东理工 上外和东华等6所高校 在自主招生的理科考试中无一例外地选择了放弃考语文 根据这一现象结合下图谈谈你的看法 提示 1 英语是国际交流的工具2 世界上学汉语的的人越来越多3 母语的重要 Recently sixuniversitiesinShanghaimadeEnglishlanguagecompulsoryintheirjointexams andleftoutChinese ThereisnodoubtthattheEnglishlanguageisaveryimportantmediumofeducation Butthatisnoreasonwhyweshouldforgettheimportanceofourmothertongueandtraditionsandculture ItistheChineselanguagethatmakesChinaanation Oncewehaveathoughtthatourmothertongueisnotimportant our nationwillbeindanger WiththedevelopmentofChina Chinesehasbecomeaworldwidelanguage ManypeopleintheworldstarttolearnChinese BeingtheChinese weshouldfeelproudofourmothertongue Chineseisoneoftheoldestlanguagesintheworld Youshouldloveyourmotherlanguageifyouwanttoloveyournation Therefore weshouldviewourmothertongueasanecessity Onlythroughourownlanguagecanourculturefindgloryittrulydeserves 下图反映的是网络时代所出现的一种问题 有些孩子沉溺于网上交流而忽视了与父母的沟通 请你根据对该漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文 该文应包含以下要点 1 该漫画告诉了我们什么 2 你对此现象的看法3 我们该如何主动和父母亲沟通 漫画caricature Moderntechnologyhasmanyadvantages WhileweenjoythefunandconvenienceoftheInternet wealsoexperiencesomenewproblems Thiscaricaturedescribesoneofthem Itshowsthattheteenageboyisenjoyingchattingonlinesomuchthatherefusestotalktohisparent Ithinkitmightbecommon butitistotallyunacceptable Nothingcanreplaceface to facecommunicationnomatterhoweasyorinterestingitisforustochatwithpeoplefromacrosstheworldontheInternet InmostChinesefamilies thereisonlyonechild Obviously wearethecentreofourparents attention Manyparentsarewillingtodoanythingtomakesurethatweliveagoodlife Itisunderstandablethattheywanttoknowwhat shappeningtous whatkindoffriendswemakeandhowwearegettingonwithourstudies Ithinkweshouldletthemknowuswell Forexample wecantellthemwhat sgoingoninschoolwhenwehavedinnerorturntothemforadvicewhenwehaveproblems Inthatway I msuretherelationshipbetweenusandourparentswillbecomebetterandbetter 请根据下列表格中所提供的材料 结合你的生活经历 展开想象 以学生的身份用英语写一篇短文 Weallhavesomekeysinlife somevisibleandothersinvisible Visiblekeysplayanimportantpartinourlife makingourlifeconvenientandcomfortable Ifwelosethembyaccident wetendtogetintoamess Thesameistrueofinvisiblekeysinthecourseofourstudyandgrowth Teachers guidanceisofgreatbenefittoourgainingknowledge Parents wordsofcomfortandencouragementhelpusbuildupconfidence Withthehelpofourfriends we relikelytoovercomedifficultyandsucceed Wefeelgreatlyhonoredtohaveaccesstotheseinvisiblekeys whicharepricelessgiftsinourdailylife Inaword akeyistoamanwhatwateristofish Whetherthekeysarevisibleorinvisible theyarewellworthtreasuring Onlybymakingfulluseofthemcanweopenthedoorofsuccessandmakegreatcontributionstooursociety 左图描绘的是某家心理诊疗所医生正向病人介绍治病良方的漫画 请你根据对这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文 并发表你的看法 Injustsixhoursyouwillbecuredofyourfearofsnak