高中英语写作讲评.ppt

高中英语写作讲评 Thecomputerismoreandmorewidelyused Youngpeopleliketochatonline Whentheyarechatting theydon tcareabouttheirwriting Therehavemanywrongcharactersintheircompositions too Everyday theyhavemanyhomework Theycan trememberthecharacters Thegovernmenthascarriedoutanewpolicy ItwillmakepeoplepayattentiontoChinese ItwillhelpstudentslearnChinesewell Wedon thavemuchtime It shightimethatwetookaction Wecandevelopourcountrybyimprovingourmothertonguefirst Howdoyougradeit 定档 Andwhy homeworkshow Let simproveit Let simproveit Let simproveit Let simproveit Summary paragraphs topicsentence details tothepoint advancedvocabulary sentencepatterns linkingwords structure content language writing fewmistakes 目前 不少年轻人在写作中喜欢使用网络语言 某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法 请你参考所给要点 写一篇英语短文 有的同学认为 幽默 时尚 好玩有的同学认为 有错别字 不利于语文学习 有时难以理解你的看法 Nowadays manyteenagersliketousetheweblanguageintheirwriting Somestudentsthinkitishumorousandcool Theyusetheweblanguage Theyfeelit sfun Somethinkitisdifficult Theycannotunderstand Whentheyarechattingonline theydon tcareabouttheirwriting Therehavesomewrongly writtencharacters ItisbadforChineselearning Ithinkwecanusetheweblanguageandwecanexpressourselvesmorefreely Improvethecomposition Focusontopicsentences advancedvocabulary patternsandlinkingwords Youcannotteachamananything youcanonlyhelphimfinditwithinhimself GalileoGalilei Homework Furtherimprovethewritingaccordingtotheassessmentform Makeyourfinalcopyasneataspossible Let sdivideitintoparts Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 Thecomputer rememberthecharacters Thegovernment helpstudentslearnChinesewell It shightimethatwe byimprovingourmothertonguefirst Part2 Todealwiththesituation thegovernmentcarryoutanewpolicy Part3 AsfarasIamconcerned it shightimethatwetookaction Part1 Itiscommonthattherearemanywrongly writtencharactersinastudent scomposition Comeupwiththetopicsentences Atopicsentencetellsthereaderwhatacertainpartisabout TopicsentenceforPart2 TopicsentenceforPart3 TopicsentenceforPart1 computer homework raisetheawarenessof haveapositiveeffecton Whichendingdoyoulikebest Why Inmyopinion thepolicyisbeneficialtous Itmakessenseinprotectingourculture b AsfarasIamconcerned it shightimethatwetookaction Weshouldcollectthemistakesandreviewthemfrequently Onlybyhardworkingcanweachieveourgoal theydon tcareabouttheirwriting Therehavemanywrongcharactersintheircompositions too Everyday theyhavemanyhomework whenyoungpeoplechatonline theyattachlittleimportancetotheirwriting withsomuchhomeworktodo theyhavetroublememorizingthecharacters Thenewpolicyisintendedtodealwiththesituation Raisingthesocialawarenessofourmothertongue itwillhaveapositiveeffectonChineselearning it shightimethatwetookaction weshouldrefertoadictionaryforunknowncharacters Second collectthemistakesandreviewthemfrequently Inaword onlybyworkinghardcanweachieveourgoal Thereareseveralreasonsbehind B AsfarasIamconcernedC ForexampleD Moreover E Firstofall A C D B E Whentheyarechatting theydon tcaretheirwriting Everyday theyhavemuchhomework Theyaretoobusytorememberthecharacters Itwillmakepeoplepayattentiontoourmothertongue ItwillhelpstudentslearnChinesewell Canyouimprovethem Whentheyarechatting theydon tcaretheirwriting Whenchatting theydon tcaretheirwriting Ellipsis省略句 Everyday theyhavemuchhomework Theycan trememberthecharacters Theyhavesomuchhomeworktodothattheyfailtorememberthecharacters so that failtodo with Withsomuchhomeworktodo theyhavetroubleinrememberingthecharacters Itwillmakepeoplepayattentiontoourmothertongue raisetheawarenessof Itwillraisetheawarenessofourmothertongue ItwillhelpstudentslearnChinesewell haveapositiveeffecton Itwillhaveapositiveeffectonstudents Chineselearning Itwillraisetheawarenessofourmothertongue Itwillhaveapositiveeffectonstudents Chineselearning theawarenessofourmothertongue itwillhaveapositiveeffectonChineselearning non verbal非谓语 notonly butalso Itwillnotonlyraisetheawarenessofourmothertongue butalsohaveapositiveeffectonstudents Chineselearning Raising Itiscommonthattherearemanywrongly writtencharactersinastudent scomposition Thereareseveralreasonsbehind Forexample whenchattingonline teenagersattachlittleimportancetotheirwriting Moreover withsomuchhomeworktodo theyhavetroublememorizingthecharacters Todealwiththesituation thegovernmentcarryoutanewpolicy Raisingthesocia