2010-2011届高三学生优秀作文选九开放作文我.doc

2010-2011届高三学生优秀作文选九 （2010年11月）高三写作练习六开放作文请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。 In an English speech competition, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to the judge how you understand it.One possible version: As is shown in the picture, a person/man/woman is walking on the Chinese character “I” with confidence. Although there is a long winding road to go, he/she still persists in his/her own way.In my opinion, the picture tries to tell us that life is like a journey, during which we may meet with difficulties and challenges. Whatever difficulties we may face, we should hold on to our own dreams. It is we ourselves who influence our success, happiness and future. We are supposed to be self-determined and self-confident. Thus we can achieve our goals.优秀学生习作一In the picture, there is a young man walking round and round. And the lane in which he is walking forms a Chinese character which means “me”. Theres no other way out and the small “me” is the only area in which he moves.This picture conveys a message that one should not focus all his attention only on himself. If you believe that the whole world goes around you and just dont want to come out from your small world, then you will have a limited span in your life just like the man in the picture. If you can change your mind and walk out, surely you will come to meet different people with different thoughts, which can enrich your life and broaden your mind.（高三1班林野）优秀学生习作二As we can see from the picture, a person is walking on the Chinese character “I”. Despite the tortuous way that she may step on, the person seems confident and courageous.Its the same with our lives. Life is just like a long journey which can be very tortuous. We may meet all kinds of challenges and difficulties along the way. Only those who are confident and willing to face them can make the life an enjoyable journey. We should also realize that its those difficulties that make our life more meaningful and colorful. So as to make our lives more colorful, we should be confident just like the person in the picture, keep walking.（高三班于子非）优秀学生习作三As is described in the picture, a woman is walking endlessly following the path in the shape of the character “myself”. Many time though she has tried, she is either returning to the same point or heading for a dead end. Trapped in “myself”, the woman cant make her way to the outside world no matter how many times she tries.In my opinion, the picture shows a problem lying in almost all of us. From time to time, we cant help being limited to the ideas of ourselves unconsciously. Under that circumstances, it is difficult for us to drag ourselves out of our own thinking and pay attention to the outside world, thus we are going in the same circulation time and time again. What we should do is to open a way out of “ourselves”, which means getting open-minded to the external world. Only in this way can we explore new aspects of life and get innovative ideas towards life instead of just hanging around the same place like the girl in the picture.（高三班 王知言）优秀学生习作四As can be seen from the picture, a man is walking on the Chinese character “I” in positive mood. Although the road is quite winding and repetitive, he seems clear about his direction and to enjoy the progress.I assert that the picture is aimed at showing us a positive attitude to know ourselves better. Living in a complex society, we usually tend to focus on advantages and disadvantages of others instead of analyzing ourselves calmly. In fact, neglect of what we truly are sometimes is the biggest obstacle in our way to success. If a person, just like the man shown in the picture, can exactly know his inside world, he can be more optimistic than others for he will always know what he needs and what he should do.All in all, it is important to be completely aware of ourselves but not others. After all, everyone lives his own life. （高三班 孙嘉曦）优秀学生习作五In the picture, there is a man walking on a big Chinese word which means “I” in English. He looks confidently, but he never knows that he is stuck in a circle and cant walk out of it.The scene can also be found in our daily life. All of us may walk into ourselves, sometimes, not on the real road, but in our minds. We cant listen to others advice, which may lead to our failures. Thats all because of our over-confidence. It really do harm to everyone.I think we need to find the way to get over it so that we can make greater progress. And to the man in the picture, I want to say: “Turn right now, get rid of the circle and youll succeed then.” （高三8班 刘容辉）优秀学生习作六The picture shows a person walking in the Chinese character “wo”, which means “me” “myself”. She is so much absorbed in herself that she cannot walk out.The phenomenon is also common in society. Many people only concentrate on themselves. Instead of making contributions to the world, they only expect much more from others. Hence they become self-centered, having no tolerance to others and no interest in the outside world. It causes them to lose friends and in the end, affects their own living standards. To change this situation, they ought to pay more attention to others and consider more of the outside rather than their own. This will help them walk out of the overwhelming “me.” (高三11班 杨帆)优秀学生习作七As is shown in the picture, a boy walks on his own way happily and after his great efforts, he finally achieves his goalmaking the route as a large Chinese word which means “me” in English.The picture conveys a message that our own lives and our own characters are all determined by ourselves, just like the boy in the picture, he knows which ways to go and he sets up his own dream. After being clear about what he wants to be like in the future, he starts to walk on his own, energetically and delightedly. The walking route is determined by himself and views