英语四级作文(总复习).ppt

四级作文评分标准 阅卷标准分为五等 2分 5分 8分 11分及14分 每一等都可上下浮动一分 各等的具体标准如下 14分 切题 表达思想清楚 文字通顺 连贯性较好 基本无语言错误 11分 切题 表达思想清楚 文字连贯 但有少量语言错8分 基本切题 表达思想比较清楚 文字尚连贯 但语言错误较多 其中有少量的严重错误 5分 基本切题 表达思想不够清楚 连贯性差 有较多的严重语言错误 2分 条理不清 思路紊乱 语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误 且多数为严重错误 例 Trees 为题目的作文 Treesareman sfriends Wecanseetreeseverywhere Weplanttreeseveryyear Wecanmaketableswithtrees Treesalsogiveusfruitstoeat Iliketoeatfruitsverymuch 切题 修改后 Treesareman sfriends Theyprovidemanwithtimber fruitsandseeds Withtimber mancanbuildhousesandmakefurniture Fruitsarethefood whichisnecessarytouseveryday Asforseeds theycanbeusedtoextractoil 2002年12月四级考试作文Directions Forthispart youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopic ItpaystoBeHonest Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese 1 当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 2 诚实利人利己 做人应该诚实 14points 切题 表达思想清楚 文字通顺 连贯性较好 基本无语言错误 Althoughhonestyisbelievedtobeavirtue therearestilldishonestpeopleinoursociety Forexample somebusinessmensellfakeproducttotheirconsumers somestudentscheatintheexams Dishonestpeopleareshort sighted Thosewhosellfakeproductsmaymakemoneyatfirst butconsumerswon tbuytheirproductsanymore Asaresult theywilllosetheirfortuneorevenbesenttoprison Bycontrast honestpeoplegainalot Thosewhoalwaystelltruthorkeeptotheirpromisenotonlyletotherstrustthembutalsogainrespectfromotherpeopleaswell Suchpersonsaresuretohavealotofgoodfriends Becausetheyaretrustableandrespectable everyoneiseagertomakefriendswiththem Besides itiseasierforapersonwithagoodrecordtogetagoodjob Generallyspeaking everyemployerwantshisemployeestobehonest Sowecansaythatanyonewhoishonestwillbepaidbacklater Inaword honestywinstrust respectandhonor Soitisimportantthatweshouldbehonest 11points 切题 表达思想清楚 文字连贯 但有少量语言错Nowadays manypeoplechoosenotbehonestinourmodernsociety Wealmostcanfindsuchthingseverydayofourlife somestudentscheatintheexamforhighermarks somecorporationstellwrongdatatothepublicinordertogetmoreinvestment andsomedoctorstreattheirpatientswithunnecessaryandexpensivemedicinesinordertomakemoney sometimes 主语 damagedthepatient shealth eventheirlife Seeingthissituation Ithinkitmustbechanged 诚实带来的好处 Beinghonestwillbenefitnotonlyothers butalsoourselves First yourhonestywillmakeotherswillingtotrustyou Second beinghonestcanleadyoutofaceyourproblembravely whichhelpstosolveit Andthelast honestysurelyhelpstomakethesocietymoreharmony So Ithinkeveryoneshouldstarttobehonestandeveryoneshouldhavetheideathatoursocietycannotdowithouthonesty 8points 基本切题 表达思想比较清楚 文字尚连贯 但语言错误较多 其中有少量的严重错误 Inourmodernsociallife therearemanyexamplesaroundusshowmanypeoplearecheated 举例衔接 Advertisementscheatpeople salesmencheatpeople evenone sclosestfriendscheathimorher Somanyheartbreaksareheardeverydaythatwecannothelpasking whereisourhonestexist Everybodyistaughthonestintheprimaryschooloreveninthekindergarten 诚实的好处 Honestydoesgoodnotonlytoourselves buttoothersaswell Ifwearehonesttoothers wewillbehappierandbeinabettermood Otherwise we llfeelguiltyatlast Toacompanyanditsadvertisement honestywillbringitmoreconsumerandmoreprofit Ifwecheatothers friendswillnotbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone Toacompany noconsumerwillbuyyourproductagain So astheaboveissaid itpaystobehonest Let screateamorallyoutstandingsocial 5points 基本切题 表达思想不够清楚 连贯性差 有较多的严重语言错误 Withthedevelopmentofmoderneconomicandindustry competitiveisbecomingmoreandmoreobvious 跑题 Atthesametime theperformanceofdishonestisbecomingmoreandmoreclearly 无例子 Nowadays therearemanydishonestperformanceinoursociety 举例 利弊 Forexample somepeoplefoundthathesaledgoodshadpastthepreservationdate 主语 Notthrowthemaway therevisedthepreservationdateandsaledthemagainafterseveralday Anothercaseinthepoint apairofshoeswasmadefromgoat However inordertosaleatahighprice thesalerswouldsaytheyweremadefromcowwhichhasgoodquality Fromtheforegoing wecanseethatdishonestdoesnotonlyharmtoyourselvesbutalsoharmtoothers Anditisnouseonlyrealizetheharmnessofdishonest Weshouldbehonestfromnowonandbehonestonourdailylife Itisonlythatpeopleallovertheworldarehonestthenourcountrywillbebeautifulandwealthy 2points 条理不清 思路紊乱 语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误 且多数为严重错误 Nowinoursociety manypeoplearenothonestindoingsoming weoftencanmeetwithsominghappenedcausebypeoplewhoarenothonest Forexample Nowwetakethebusneedcarrycentsown andwhenyouupstairsthebus youshouldputthecentintothemoneybox Everypeopledothat butsomeofthepeopleputtheotherthingsinsteadthecents Foranotherexample itismorenormalthatintheexamswecanalwaysfindsomestudentsseeothers Iconsiderthateverypeopleshouldbehonest Asapeople honestshouldbefirst becauseitcanmakeustobeincreaseandmakeoursocietydevelop Indoingeverythingweshouldbehonestall study work lifeandsoon Ifyourehonest everypeoplewillbefriendtoyou andwhowillregardyougoodpeople Butifyoudon tbehonest peoplemustunwillingtotrathwithyou Soifyouarewanttobeagoodpeople rememberhonestfirst 评分时还考虑以下三个因素 l 白卷 作文与题目毫不相关 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想 则给零分 2 字数不足者酌情扣分81 89 1分 7l 80 2分 61 70 3分 51 60 4分 不足50最多给5分3 只写一段者0 4分 只写两段者0 9分 作文最低分的规定 1 作文分为0分 总分若高于60分 最后报导一律按59分不及格处理 若低于60分则报导时一律再减6分 2 作文分大于0分 小于6分 则按下面的公式计算成绩 最后报导分 原计算总分 6分 实得作文分 高分作文标志 1 四级 120 150 六级 150 180 2 结构合理三段式 4 层次清晰 3 中心突出主题句 将提纲的中文提示改写成主题句放于段首 1 首先 tobeginwith firstly firstandforemost inthefirstplace2 其次 besides inaddition moreover furthermore inthesecondplace3 最后 thirdly finally lastly lastbutnotleast最后4 foronething foranotherthing5 ononehand ontheotherhand 5 词汇闪光 亮点句 1 词汇 A 词汇不重复 5个常用单词的替代 1 think claim suggest believe advocate maintain suppose2 good beneficial profitable helpful sound decent positive3 bad harmful detrimental hazardous negative4 advantage merit virtue benefit profit pro5 disadvantage demerit drawback flaw shortcoming con cost B 多实少虚 恰当 准确 形象 好 虚词 good nice 空洞 实词 generous humorous smart gentle warm hearted hospitable 走 走出房间 walkoutoftheroom 空洞 小偷 slip sneakoutoftheroom小姐 sailoutoftheroom小孩 danceoutoftheroom老人 staggeroutoftheroom C 短语优先 Iwanttodothat I mlookingforwardtothat Icannotbear endureit Icannotputupwithit A 长短句交叉 变换句型 被动代替主动 weshouldpayattentionto Attentionshouldbepaidto Ithink believe Itisthought believedthat 2 句子 B 使用插入语 副词 连接词 同位语等作插入语however therefore forexample Ibelieve1 Otherindividuals however taketheattitudethat 2 Oneday itissaid Newtonsawanapplefallfromatree 3 Mrs Wang myfavoriteteacher givesmeconsiderableencouragement C 加定语从句 状语从句等 Thefirstreasonwhichtheypointoutisthat Thesecondreasontheymaintainisthat Alsoplayingapartisthat 6 避免低级错误 错 Youtakenmetoyourhome andcookedme andsaid Daddy Iwashyouhappy 正 Youtookmetoyourhome andcookedforme andyousaid Baby Iwishyouhappy 1997 011 怎样理解 熟能生巧 2 例如 在英语学习中 3 又如 1997 06MyViewonJob hopping1 大学生了解社会的必要性 2 了解社会的途径 大众媒介 社会服务等 3 我打算怎么做 1998 01HarmfulnessofFakeCommodities1 目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品 为什么会有这种现象2 举例说明说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人社会的危害1998 06DoLuckyNumbersReallyBringGoodLuck 1 有些人认为某些数字回带来运气2 也有些人认为数字与运气无关3 试说明你的看法1999 01Don tHesitatetoSay No 1 别人请求帮助时 在什么情况下我们会说不2 为什么有些人在该说不的时候不说不3 该说不时不说不的坏处 1999 06ReadingSelectivelyorExtensively1 有人认为读书要有选择2 有人认为应当博览群书3 我的看法2000 01HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation 1 上大学的费用可以通过多种途径解决2 哪种途径适合我 说明理由 2000 06IsaTestofSpokenEnglishNecessary 1 很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试 理由是2 也有人持不同意见3 我的看法和打算2001 01HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview 1 面试在求职过程中的作用2 取得面试成功的因素 仪表 举止谈吐 能力 专业知识 自信 实事求是2001 06ALettertoaFriend你的朋友即将到来 你向他写信表示欢迎 对他的到来作出安排 并提醒一些注意事项 2002 01ALettertoPresident假如你是李明 请你就本校食堂给校长写一封信 内容涉及食堂的饭菜质量价格服务等 可以是表扬 也可以是批评 可以兼而有之 2002 06StudentUseofComputers1 下图所是为1990 1995 2000年某高校大学生使用计算机的情况 请描述其变化 2 请说明发生这些变化的原因 3 你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有何困难或问题 2003 01ItPaystoBeHonest1 最近社会上出现了一些不诚实的现象 2 诚实利人利己 怎样做到诚实 2003 06AnEye witnessAccountofaCarAccident假设你在某日某时某地目击了一起车祸 就此写一份见证书 见证书须包括以下几点 1 车祸发生的时间地点2 你所见到的车祸情况3 你对车祸原因的分析 2004 01ALetterinReplytoaFriend1 建议报考的专业及理由2 报考该专业的基本条件3 应当如何备考2004 06ABriefIntroductiontoaTouristAttractionYourrule atouristguideYouraudience agroupofforeignstudentsYourintroductionshouldinclude 1 somewelcomewords2 theschedulefortheday3 adescriptionoftheplacethetouristswillbevisiting e g ascenicspotorahistoricalsite etc 2005 01ACampaignSpeech1 你认为自己具备了什么条件 能力 性格 爱好等 可以胜任学生会主席的工作 2 如果当选 你将为本校同学做些什么 2005 06AnIncident1 向老师祝贺节日2 从一件难忘的事情记述老师的教诲和无私奉献3 如何回报老师 2006 06Anannouncementforavoluntaryprogram1 校学生会组织一次暑假志愿活动 现招聘志愿者2 本次志愿者活动目的内容及安排3 报名条件和联系方式2006 12Springfestivalevening1 许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会2 但有些人提出取消春节晚会 3 我的看法 2007 06Welcometoourclub1 本社团的主要活动内容2 参加本社团的好处3 如何加入本社团2007 12Whatelectivestochoose1 各大学开设了各种各样的选修课2 学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课3 以你自己为例 2008 06Recreationalactivities1 娱乐活动多种多样2 娱乐活动可能使人们受益 也可能有危害性3 作为大学生我的看法2008 12LimitingtheUseofDisposablePlasticBags1 一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用2 由此带来的问题3 限制一次性塑料袋的意义2009 06Freeadmissiontomuseums1 越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么 2 也会带来一些问题3 你的看法2009 12Createagreencampus1 建设绿色校园十分重要2 绿色校园不仅指绿色环境3 为了建设绿色校园我们应该 2010 06DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling1 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2 出现这种情况的原因 3 这种现象导致的结果 2010 12HowshouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeindependent 1 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切2 为了让孩子独立 父母应该 2011 06OnlineShopping1 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2 网上购物有很多好处 但也有不少问题3 我的建议2011 12NothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillForthispart youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledNothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillbycommentingonthehumoroussaying Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld Ihavedoneithundredsoftimes Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words 2012 06Over packedGoods1 许多商品都存在过度包装的现象2 出现这种现象的原因及其带来的后果2012年12月 第一套试卷 ALetterApplyingforaBankLoan1 你的基本情况2 你申请贷款的原因 数额及用途3 你如何保证专款专用以及你的还款打算 第二套试卷 图表说明 EducationPays publishedeverythreeyears presentsdetailedevidenceoftheprivateandpublicbenefitsofhighereducation Italsoshedslightonthedistributionofthesebenefitsbyexaminingboththeincreasesandthepersistentdisparitiesincollegeparticipationandcompletion InthethreeyearsbetweenthepublicationofEducationPays2007andEducationPays2010 medianearningsforfour yearcollegegraduatesincreasedmorerapidlythanthoseofhighschoolgraduatesandthegapbetweentheunemploymentratesofthetwogroupsgrew Inadditiontoearningscomparisons thereportdocumentsdifferencesinlifestyles health andotheroutcomesforpeoplewithandwithoutcollegeeducation Differencesinenrollmentandcompletionpatternsacrossdemographicgroupshighlighttherealitythatgapsineducationalattainmentareexplainedbyacombinationofmoneyandotherfactors 2013 06 第一套试卷 第一套试卷 1997 1理解型议论文1997 6解决型议论文1998 1议论文1998 6议论文1999 1其他1999 6议论文2000 1解决型议论文2000 6议论文2001 1解决型议论文2001 6议论文2002 1应用文2002 6图表议论文2003 1议论文 2003 6应用文2004 6应用文2004 12应用文2005 6应用文2005 12议论文2006 6应用文 2006 12议论文2007 6应用文2007 12议论文2008 6议论文2008 12议论文2009 6议论文2009 12议论文2010 6议论文2010 12解决型议论文2011 6议论文2011 12理解型议论文2012 6议论文2012 12图表型议论文2013 6图画型议论文 议论文提纲类型 图画议论文提纲 1 描述图画2 利弊 原因 例子3 观点 措施建议 图表议论文提纲 1 描述图表2 利弊 原因 例子3 观点 措施建议 理解型议论文提纲 1 解释话语2 利弊 原因 例子3 观点总述 解决型议论文提纲 1 重要必要性2 措施建议3 观点阐述 普通议论文提纲11 社会现象2 利弊 原因3 观点 措施 例子 普通议论文提纲21 观点A2 观点B3 个人观点 段落构成 Head1 描述图画2 描述图表3 解释话语4 社会现象5 重要性必要性 Body1 利弊2 原因3 措施4 建议 Tail1 个人观点2 措施建议3 例子 2003 01ItPaystoBeHonest1 最近社会上出现了一些不诚实的现象 2 诚实利人利己 怎样做到诚实 2006 12Springfestivalevening1 许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会2 但有些人提出取消春节晚会 3 我的看法 2007 12Whatelectivestochoose1 各大学开设了各种各样的选修课2 学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课3 以你自己为例 2008 06Recreationalactivities1 娱乐活动多种多样2 娱乐活动可能使人们受益 也可能有危害性3 作为大学生我的看法 2008 12LimitingtheUseofDisposablePlasticBags1 一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用2 由此带来的问题3 限制一次性塑料袋的意义 2009 06Freeadmissiontomuseums1 越来越多的博物馆免费开放目的是什么 2 也会带来一些问题3 你的看法 2010 06DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling1 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2 出现这种情况的原因 3 这种现象导致的结果 2011 06OnlineShopping1 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2 网上购物有很多好处 但也有不少问题3 我的建议 2012 06Over packedGoods1 许多商品都存在过度包装的现象2 出现这种现象的原因及其带来的后果 普通议论文提纲11 社会现象2 利弊 原因3 观点 措施 例子 1997 06MyViewonJob hopping1 大学生了解社会的必要性 2 了解社会的途径 大众媒介 社会服务等 3 我打算怎么做 2000 01HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation 1 上大学的费用可以通过多种途径解决2 哪种途径适合我 说明理由 2001 01HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview 1 面试在求职过程中的作用2 取得面试成功的因素 仪表 谈吐 能力 专业知识 自信 实事求是 解决型议论文提纲 1 重要必要性2 措施建议3 观点阐述 Head A 描述图画 Brief Detail 语言 动作 Point 反映之主题 Thepictureshowsusadialoguebetweenafighterandason Inthepicture thesontoldhisfather Dad I mabitworriedaboutdisposingofunclearwaste Whilehisfathertoldhim Ifyoucanemptythedustbinhereyoucandoanything Itrevealstheimportanceofdoingsmallthingswellbeforeundertakingsomethingbig Asisvividlyportrayedinthecaricatureabove ateacherandakidarestandinginfrontofthestageintheclassroom Specifically theteacherishandingaclassicliteraturebooktoastudentandsaying justreaditasifyourarereadingalongtextmessage Obviously thesymbolicalmeaningistoshowustheimportanceofreadingliterature Brief有用句型 1 Asisvividlyshown described depictedinthecaricature picture 2 Asisshowninthepicture 3 Asisdescribedinthepicture 4 Asisapparentlybetrayedinthedrawingabove 5 Indicatedaboveisapicturethatvividlydescribes 6 Basically whatwecanseefromthecartoonisthat Detail有用句型 1 Itcanbeseeninthepicturethat 2 Let stakeacloserlookatthedrawing 3 Inthepicture 4 Specifically 5 Uponthesecondglace wefound Point有用句型 1 Itissafetodrawtheconclusionthat 2 Thepurposeofthepictureistoshowusthat 3 Wecandeduceformthispicturethat 4 Thepictureindicates conveysthemeaningthat 5 Obviously A 描述图表 Brief Detail 数据 ConclusionLinkage 二段过渡句 Asisshowninthetable theunemploymentratedecreasessteadilyastheeducationlevelincreases Inthechart only2 5 ofpeoplewithdoctoraldegreelosttheirjobs However theunemploymentrateofpeoplewithdegreeinferiortoMasterDegreeisrangingfrom4 9 to14 1 Thefactrevealedbythestatisticsisobvious graduateswithadegreearelesslikelytobeunemployed Quiteafewreasonscanaccountforthisphenomenon Readingthischart wecanfindthattheaveragememberofhoursastudentspendsonthecomputerperweekhasincreasedsharply Accordingtothestatisticofthechart in1990 itwaslessthan2hoursandin1995itincreasedtoalmost4hours whilein2000 thenumbersoaredto20hours Obviously studentstendtousecomputersmoreandmorenowadays Thereasonsarelistedasfollows Brief有用句型 Thebarchart piechart linegraphdisplaysthechangesof 2 Itcanbeseenfromthechatthattherehavebeendramaticchangesin 3 Fromthepicture graph chart table pie bar weknowthat 4 Thegraphillustrates 5 Theindicatorsusedinthetablereflectthat Detail有用句型 1 Accordingtothestatisticofthechart 2 Inthechart 3 Accordingtothegraph 4 Thedataappearstoconfirmthat 5 Thegraphillustrates Point有用句型 1 Fromtheanalysesabove wecandrawtheconclusionthat 2 Fromthedatawegatheredfromtheabovegraph wecanconcludethat 3 Accordingtotheinformationgatheredabove wemayreachtheconclusionthat 4 Accordingtowhathasbeendiscussedabove wecanarriveattheconclusionthat 5 Thegraphreflectsthat 数据描述常用词汇 数字figure数据data统计数据statistics数量amount列为rank比率rate 1 数字 2 表明 indicate reveal suggest imply 3 上升 上升 rise goup climbto ontherise ascend shoot增加 increase grow rocket mount猛增 surge soar暴涨 jump飞跃 leap螺旋上升 spiralupwards增大 swell迅猛增长 experienceanexplosivegrowth 4 下降 下降 decrease fall drop decline godown降到底部 reachthebottomof处于减少趋势 beonthedecline减少 reduce reduction下滑 slide暴跌 slump衰落 wane 5 平稳趋势 一致的 consistent稳定的 stable steady几乎不变 hardlychange变平稳 leveloff保持稳定 remain maintainconstant保持一致 staythesame 6 波动趋势 摇摆 swing波动 fluctuate fluctuation riseandfall upanddown 重要的 significant significantly substantial渐进的 gradual gradually缓慢的 slow slowly急剧的 drastic sharply精确地 exactly precisely几乎 almost nearly approximately剧烈的 dramatic dramatically轻微的 slight slightly稍许的 somewhat突然地 suddenly相当地 considerably急剧升降的 steep迅速的 rapid 7 程度 8 表时间 1 from to 2 duringthesameperiodoftime 1 上图为1990 1995 2000年某城市人们度假方式改变情况 2 请说明发生这些变化的原因 3 得出结论 练习 HowPeopleSpentTheirHolidays Ascanbeseenfromthetable thepastdecadehavewitnesseddramaticchangesinthewaypeoplespenttheirholidayfrom1990to2000 In1990 63 ofpeoplespenttheirholidaysathome whilethefiguredroppedconsiderablyto24 in2000 Itisobviousfromthetablethatpeopletendedtogrowmoremobile andtheywantedtogetentertainmentintheoutsideworld C 解释话语 Brief Explanation 解释 Linkage 二段过渡句 1997 011 怎样理解 熟能生巧 2 例如 在英语学习中 3 又如 Thefamoussaying Practicemakesperfect iswidelyacceptedtoday Itmeansifwepracticeunfamiliarthingsagainandagain we llbeabletoperformitperfectly Historyisfilledwithexamplesprovingmystatement 2011 12NothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillForthispart youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledNothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillbycommentingonthehumoroussaying Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld Ihavedoneithundredsoftimes Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words The Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld I vedoneithundredsoftime ishumorousbutquiteprovoking ThetruthIcangainfromthissayingisifpeoplereallywanttoquitsmokeordoanything theyshouldhangontothedecisiontotheendgutnotgiveituphalfwaythrough Therearesufficientevidencetotestifytherighteousnessofmyunderstanding Brief有用句型 1 Thefamoussaying iswidelyacceptedtoday2 ishumorousbutquiteprovoking 3 Thereisanoldsaying 4 Hardlycananyoneliveinthiscountrywithouthearing 5 Afamousproverbhandeddownfromancientagegoeslike Explanation有用句型 1 Itmeans 2 ThetruthIcangainfromthissayingis 3 Thissayingtriestotellusthat 4 Theunder meaninginthisproverbis 5 Theprofoundmeaningbehindthosewordsis 6 Thesayingaimatinformingusofatruththat D 社会现象 Phenomenon Detail 例举 Linkage 二段主题句 2012 06Over packedGoods1 许多商品都存在过度包装的现象2 出现这种现象的原因及其带来的后果3 为了改变这种状况 我认为 Today peopleingrowingnumbersarebeginningtorealizetheseriousnessofprevalenceofexcessivelypackingcommodities Justtakingalookaround clothesarepackedinawell designedplasticbags andfoodsandsnacksareusuallyplacedindelicateboxes Anumberofreasonsareresponsibleforthis 2011 06OnlineShopping1 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2 网上购物有很多好处 但也有不少问题3 我的建议 Nowadays onlineshoppinghasgainedgreatpopularityamongmoreandmorewebusers Forexample residents especiallyyounggeneration arewildaboutpurchasingbooks clothesandevencarsonTMall EBayandAmazonetc Thebenefitsthatshoppingonlinebringstousarequiteobvious However wecannotignoreitsproblems 2010 12HowshouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeindependent 1 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切2 为了让孩子独立 父母应该 Recentyearshavewitnessedthatmoreparentsmakearrangementsfortheirchildren Suchas whichschooltoattend whatkindofjobtotakeandevenwhoisgoingtogetmarriedwith Asaresult childrenarelackofabilitytosolveproblemsindependently Inmyopinion parentsshouldtakesomeeffectivewaystohelptheirchildrentobeindependent Phenomenon有用句型 Thedebatethesedaysdrawsourattentionaboutwhether 2 Today peopleingrowingnumbersarebeginningtorealizetheseriousnessofprevalenceof 3 Nowadays hasgainedgreatpopularityamongmoreandmore 4 Recentyearshavewitnessedthat whichhasarousedaheateddebateofwhether 5 Overthela