高三英语高考漫画作文写作指导全国通用.ppt

2009 12 24 1 高考漫画作文写作指导 导 指 请 敬 临 光 迎 欢 仪征市第二中学 马茹 2009 12 24 2 书面表达示例增加到两个 一个是根据汉语提示的信息用英语写一篇150单词左右的短文 第二 根据对所给漫画的理解 描述一下他们可能的做法并发表考生的看法 解读 2009 12 24 3 感知漫画的特点 幽默诙谐 形象生动 深刻含蓄 2009 12 24 4 一 观察漫画 确定立意二 找关键词 关键句三 结构成篇 写作步骤 2009 12 24 5 观察漫画 确定立意 1 由图画到生活 特点 把握漫画的寓意 2 由结果推原因 揭示事件的本质 2009 12 24 6 2009 12 24 7 topicforcartoon1 mostparentsaretooeagertogettheirchidreneducated evenbeforetheyareborn 2009 12 24 8 2009 12 24 9 topicforcartoon2 peopledon tliketocommunicatewithothersinmoderndays juststayingclosedtothemselves 2009 12 24 10 找关键词 关键句 1 紧扣漫画主题2 抓住画面有效信息 合理发挥想象3 尽量用一些新颖词汇 句型结构4 确立人称 时态 2009 12 24 11 2009 12 24 12 1 parentsdesirethattheirchidrenshallbeequippedwithmuchknowledge 2 parentsareanxiousabouttheirfuture 3 theyareeagertohavethemeducatedbecausetheywantthemtohaveagoodjob ortomarrywell 4 theywantthemtobepowerful5 theywantthemtobemoreintelligentthanothers chidren 6 theyeducatethemtooearly sometimeswrongly 7 theyshouldgivetheirchildrenreasonableeducationatasuitabletime 2009 12 24 13 2009 12 24 14 twoladieslivingintheoppositeflathappentomeeteachother don tknoweachothertheexactreflectionofinterpersonalrelationshipsinthemodernworldwearebusywithourworkalldaylong somedon twanttogetintouchwithotherspeopleoftenstayathomewatchingtvorplayingcomputergames theydon tcommunicatewithothers makepeoplefeelmorelonelyasamemberofthesociety weshouldcreateaharmoniousrelationshipwithothers ifso we llbemuchhappier it sgoodforourhealth 2009 12 24 15 结构成篇 1 描述基本步骤 描述漫画 引出暗含主题2 阐明原因基本步骤 引出原因 列举原因3 提出对策基本步骤 引出对策 列举对策 2009 12 24 16 designing par1 fromthecartoonwecanseethat itisacommonphenomenonintoday ssociety par2 whatcausedtheeffect theremaybeseveralpossiblereasonsresponsibleforit firstly secondly first second inthefirstplace next then tobeginewith also inaddition par3 asparents weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasuresforourchildren seducation first second 2009 12 24 17 一 观察漫画 确定立意二 找关键词 关键句三 结构成篇 方法总结 2009 12 24 18 要求 描述漫画内容 结合生活实际分析这一现象 并发表一下自己的观点和看法 2 词数 150左右 2009 12 24 19 ascanbeseenfromthecartoon twoladieslivingintheoppositeflatsay hello whentheyhappentomeeteachother thetwowomendon tknoweachothereveniftheyareneighbors itistheexactreflectionofinterpersonalrelationshipsinthemodernworld asweallknow mostpeopleliveinapartments theydont liketogooutafterwork andtheywillstayathomewachingtvorplayingcomputergames theydon thaveanyconnectionsevenwiththeirclosestneighbors whoseemnodifferentfrompeopletheymeet 2009 12 24 20 everydayinthestreet soitisnogoodtous nortooursociety itwillmakepeoplefeelmorelonely asfarasi mconcerned it shightimethatwetooksomemeasurestoimproveit peoplewholiveinthesamezonecanoftenbeorganizedtohavesomeactivitiestogether weshouldaskpeopletobefriendlytoeachother theyshoul