中考英语 书面表达写作技巧突破策略课件 人教新目标版.ppt

初中英语书面表达写作技巧突破策略 中考作文评分标准 第一档 13 15分 信息完整 表达流畅 无语言错误或基本无语言错误 第二档 10 12分 信息基本完整 表达较流畅 有少量语言错误 但不影响意思表达 第三档 7 9分 能传达部分信息 表达不够流畅 语言错误较多 但句子基本可读 第四档 4 6分 只能传达少量信息 表达不流畅 语言错误多 只有少量句子可读 第五档 1 3分 只能传达个别信息 表达不清楚 只有个别句子可读 2010年江西省中考卷假设你是emma 你的笔友josh给你写了一封电子邮件 向你倾诉他在家里的一些烦恼 请根据来信和提示 给josh回一封电子邮件 先说说你的看法 在父母看来 我们仍是孩子 父母这样做是为了保护我们 再给出建议 给父母写信谈谈你的想法 主动帮父母做些力所能及的事情 并适当发挥 能传递部分信息 句子基本可读 但表达不够流畅 能传递少量信息 少量句子可读 但表达不通顺 能传递个别信息 个别句子可读 但表达不清楚 学生作文主要存在的问题 1 中文式英语句子出现频率高2 语法错误多 且基础语法错误 如be动词 助动词等使用错误的出现频率较高3 机械地堆砌词句 句子表达不知所云4 文章结构不够严谨 想到哪写到哪5 卷面不工整 字迹潦草 如何做好中考书面表达题 书面表达写作技巧 审 列 加 连 美 认真审题 找出文章要表达的中心 写作第一步 审 健康很重要 在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天 会休息的人才会有健康的身体 人们是如何度过假期的呢 国际健康组织对此作了一次调查 右图是他们此次的调查结果 根据你所得的信息 请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告 并提倡大家进行假日休闲 审 travel stayathome visitfriendsorparents work 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点 列 写作第二步 根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点 如何度假调查报告倡议假日休闲 stayathome work visitfriendsorparents travel alotofpeopletravel somepeoplestayathome someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents afewpeoplework enjoyyourvacation 列 alotofpeopletravel somepeoplestayathome someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents afewpeoplework howdopeoplespendtheirvacation wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport comeandenjoyyourvacation peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell anicehead anicetail anicebody 加 加首尾 使结构完整 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构 开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁 漂亮 写作第三步 321465 second weshouldkeepquietinthelibrary first wehavetowearouruniformstogotoschool thoughmostofusdon tlikethematall everyschoolhasitsownrulesforstudents wehavemanyschoolrulestofollowinourdailylife what smore weoughttoreturnbooksontime ourschoolrulesaregoodforus iwilltrymybesttofollowthem third wemustdolotsofhomework howdopeoplespendtheirvacation wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport alotofpeopletravel somepeoplestayathome theywatchtvorsurftheinternet someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents afewpeoplework comeandenjoyyourvacation thepeoplewhorelaxwellworkwell 连 恰当运用关联词句 使得文章层次清晰 各个部分衔接自然 写作第四步 1 表示并列或递进 and aswellas both and notonly butalso neither nor 2 表示选择 or either or 3 表示转折 but however although though afterall 4 表示因果 because so therefore5 表示条件 if unless6 表示对比 instead not but ontheonehand ontheotherhand 7 表示解释 forexample forinstance suchas thatistosay inotherwords 8 表示顺序 tobeginwith firstly first ofall second ly next later sincethen fromthenon finally intheend 9 表示强调 also besides what smore actually infact 10 表示结论 inall altogether inaword inshort generallyspeaking inmyopinion 关联词 let splaythegame iamtired ikeeponworkingtillmidnight hedidn tgotomovies hewenttotheconcert welikedoingkindsofsports swimming runningandhiking hestoodup thenhegotout although though instead suchas like first howdopeoplespendtheirvacation wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport accordingtoit mostpeopletravel andsomepeoplestayathome alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents however afewpeoplework comeandenjoyyourvacation peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell 连 美 选好词句 美化文章 在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底 写作第五步 weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisoursurveyreport accordingtoit mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays also somepeopleliketostayathome watchingtvorsurfingtheinternettohaveagoodrest andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed however afewpeoplehavetowork comeandenjoyyourvacation peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell 美 注意 选好词句 美化文章 在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底 skillonemakeyoursentencescorrect goodgoodstudy daydayup weshoulddosportsaweekonce savetheenvironmentisourduty thereisgoingtohaveameetingtoday ihopeicancometruemydream onceaweek saving be achieve skilltwoexpressindifferentways ourparentsreallywishustoworkhard ourparentsreallywishustoputourheartintostudy theteenagerslikethecomputers theteenagersarefondofthecomputers weshouldn teatjunkfood weshouldstayawayfromthejunkfood whenhespoke hegotmoreexcited themorehespoke themoreexcitedhegot weshouldlearnenglishgrammar it simportanttolearnenglishgrammar 书面表达写作技巧 审 列 加 连 美 书面表达 以 ihaveadream 为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文 标点符号不占格 sentencepatternsforreference 以下句型供参考 mydreamistobe todo togo ienjoy like prefer tomakemydreamcometrue i ifmydreamcomestrue ihaveadreamhaveyoueverwatchedabikeracing theridersarecool yeah it smydreamtobeaprofessionalbikerider ifellinlovewithbikeriderforthefirsttimeirode sincethat i vebeenridingfor5years somepeoplethinkit sdangerous butidon tthinkso duringabikeriding youwillbeinahighspeedandfeelthewindrushesquickly exciting thatis tomakemydreamcometrue i llpracticemoreaftermiddleschool also i llwatchmorebikeracingtolearnfromtheriders ihopemydreamwillcometrue ifso icanenjoythelifeilikebest passageone ihaveadreamanybodyhasadream butdifferentpeoplehavedifferentdreams mostpeoplealwaysdreamtobepopularorrich butmydreamisveryspecial ijustwanttobeabird whyihavesuchadream justbecauseiadmirethey refree theycandoeverythingtheywant whenthey reflyinginthesky theylookbeautiful eventhey rethemostbeautifulanimals ireallywanttoenjoythefeelingofflyinginthesky however iknowitwon tbeachievedanymore it sjustadream inmyheart passagetwo passagethree ihaveadreammydreamistobeabasketballplayer ilikeitbecauseithinkitveryinteresting itcanmakemebecomeveryhappyandhealthy tomakemedreamcometrue ineedtrytodoit andineedtakesometimetodoit ineedpracticeeveryday ifmydreamcometrue iwillmorethytodoit homework 自教育部提倡初中生每天长跑1500米后 校园里课间可以看到很多学生跑步的身影 对于这样的倡议 你在学校做了一个调查 有些学生觉的好 有些学生觉的不好 请你把调查的结果用英语写成短文 并谈谈自己的看法 发表在学校的刊物上 开头已经写好 ididasurveyaboutwhethermiddleschoolstudentsshouldrun1500meterseveryday herearetheresults allofushaveholidaysinourdailylife buthowdopeoplespendtheirholiday wedidasurveyandherearetheresults fromcaipiaoli it snothingbetterthanhavingarestafterworking sohowdopeoplerestthemselvesonvacation accordingtooursurvey