高考英语一轮复习作文分类指导一应用文写作_建议信课件新人教版

建议信是就某事向收信人提出写信人的建议和忠告 建议信有可能是写给个人 组织或机构 信的内容要包括写信的原因 建议的内容 提出建议的理由 建议信要写得简明扼要 目的明确 具有合理性和说服力 具体写作步骤一般是 三段式 通常以firstly secondly thirdly或tobegin startwith then later lastbutnotleast等依次陈述建议 具体为 第一段 表明写作意图 陈述事由 简单介绍自己 注意语气 第二段 应该首先肯定对方的优点 然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告 千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉 而不是提建议 第三段 对提出的建议进行总结 要注意有礼貌 使读者容易接受 句首常用语 Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions 表达 建议 常用语 Ithinkthemostsuitable foryouis Iwouldliketosuggestthat You dbetter It sbetterto AsfarasIamconcerned Inmyopinion Foronething foranother IfIwereyou Iwould Itseemstomethatyoucould 句尾常用语 Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals suggestionspractical useful helpful Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard Iwillbereadyforfurtherdiscussingthismatterintodetails 陕西高考 假定你是中学生李华 在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上 你看到如下内容 请你根据博客内容 写作要点和要求 给这位家长回复 I mthemotherofafourteen year old Ihavearuleformydaughter beamongthetop5studentsorgetpunishedinonewayoranother Shehasbeendoingverywellinschool butsomefriendsofminekeeptellingmethatIputtoomuchpressureonher AmIwrong 写作要点 1 表明自己的看法 2 陈述自己的理由 可举例说明 3 提出至少两条建议 要求 1 短文词数不少于100 不含已写好的部分 2 内容充实 结构完整 语意连贯 3 书写需清晰 工整 Hi TigerMom WhatpuzzlesyouisactuallyapuzzleformanyparentsinChina Myideaisthatitisnotquiterightforyoutodoso Althoughhighgradesareanimportantfactorinevaluatingstudentsandfortheirfutureuniversityadmission developmentinwisdom emotion healthandlifeattitudeshouldneverbeignored Therearemanyexamplesaroundus Someall Astudentsinschoolhaveturnedoutnottobeassuccessfulinsocietyastheywereexpected Thereasonisoftenthatthepressurefromtheirparentsallowsthemalmostnotimeforotheractivities Furthermore punishmentisbynomeansawisechoicetohelpthemgrowupmentallyandphysically SoIsuggestthatyoutakeyourfriends advice Moreimportantly letherlivelikealovelygirl letherhavemorefriendsandsocialactivities andlethermakemistakesofherownasweteenagersoftendo 行文逻辑 直接提出观点 从两方面解释原因 给出建议 较好地使用了连接词 如 Furthermore Moreimportantly等 词汇短语 运用了较高难度的词汇和短语 如 evaluating universityadmission developmentinwisdom neverbeignored turnedoutnottobe bynomeans等 句式句法 运用了多样化的句式结构 如 主语从句Whatpuzzlesyouisactuallyapuzzle 表语从句Myideaisthatitisnotquiterightforyoutodoso Thereasonisoftenthatthepressurefromtheir 宾语从句SoIsuggestthatyoutakeyourfriends advice 状语从句Althoughhighgradesareanimportantfactor astheywereexpected 以及therebe句型Therearemanyexamplesaroundus 等 阅读下面这封中学生来信 摘自ChinaDaily21Century DearEditor IamanewstudentatHainingHongdaSeniorHighSchool MyhomeisfarfromHaining soImustliveatschool Thisisthefirsttimeformetogetawayfrommyparents Ifeelverysad WhenIlefthome Icouldn thelptearingmyselfawayfromthem Idonotwanttobealoneatschool andIamashygirl Ihavebeencryinginbedatnightthesedays Iwanttostayathomeforever Imissmyparentsverymuch Couldyoutellmewhattodo Yourearlyreplyisexpected Regards Amy 请根据以上内容 写一封回信 信的开头和结尾已为你写好 词数100左右 回信应包括如下要点 1 鼓励Amy坚定求学信心 志存高远 四海为家 2 就Amy的目前状况 提两到三个建议 DearAmy Thankyouforyourletter Iamsogladtohaveatalkaboutyourpresentsituationwithyou Wishyouhappyeveryday Faithfullyyours 参考范文 DearAmy Thankyouforyourletter Iamsogladtohaveatalkaboutyourpresentsituationwithyou Peopleoftenmisstheirparentsthefirsttimetheyleavehome Mostpeopledohavetoleavehomeforhighereducationoremployment Youcannotlivewithyourparentsforever Ithinkyoushouldrealizethatpresentseparationwillhelpyouracademicdevelopmentandyourimprovementofpersonalability Youneedtomakefriendsonyourschoolcampus sharingideaswithyourclassmateswhoarephysicallyclosesttoyounow Maybeyouwillstillmissyourparents butyournewfriendswill