高考英语书面表达讲义及训练（28）参考范文 英语写作引导句型（8）.doc

2013高考英语书面表达讲义及训练（28）及参考范文：英语写作引导句型（8）21 nowadayscurrentlyrecently there is a growing / unhealthy tendency to / in / thatgeneral / deep-seated belief in / thatgeneral / uneasy feeling of / against / thatgrowing / nation-wide recognition of / thatgrowing / general awareness of / thatdeep / serious concern over / for / thatdeep / keen interest ingrowing / great demand forgrowing / great enthusiasm for / among sb .*结束10, 第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在该词下面写出该加的词。修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。it is known to us all, paper burns easily. yesterday, mike, a six-year-old boy, made a paper box and then filled it for water. he then lit a candle and tries to burn the paper box. much to his surprises, the paper box didnt catch fire. such curious was the child about the experiment that he asked for his father endless questions about it. his father, which is a teacher in a primary school, didnt know how to ask these questions, but he didnt pretend to understand. he did everything he could help his son solve the problem. this experience made mike interesting in the study of modern science.第一节 书面表达（满分25分）随着人们环保意识的提高，越来越多的人选择低碳生活（low-carbon lifestyle）。假设你是校英语协会主席李华，请写一篇英语倡议书，从出行、购物、用水、用电四个方面倡议同学们选择低碳生活。注意：1. 词数：120左右； 2. 开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数； 3. 参考词汇：排放emissiondear fellow students, dear fellow students, lets take action right now!短文改错1 it-as 2 for-with 3 tries-tried 4 surprises-surprise 5 such- so6 去掉 for 7 which-who 8 ask -answer 9 help 前加 to 10 interesting-interested作文dear fellow students， the earth is faced with serious pollution and energy shortage. it is time for us to lead a low-carbon lifestyle in order to protect the earth. i think everyone should take an active part. first of all, we should walk or ride our bikes instead of taking cars or buses to save fuel and reduce the emission of carbon dioxide. second, when shopping, we should bring our own shopping bags instead of buying plastic bags, which cause white pollution. and it s important for us to save electricity whenever possible. last but not least, we should turn off the tap after we use the running water. if we can make a small change in our way of life, we can make a big difference to the earth! dear fellow students, lets take action right now! *结束21.1 now there is a growing concern over the heavy burden, both academic and psychological, our children have to bear. after a days study in school, they bring a lot of assignments back home and work them until midnight. they play few games and go to few movies. they have been so obsessed with grades and marks that they have hardly had time to savor the life and grow as well-rounded people.如今人们越来越关注我们的孩子所承受的沉重的学习负担和精神压力。在校学习一天后，他们带回许多作业，常常做到深夜。他们很少玩或去看电影。他们为分数所累，几乎没有时间品尝人生，并成长为一个全面发展的人。21.2 nowadays there is an immense and justified pride in what our colleges and universities have done. at the same time, however, there is a growing uneasiness about their products. these young men and women who carry away our degrees are attractive, energetic and eloquent. but what about their intellectual equipment?现在人们对我们大学所做的一切非常自豪，这不是没有道理的。但是同时对它们的产品大学毕业生又愈来愈感到不安。那些得到学位的青年人个个神气十足，精神饱满，能说会道。然而他们是否有真才实学呢？21.3 in the past decades there has been a persistent demand in many countries for a conceited attack to deal with worldwide pollution. in many places, under pressure from private citizens and leaders in science and technology environmental organizations have sprung up to voice their opinions and to try and face the problem. it is increasingly recognized that pollution doesnt only pose a pervasive threat to the human environment, but also challenge the survival of man himself.在过去的几十年里，许多国家都坚持不懈，要求共同努力来对付全球范围的污染。在很多地方，鉴于平民百姓和科技界头面人物的压力，保护环境的组织纷纷出现。他们一面提出各种建议，一面试图着导解决这个问题。人们越来越认识到污染不仅威胁到人类环境，且危及人类自身的生存。22 in recent few yearsthe past few decades , there ishas been a22 sharp/ marked / sudden / dramatic increase / growth/ rise / decline inastonishing / increasing / sizable number / percentage/ proportion / population of22 according to a(n) recentnewofficial studyrecentsurveyreportpoll , .22.1 in recent years, there is an increasing number of people, especially young people, who show little interest in correcting social inequalities and injustices. according to a national poll last year, eighteen to twenty-nine-year-olds agreed by large percentages that young people today are less idealistic and more selfish, and that they are less concerned with the problems of society than with their own personal future.最近几年，越来越多的人，尤其是青年人，对纠正社会的不良倾向和不平等现象很少关心了。根据去年一次全国性的民意测验，大多数18到29岁的青年人承认他们“不那么有理想”“更加自私”，他们关心个人的将来胜过关心社会问题。22.2 in the past 5 years there has been a marked decline in the number of young married couples who want to have children, coupled with a growing trend toward delayed childbearing. accordin