高考英语 书面表达（文字提纲式作文）练习讲评四课件.ppt

2012届高考英语书面表达 文字提纲式作文 练习讲评四 注意 1 对所给要点逐一陈述 适当发挥 不要简单翻译 2 字数150左右 3 作文中不得提及考生所在班级和本人姓名 时下 家长给在校的孩子送可口饭菜的现象屡见不鲜 对此 有关各方都有自己的看法 请根据下表所提供的信息 用英文写一篇短文 讲评 一 认真审题 确立话题 归纳要点 通过审题 确定本文的话题为 对家长给孩子送可口饭菜的现象不同的想法以及建议 围绕这个话题 将题目中叙述的文字转换成以下要点 时下 家长给在校的孩子送可口饭菜的现象屡见不鲜 对此 有关各方都有自己的看法 家长的想法 担心学校的饭菜也许不合孩子的口味 满足孩子生活上的需求是他们的责任 老师的想法 家长这样做是可以理解的 可能会带来饮食方面的安全问题 学生的感想和建议 父母的关心和爱护表示感谢 为了减轻家长的负担 对学校食堂和包括你在内的学生提出建议 二 理顺要点 增加细节 连贯表达 本篇书面表达的文字提纲实际上就是按照表达顺序提供的 所以不存在理顺要点的环节 至于所要增加的要点实际上就是 对学校食堂和包括你在内的学生提出建议 根据生活实际对学校食堂的建议顺手拈来 提高饭菜的质量和服务态度 为我们学生提供可口 健康的饭菜 对包括你在内的学生的建议也比较容易想到 如 不仅要学习书本知识 还要学会独立生活等等 三 化解难点 灵活表达 词能达意 时下nowadaysnowrecently 可口饭菜deliciousfooddeliciousmealsfoodthattastesgood delicious 屡见不鲜commonacommonsightacommonoccurrence be often commonlyseen 学校的饭菜schoolfoodmealsservedbytheschoolcanteen 不合孩子的口味notcatertotheirchildren stastenotsatisfytheirchildrennotmeettheirchildren sneeds 满足孩子生活上的需求satisfytheirchildren sneedsmeettheirchildren sneedsoflife 带来饮食方面的安全问题bringabout cause leadto resultsinsomeproblems suchasfoodsafetybringabout cause leadto resultinsuchproblemsasfoodsafety 减轻家长的负担shareparents burdenlightenparents burden 2 变点为句 nowadaysit scommonforparentstobringmuchdeliciousfoodtotheirchildrenatschool recentlyit softenseenthatparentsbringmuchfoodthattastesgood delicioustotheirchildrenatschool thepersonsconcernedhavedifferentopinionsonthisphenomenon onthisphenomenon therearedifferentopinionsamongthepersonsconcerned onthisphenomenon differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions parentsareafraid worriedthatschoolfoodmaynotcatertotheirchildren staste parentsareafraid worriedthatthemealsservedbytheschoolcanteenmaynotsatisfytheirchildren parentsareafraid worriedthattheirchildrenmaynotbesatisfiedwithschoolfood parentsthinkittheirresponsibility dutytosatisfytheirchildren sneeds parentsthinkittheirresponsibility dutymeettheirchildren sneedsoflife parentsthinkittheirresponsibility dutywhattheirchildrenneedinlife teachersunderstandwhatparentsdofortheirchildren teachersunderstandwhyparentsdoso thiswillbringabout cause leadto resultsinsomeproblems suchasfoodsafety perhapsthiswillbringabout cause leadto resultinsuchproblemsasfoodsafety westudentsshouldbegratefultoourparentsfortheirselflesscareandlove westudentsshouldthankourparentsfortheirselflesscareandlove westudentsshouldbegratefultoourparentsbecauseofhowtheycareforandloveus toshareparents dailyburden isuggestthattheschoolcanteenimproveitsfoodqualityaswellasitsservice supplyingmoredeliciousandhealthiermealswithstudents weshouldnotonlylearnthebookknowledge butalsolearntoliveindependentlynottoletourparentsworryaboutus 四 错落有致 连接恰当 发挥有度 连接恰当 整理成文nowadaysit scommonforparentstobringmuchdeliciousfoodtotheirchildrenatschool onthisphenomenon parents teachersandstudentshavedifferentopinions manyparentsareafraidthatschoolfoodmaynotcatertotheirchildren staste theythinkittheirresponsibilitytosatisfytheirchildren sneeds asforteachers theyunderstandwhatparentsdofortheirchildren yetthesituationwillbringaboutsomeproblems suchasfoodsafety westudentsshouldbegratefultoourparentsfortheirselflesscareandlove however weandtheschoolcanteenshouldtryourbesttoshareparents dailyburden isuggestthattheschoolcanteenimproveitsfoodqualityaswellasitsservice supplyingmoredeliciousandhealthiermealswithstudents asfaraswestudentsareconcerned weshouldnotonlylearnthebookknowledge butalsolearntoliveindependently whichwillmakeourparentsnotworryaboutusagain 同步练习 网络资源2012届话题作文写作指导 现在很多中学生喜欢阅读小说 对此有人赞成 有人反对 阅读下表内容写一篇短文介绍这些观点 并谈谈自己的看法 字数要求 150左右 参考范文 now manymiddleschoolstudentsarefondofreadingnovels aboutwhichdifferentpeoplehavedifferentopinions somepeoplethinkthatreadingnovelscanenrichourlife letoffourpressureandimproveourmood what smore readingnovelscanmakeourheartcleananddirectustogrowupnormally inthemeanwhile readingnovelscanaddtoourknowledgeandbroadenourhorizons however otherpeopledon tthinkso theyholdtheviewthatreadingnovelsisawasteoftimeandhasabadeffectonstudents study what sworse somenovelsareunhealthyincontent andreadi