高考英语三轮复习 写作满分训练4.doc

2015届高考英语三轮复习写作满分训练4书面表达假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现在正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信，内容应包括：个人情况：年龄、性别、学历个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况承诺：提供最佳服务注意：词数120-150左右，开头语已为你写好；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。生词：申请apply (v.), application (n.)；志愿者volunteerdear sir/madam,my name is li hua. i would like to work as a volunteer for the winter asian games. _阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。i have a friend monty roberts who owns a horse ranch (牧马场) in san ysidro. when he was a senior, he was asked to write a paper about what he wanted to be and do when he grew up.the next day he handed it in to the teacher. on the front was a large red f. the boy with the dream asked, “why did i receive an f?”the teacher said, “this is an unrealistic dream for a young boy like you. you have no money. you come from an itinerant（四处奔波的）family. you have no resources. owning a horse ranch requires a lot of money. you have to buy the land. you have to pay for the original breeding stock and later youll have to pay large stud fees. theres no way you could ever do it.”he stated, “you can keep the f and ill keep my dream.”the best part of the story is that two summers ago that same schoolteacher brought 30 kids to camp out on his ranch for a week. when the teacher was leaving, he said, “look, monty, i can tell you this now. when i was your teacher, i was something of a dream stealer. during those years i stole a lot of kids dreams. fortunately you had enough belief not to give up on yours.”【写作内容】学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的“坚守信念”的讨论。读完monty roberts 的故事之后，你准备写一份发言稿，主题是 “belief can change ones fate” ，内容要点包括：1. 以约30个词概括monty roberts的成长故事；2. 然后以约120个词谈谈你对信念的看法，内容包括：(1) 坚守信念对一个人成长的重要性；(2) 举一个例子去论证“坚守信念能改变人的命运”；(3) 你的感想。【写作要求】1.在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直 接引用原文中的句子；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。 一 、书面表达【参考范文】dear sir/madam,my name is li hua. i would like to work as a volunteer for the winter asian games.i am a girl of 18. as a college student, i have a keen interest in sports and i have always been looking forward to the games to be held here.with the great fluency in english and the burning passion for sports, i suppose i am qualified to be a volunteer for the games. besides, i have a good communicative competence and i am considered to be an outgoing, reliable and helpful person at college. whats more, i am familiar with the local conditions. i promise i will offer the best service to whoever participates in the games.now i formally apply for the job and i sincerely hope i can be accepted. yours faithfully, li huathis passage tells us that monty roberts, who had such strong belief that he didnt give up his dream all the time, eventually succeeded in owning a horse ranch.for a person, belief always plays an important role in his/her life. as a saying goes, “wherethereisawill, thereisaway.” anyone who has strong belief can enjoy a colorful life. otherwise, he will lose himself in his way of life.belief is so important that it can change ones fate. as a deaf man, beethoven went on working with his strong belief in the last year of his life, though he was not able to hear his own fine music. marie curie, a famous scientist, also has set a good example. in 1898, marie found a new element in the pitchblende. in order to improve her discovery, marie and her husband worked hard. at last they saw the dim blue light of new