高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验19.doc

2015届高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验191书面表达（共1题，满分25分）假设你叫刘明，高三学生，即将参加高考。你的英语其他题都做得不错，但是作文总是写不好。你给在你学校工作过的外籍老师david英语写作这一问题向他请教，并请他帮忙批改你附上的作文，指出问题的所在，怎么改进。注意：1.词数100左右;2.在内容上允许适当发挥;3.参考词汇：附 attached to 2请你在学习了 “martin luther king jr. 这一课后，根据下面内容写一篇读后感。词数100 左右。该课文给你留下了深刻的印象。马丁. 路德 . 金是举世闻名的黑人领袖。他为争取人类平等而献身的精神得到世界人民的广泛尊敬。他1964年获得诺贝尔和平奖。他反对种族隔离政策，为争取黑人平等权利而不屈不挠的斗争精神深深感动了你。学习了这一课，你决心努力学习，为维护世界和平而奋斗。3many years ago, when i was fresh out of school and working in denver, i was driving to my parents home in missouri for christmasi stopped at a gas station about 50 miles from oklahoma city, where i was planning to stop and visit a friendwhile i was standing in line at the cash register(收款台), i said hello to an older couple who were also paying for gas i took off, but had gone only a few miles when black smoke poured from the back of my cari stopped and wondered what i should doa car pulled up behind meit was the couple i had spoken to at the gas stationthey said they would take me to my friendswe chatted on the way into the city, and when i got out of the car, the husband gave me his business card i wrote him and his wife a thank-you note for helping mesoon afterward, i received a christmas present from themtheir note that came with it said that helping me had made their holidays meaningful years later, i drove to a meeting in a nearby town in the morningin late afternoon i returned to my car and found that id left the lights on all day, and the battery(电池)was deadthen i noticed that the friendly ford dealership - a shop selling cars - was right next doori walked over and found two salesmen in the showroom just how friendly is friendly ford? i asked and explained my troublethey quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started itthey would accept no payment, so when i got home, i wrote them a note to say thanksi received a letter back from one of the salesmenno one had ever taken the time to write him and say thank you, and it meant a lot, he said thank you - two powerful wordstheyre easy to say and mean so much写作内容(1) 以约30个词概括短文的要点；(2) 然后以120个词就“向别人道谢的重要性”这个主题发表你的看法, 并包括如下要点：a) 叙述你向别人道谢的一次真实或虚构的经历；b) 你是如何认识到向别人道谢的重要性的；c) 向别人道谢对你和对方都带来了什么影响。 写作要求 可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点, 也可以参照阅读材料的内容, 但不得直接引用原文中的句子4下面是一中学生给某报编辑部写的一封信，仔细阅读并就信的内容以编辑李华的名义给此中学生回一封信。dear editor.i am an active girl, and i speak and laugh loudly in the classroom, like a boy. i dont care about small matters. on the contrary, my neighbor，the girl who sits next to me, speaks quietly and dare not do the things i often do. i can understand this.what i cant stand is that she often gets angry with me about small things. how can i get along with her？sunny，shandong注意：1回信需就原信内容给出至少三条建议（如谈心，相互理解，参加他们的生日等活动，谈论共同话题，分享快乐等等）；2字数：120左右, 已给开头语, 但不计入总词数。dear sunny，its very good that you want to be friends with this girl. 5书面表达（满分25分） 假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的英国朋友tom非常喜欢中国的传统文化，想到你校来学习一年的汉语，请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件。 1介绍你们学校：百年历史；48个教学班，300多名教职工；坐落在山脚下，一条小河穿过校园。 2他将面临的困难或问题：语言障碍；思乡。 3你的建议。 注意：1词数100左右； 2可适当增加细节； 3信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。dear tom,im very glad to hear that you are coming to our school to learn chinese for a year. here ill introduce our school first._yours sincerely, li hua参考答案1dear david,im in senior 3 now and im preparing for the coming college entrance examination. im sure i can answer all the questions in nmet except the writing. i have put my heart into english writing, but i still dont know how to write a good composition. what shall i do? you know, the college entrance examination is very important. im getting more and more worried with the time passing by. so i want to get some help from you. i believe you are kind enough to help, arent you? the composition attached to the email is one of mine. would you please correct it, point out the mistakes and tell me how to improve my writing? thank you!yours,liu ming【解析】2【解析】 略3in this passage, the writer mainly tells us two of his experiences of being helped by strangersafter he wrote them thank-you notes, he realized that saying “thank you” to others meant so muchi have a similar experienceonce when i was about to go home after school, it was raining so heavily that i had to wait for the rain to stopbut after half an hour it was still rainingseeing this, the guard at the gate offered to lend me his umbrellai accepted at oncethanks to his help, i got home on time without getting wetthe next morning, when i returned the umbrella to the guard, i said thank you to him and left him a note expressing my gratitude sincerelyto my surprise, he said no one had ever written him to say thank you. whats more, some students who borrowed umbrella from him never returned it. “what you did really means a lot to me.” said he.from then on, i realized the importance of saying thank you. i never forgot to show my appreciation to anyone who helped me.in my opinion, saying thank you to others is not only easy but also meaningful to the person who says it and the receiver!【解析】 略4 dear sunny，its very good that you want to be friends with this girl. in my opinion, youd better first have a heart-to-heart talk with her, because understanding each other is very important for you two. and i also think its better for you to ask her to join you and your classmates in all kinds of actives, such as birthday parties, going out for a walk, discussing some fashionable topics, and so on. besides, helping each other is also very important for both of you. just share happiness and sadness with her. and i believe she will understand you in time and it is certain you will be good friends in future. good luck to you.yours，li hua【解析】 试题分析：本文属于半开放性作文，要求就这位学生提出的问题提出建议。这位学生的同桌很内向安静，但是她经常因为小事而生气。要求以李华的口吻提出如下建议：谈心，相互理解，参加他们的生日等活动，谈论共同话题，分享快乐；文字提示中只是给出部分内容，我们可以做适当增加。如邀请她来自己家做客等等。在写作时注意运用多样化的表达让文章更丰富。亮点说明：范文里句式运用较为丰富，如状语从句because understanding each other is very important for you two；形式主语its better for you to ask her to join you and your classmates in all kinds of actives；动名词做主语helping each other is also very important for both of you.等等。考点：半开放性作文5one possible version：dear tom, im very glad to hear that you are coming to our school to learn chinese for a year. here ill introduce our school first. our school has a history of more than one hundred years and consists of 48 classes. over 300 teachers are working here. it is located at the foot of a hill and a small river goes through our schoolyard. i believe youll enjoy your life