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书面表达 一（2014年福州市高三适应性练习）书面表达（满分25分）手机是当今社会必备的一种交流工具，但是对手机的过度依赖确成了社会的一种普遍现象。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。要求： 1. 描述漫画内容；2. 分析漫画所揭示的问题； 3. 提出你的看法。注意：1. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯； 3. 词数120左右;4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。it is common that we use cell phones as a means of communication for its convenience. however, the factthatpeoplearegettingaddicted to cellphones cannotbeignored.【考点】考察看图作文【写作指导】本文属于看图作文，反应现在人们过度使用手机的话题。要求分析图片内容，分析问题，提出看法。同时也属于议论文，所以使用第三人称和一般现在时。要点：1.图片显示多人在一起吃饭，但是他们没有过多交流，而是都在玩手机。2.导致这一现象的原因：人们迫切希望和别人多交流，但是他们不希望和别人面对面交流。3.你的看法：认为应该去的生活的平衡，多花时间和家人孩子在一起，控制使用手机的时间。看图作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字，再根据这些要点谋篇布局。要求考生把看到的图画用文字表达出来，除了能表达清楚图画中的信息外，考生还需要根据词数要求，适当拓展并发挥想象，从而使文章的叙述不单调。如果是记叙文类的写作素材，考生要注意故事的时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、过程、结果这六个要素；如果是说明文或议论文，考生则首先要对图画的内容进行描述，然后围绕图画的信息进行说明或议论。【一句多译】当吃饭的时候，三个人在玩手机，完全沉浸在个人世界里了。three persons are playing with their cell phones when having dinner, immersingthemselvesinapersonalspace.three persons are playing with their cell phones when they are having dinner, immersingthemselvesinapersonalspace.【参考范文】have a look at the picture. three persons are playing with their cell phones when having dinner, immersingthemselvesinapersonalspace. the scene can be seen everywhere in our life. some even have signsofanxiety if they dont have their cellphones with them. i think there are two reasons for this. ononehand,people are eager to share ideas with others.ontheotherhand,notbelievinginothers,they are unwilling to communicate with people around them face to face. facedwiththisproblem,i thought making a balance of our life is the key. we should spend more time with our family and friends, and at the same time try to be self-controlled to avoid over-independence on cells phones.二（天津市河东区201 4年高三二模考试）书面表达（满分25分）假如你是天津市某中学高三学生，学生会的干部，请你根据以下内容写一封倡议书给某英语报社信，叙述拟开展活动的内容并发表白己的看法。 倡议书为了更好地利学习资枓，我们倡议髙三同学在毕业之际捐出用过的书报杂志等学习资料赠送给低年级的冋学。活动意义：增进友爱，鼓励爷约，环护保境.深受师生赞扬和支持活动地点：校图书馆-楼活动时间：6月1121日学生会4 月 29 日注意：词数不少于100;可适当加入细节，使行文连贯：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：增进promotedear schoolmates,im a student of senior three in a high school in tianjin._students unionspril 29th【考点】考察提纲类作文【写作指导】本文属于提纲类作文，要求就开展活动发表自己的看法。使用一般现在时和第三人称。要点：1.具体安排：为了更好地利学习资枓，我们倡议髙三同学在毕业之际捐出用过的书报杂志等学习资料赠送给低年级的冋学。2.活动意义：增进友爱，鼓励爷约，环护保境.深受师生赞扬和支持3.活动地点及时间：校图书馆-楼；活动时间：6月1121日写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【一句多译】为了我们能够更好地利用我们的学习材料，学生会安排了一项活动。in order that we can make the best use of our learning materials, the students union of our school is arranging an activity.in order to make the best use of our learning materials, the students union of our school is arranging an activity.【参考范文dear schoolmates,im a student of senior three in a high school in tianjin. in order that we can make the best use of our learning materials, the students union of our school is arranging an activity. we students of senior three are called on to give away our used books, newspapers or magazines to the students in the iower grades. the idea, which is intended to promote friendship, encourage economy and protect environment, is highly praised and supported by the teachers and students. the activity will last about ten days, from june 11 to 21.as a student, im strongly for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful. ihope this kind of activity will continue in the future. students union april 29th三（黑龙江省佳木斯市第一中学2014届高三下学期第三次模拟考试英语试卷）书面表达（满分25分）某海外学校举办英语训练营，开设了以下课程：园艺（gardening），烹饪（cooking），防身术（self-defense），护理（nursing ）。假设你是李华，写封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。内容要点：1. 你感兴趣的课程；2. 你期望从中学到什么；3.为什么想学这些内容dear sir /madam, li hua【考点】考察应用文【写作指导】本文属于应用文写作，要求写一封申请信，报名参加一项课程。使用第三人称和一般现在时。要点：1. 你感兴趣的课程：园艺；2.希这个课程让我了解到更多与园艺有关的知识。3.为什么想学这些内容：期望园艺能够帮助我在大学里的专业学的更好，而且未来自己也想从事于园艺有关的事业；写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。【一句多译】而且，毕业以后，我计划把我的时间花在种植花草，让我们的祖国更加漂亮吸引更多的人来参观。whats more, after graduation, i plan to devote my life to cultivate flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state, attracting more foreigners to come to visit it.whats more, after graduation, i plan to devote my life to cultivate flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state to attract more foreigners to come to visit it.【参考范文】dear sir /madam, i am very glad that your school will hold the english summer camp which contains many courses, such as gardening, cooking, self-defense, nursing and so on. i want to register to attend a course about gardening because i have liked flowers, grasses etc since i was a little child. i especially like playing in the garden where i can enjoy the beauty of nature. for one thing, i want to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college. for another, i can realize the bitterness of the gardeners and treasure plants much more consequently. whats more, after graduation, i plan to devote my life to cultivate flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state, attracting more foreigners to come to visit it.yours,li hua四：（2014重庆一中高三下第三次月考）书面表达（共两个写作任务, 满分35分）（原创）写作一 (满分15分)请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。 china is considered the worlds largest tobacco producer and consumer. smoking remains a common scene in some public places.要求: (1)就此材料发表你的看法；(2)紧扣材料，有明确的观点；(3)词数不少于60；(4)在答题卡上作答。【考点】考察材料作文【写作指导】本文属于材料作文。首先要求考生阅读材料：中国被认为是世界上最大的烟草生产国和消费国，在中国的很多公共场所，抽烟仍然是一个普遍现象。要求就此现象发表观点，属于议论文，使用一般现在时和第三人称。要点：1.中国是世界上最大的烟草生产国和消费国，抽烟的人很多。2.个人观点：在公共场所抽烟应该被禁止。首先在公共场所抽烟对那些不抽烟的人来说是有害的，会导致疾病。还会产生污染。每个人都不应该在公共场所抽烟。【一句多译】首先，在公共场所抽烟对不抽烟的人是有害的，这会导致难以治愈的疾病。for one thing, smoking in public places can do more harm to non-smokers, which lead to many incurable diseases.for one thing, smoking in public places can do more harm to non-smokers, leading to many incurable diseases.【参考范文】as is mentioned in the material, we are confronted with a problem that there are still manypeople smoking in public places in china.from my perspective, smoking in public places should be banned. for one thing, smoking inpublic places can do more harm to non-smokers, which lead to many incurable diseases. foranother thing, it will pollute our envir nment by giving off poisonous chemicals.never will we build and enjoy a beautiful and r-armonious country unless we prohibitsmoking in public places. remember everybody is responsible for it.写作二 (满分20分)高考越来越近，面对繁重的学习任务，担心考试成绩，很多同学表示压力很大，请你向校报写一封信，信中内容应包括： 分析同学压力大的原因提出减压的方法(至少两种建议)表达期望，预祝同学们考试成功注意：(1)词数不少于80；(2)在答题卡上作答；(3)书信格式及开头结尾均已给出(不计入总词数)。参考词汇 高考：college entrance exam【考点】考察班开放性作文【写作指导】本文属于班开放性作文。要求写信给校报说明现象，分析原因，提出方法，表达期望。也属于议论文的范围，所以使用第三人称和一般现在时。要点：1. 高考越来越近，面对繁重的学习任务，担心考试成绩，很多同学表示压力很大；2.原因：担心无法考到高分，达不到父母的期望值。3，方法:听音乐，与朋友交流，多锻炼；4.表达期望：预祝同学们考试成功【一句多译】参加锻炼和出去呼吸新鲜空气也很必要。taking exercise and going out to enjoy fresh air are also necessary.it is also necessary to take exercise and go out to enjoy fresh air【参考范文】dear editor:as the college entrance exam is close, many students are under great pressure,resulting in a lot of problems.some students cant sleep well and find it difficult to concentrate on class. some studentsare always in a bad mood. there are many reasons accounting for these problems. they areafraid that they wont get the ideal scores they expect. they are worried they cant live up to their parents expectations. they even think their future will be totally dark if they fail. these students are almost stressed out.so how to relieve pressure? listen to some music when you feel tired. talk to your friends,your teachers or your parents when you lose confidence. taking exercise and going out to enjoyfresh air are also necessary.those mentioned above are all my suggestions. hopefully these tips can help you. wish yousuccess in the college entrance exam!yours sincerely,lihua五（2014届江西省重点中学盟校高三第二次联考英语试卷）第五部分书面表达（满分25分）假如你是我市一名高三学生李华，你打算报考一所外语学院。你在网络上看到上海外国语学院的招生信息(admission information)，并对此非常感兴趣。根据招生要求，你需要用英语撰写一份个人申请报告，内容应包括： 1记述自己的个性特长及取得的成果； 2说明进入大学后的努力方向及设想等。注意：1.词数：不少于120；开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。dear sir or madam,im writing to apply to study in your university._ im looking forward to hearing from you soon.yours ,li hua【考点】考察半开放性作文【写作指导】本文要求以李华的口吻撰写一份个人申请报告报考上海外国语学院。所以使用第一人称和一般现在时。要点：1记述自己的个性特长及取得的成果：擅长很多科目，演讲和音乐是自己的特长，多次获奖； 2说明进入大学后的努力方向及设想等：想在英语方面取得突破，更多与其他国家的人进行交流。本文对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成本文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。【一句多译】1.而且，我曾经赢得在我市举行的演讲比赛的第一名，因为杰出表现被授予最佳辩手。whats more, i once won the first prizein anenglish speech contest held in our city and was honored the best speaker for my excellent performances.whats more, i once won the first prizein anenglish speech contest held in our city，honored the best speaker for my excellent performances.2. 众所周知，英语是国际语言。as we all know, english is a universal language.it is known to us all that english is a universal language.【参考范文】dear sir or madam,im writing to apply to study in your university. i read about the admission information while surfing the net the other day. im really interested in it.for one thing, im an outgoing girl and i can geton well with all my classmates.for another, i do well in most of my subjects, especially in english. i like reading english poems and enjoy english movies. speeches delivered by famous people like martin luther. king, president bush and so on, are also my favorite. whats more, i once won the first prizein anenglish speech contest held in our city and was honored the best speaker for my excellent performances.as we all know, english is a universal language and i like to communicate with different people, so i intend to major in english if i am admitted into your university. i want to have a job related tolanguages in the future and i believe i can help promote cultural communication between china and the world.im looking forward to hearing from you soon.yours, li hua六（2014届河南省豫东、豫北十所名校高三英语阶段性测试）书面表达（满分25分） 请先仔细观察并描述下面的漫画，然后针对这一社会现象写一篇短文，反映人们对此现象的不同观点并简要陈述自己的观点。注意：1词数100左右； 2开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数；3可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。what should you do if an old man falls down right under your nose?【考点】考察看图作文【写作指导】本文属于看图作文，要求叙述图片内容并陈述个人观点。图表中讲述的正是关于：扶不扶？这一热带社会问题。在叙述图片时，可以使用一般过去时来描述故事。在发表个人观点时，使用一般现在时。要点：1.描述图片：有人看见老人摔倒在地。一个人要去扶。但是周围有人阻止，有人支持。2.发表个人观点：应该去扶。因为帮助他人是中华民族美德，看图作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字，再根据这些要点谋篇布局。要求考生把看到的图画用文字表达出来，除了能表达清楚图画中的信息外，考生还需要根据词数要求，适当拓展并发挥想象，从而使文章的叙述不单调。如果是记叙文类的写作素材，考生要注意故事的时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、过程、结果这六个要素；如果是说明文或议论文，考生则首先要对图画的内容进行描述，然后围绕图画的信息进行说明或议论。此时考生一定要注意把握图画的中心思想，写出图画要反映的内容。【一句多译】大部分人鼓励男孩帮助老人，但是一些人认为男孩不应该提供帮助。most people encouraged the boy to help the man, while some of them thought the boy shouldnt give a handmost people encouraged the boy to help the man, some of them think the boy shouldnt give a hand【参考范文】what should you do if an old man falls down right under your nose?an old man suddenly fell to the ground in a faint just in front of the boy.many people crowded round but nobody would help the old man up.most people encouraged the boy to help the man,while some of them thought the boy shouldnt give a hand because he was likely to get himself into trouble since the old man or his family might insist that he knocked down the old man.even worse,some urged the boy to leave immediately.the boy was troubled by the question as to whether he should help the old man or not.in my opinion,helping others is a traditional chinese virtue.we must give a hand to the old and at the same time we must protect ourselves from being involved in trouble.七（湖南省怀化市2014年高三第二次模拟考试）section c (25 marks)in an english competition, you are required to write an article according to the picture below. look at the picture carefully and write down how you understand it.注意：1、描述图片主要内容，谈谈你的理解及看法； 2、词数不少于120个； 3、文中不能出现考生的具体信息。 【考点】考察看图作文【写作指导】本文属于看图作文。主题是父母亲和孩子的交流处于一个不平等的状态，父母亲的位置过高，不能设身处地为孩子考虑。导致父母亲和孩子之间的交流不够充分。所以本文属于议论文，使用第三人称和一般现在时的时态。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。【一句多译】1.当他们相互交流的时候，父亲和孩子不在平等的位置上。when talking to each other, father and son are not in equal positions.talking to each other, father and son are not in equal positions.2.他们总是尊敬自己的父亲，唯恐他们达不到父亲的要求。they often look up to their fathers with respect, fearing that they might not live up to fathers expectations.they often look up to their fathers with respect , fearing that they might not meet fathers demands.【参考范文】possible version:as we can see from the picture，two people，father and son，are talking to each othertheboy, standing on the ground, is looking up at his father, slightly scared, while his father, seated high on a big chinese character “fu”, meaning “father” , is shouting to his sonsuch a situation seems fairly common in our society. when talking to each other, father and son are not in equal positions. fathers simply tell their sons what to do rather than listen patientlytherefore, sons will have few chances to share their own ideas or open up to their fathersthey often look up to their fathers with respect, fearing that they might not live up to fathers expectations.1 hope our parents will listen to us more instead of just giving us orders. 八.（2014年八.豫南五市高三第二次模拟考试）书面表达（满分25分） 假如你是李华，你的英国朋友john近期将来中国参加短期语言培训。食宿被安排在你市远大路的塔楼酒店。他来信询问酒店的相关信息，请你根据以下图示和信息给他写一封回信。要点如下：。图示信息 住宿费用；每人每天200元 餐厅供餐时间：7：30a.m一9：00 am； 5：30p.m-8：00 pm 注意：1.词数120左右； 2开头已给出，不计人总词数； 3语言通顺，行文连贯，可适当发挥。dear john , im very glad to hear that you will e to my city for short-term language training.looking forward to seeing you very soon._ yours , li hua【考点】考察看图作文与提纲类作文【写作指导】本文既要考生叙述图片中塔楼酒店的位置，也要根据文字提示说明培训具体情况。要使用第三人称和一般现在时。要点：1，塔楼酒店的位置；2. 住宿费用；每人每天200元；餐厅供餐时间：7：30a.m一9：00 am；5：30p.m-8：00 pm在完成图表作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，【一句多译】穿过进口的门，你就会看见一栋高楼塔楼酒店，在它的前面有一个美丽的花园。go through the gate of the entrance, and you will see the high building-tower hotel, in front of which lies a beautiful garden.if you go through the gate of the entrance, you will see the high building-tower hotel, in front of which lies a beautiful garden.【参考范文】dearjohn,im very glad to hear that you will e to my city for short- term language training. in your letter, you asked me something about tower hotel. now idlike to tell you some detailed information about it.tower hotel is located on yuanda road. go through the gate of the entrance, and you will see the high building-tower hotel, in front of which lies a beautiful garden. behind the building is a swimming pool, where you can go swimming for relaxing. near the swimming pool stands a dining hall, and there meals are served from 7:30a.m. to 9:00a.m. and between 5:30p.m. and 8:00 p.m.last but not least, as to acmodation fees, everyone should pay 200 yuan per day. ifyou need further information, please enquire at the reception desk on the ground floor when youve arrived here.looking forward to seeing you very soon. yours,九（2014年山东日照市高三校际联合检测）写作(满分30分)你校的外教thomas想了解刚刚结束的英语口语培训班效果，以便制订下一步的培训计划。假如你是李明，是该培训班学员，想再参加写作培训，请按照所给提示用英语给thomas写一封电子邮件。1说明收获 2表达谢意 3提出建议或要求注意： 1词数：120150： 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。dear thomas，_ yours sincerely， li ming【考点】考察半开放性作文【写作指导】本文是一封书信，属于应用文格式。要求以李明的口吻给外教thomas写信，告知本次培训班的收获，并提出建议和要求。所以要使用第一人称，在描述过去这一次培训时，使用一般过去时。在提出建议或者要求时可以使用一般将来时。要点：1.说明收获。口语得到提高，并交到新朋友；2.表示感谢，希望对方能够再次开设这样的培训班；3.提出建议或者要求：建议对方增加写作方面的培训。完成本文时要充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【一句多译】当我和同学一起的时候，我努力用英语和他们交流，但是我总是犯错误when staying with my classmates, i tried to communicate with them in english, but i often made mistakes.staying with my classmates, i tried to communicate with them in e