高考英语二轮专题精华训练 短文改错（3）.doc

2015届高考英语二轮专题训练精华：短文改错（3）短文改错(2013浙江温州高三第一次适应性测试)last saturday,i went to visit the museum with my classmates.we were interesting in dinosaurs,but we came to the dinosaur world first.there we see many fossils of different kind of dinosaurs.we were both amazed when the guide showed us some dinosaur eggs which they were laid about 9.5 million years ago.then we came to another hall,where many old chinese inventions were in show.when i saw those old things,i felt proud of being chinese.i think the visit very meaningfully.i should study harder to be inventor in the future and make contributions to build our great motherland.答案:last saturday,i went to visit the museum with my classmates.we were in dinosaurs, we came to the dinosaur world first.there we many fossils of different of dinosaurs.we were amazed when the guide showed us some dinosaur eggs which theywere laid about 9.5 million years ago.then we came to another hall,where many old chinese inventions were show.when i saw those old things,i felt proud of being chinese.i think the visit very .i should study harder to be inventor in the future and make contributions to our great motherland.短文改错(2014杭州西湖高级中学高三月考)dear mr.black,im very thank to you for inviting me to stay with you in the come summer vacation.i have been dreamed of seeing you again so that i can get more help from you in my english learning.and im afraid i cannot go to your place in this summer.ive promised my grandmother,she lives in the country,to spend this summer with her.she misses me too much that i find difficult to refuse her request.im busy with preparing for my examinations at present.i planned to visit you in winter if its convenient to you.best wishes.yours truly,li ying答案:dear mr.black,im very to you for inviting me to stay with you in the summer vacation.i have been of seeing you again so that i can get more help from you in my english learning. im afraid i cannot go to your place in this summer.ive promised my grandmother, lives in the country,to spend this summer with her.she misses me much that i find difficult to refuse her request.im busy withpreparing for my examinations at present.i to visit you in winter if its convenient to you.best wishes.yours truly,li ying短文改错mr johnson is a hardworking teacher.every day,he spends too much time with his work.with little sleep and hardly any break,so he works from morning till night.hard work have made him very ill.“he has ruined his healthy.we are worried about him.” that is which other teachers say.yesterday afternoon,i paid visit to mr johnson.i was eager to see him,but outside her room i stopped.i had to calm myself down.quietly i step into the room.i saw him lying in bed,looking at some of the picture we had taken together.i understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.答案:mr johnson is a hardworking teacher.every day,he spends too much time his work.with little sleep and hardly any break,so he works from morning till night.hard work made him very ill.“he has ruined his .we are worried about him.”that is other teachers say.yesterday afternoon,i paid visit to mr johnson.i was eager to see him,but outside room i stopped.i had to calm myself down.quietly i into the room.i saw him lying in bed,looking at some of the we had taken together.i understood that he missed us just as as we missed him.短文改错(2014浙江效实中学高三上学期期始考)dear ralph,im a college student and ill graduating in half a year.im very confused about my future,because find an ideal job is so difficult.at the moment,my parents want me to be a teacher,and i dont like that idea.during my holiday break,i work part-time as a tour guide in my home town.i liked a job very much.but my parents didnt agree to me.they thought the work was difficulty,even though one could make a lot of money.that is the most important to me is that being a tour guide wont take me far from home.i always consider what your parents say,but its hard for me to make a decision.could you give me some advices?john答案:dear ralph,im a college student and ill in half a year.im very confused about my future,because an ideal job is so difficult.at the moment,my parents want me to be a teacher, i dont like that idea.during my holiday break,i part-time as a tour guide in my home town.i liked job very much.but my parents didnt agree me.they thought the work was ,even though one could make a lot of money. is the most important to me is that being a tour guide wont take me far from home.i always consider what parents say,but its hard for me to make a decision.could you give me some ?短文改错i was real sad when i found my bicycle went wrong again.tired of repairing it again and again,i decided buy a new one.after school,i went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a friend called jack.the black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store. it looked so cool that i could hardly wait to ride it.the shopkeepers told us that it was the latest bicycle.he wanted to charge me for 800 yuan,that was too high for me.i just couldnt afford such an expensive one.then i choose another one,which cost him only 200 yuan.it was not perfect,so it was much better than the old one.答案:i was sad when i found my bicycle went wrong again.tired of repairing it again and again,i decided buy a new one.after school,i went to a shop in the center of the city with a friend called jack. black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store. it looked so cool that i could hardly wait to ride it.the told us that it was the latest bicycle.he wanted to charge me for 800 yuan, was too high for me.i just couldnt afford such an expensive one.then i another one,which cost only 200 yuan.it was not perfect, it was much better than the old one.短文改错time spent in a bookstore can be most pleasant,if you are a book-lover or merely there to buy a book as a present.you may even have entered the shop just to find a shelter from a sudden shower.however the reason,you can soon become totally unaware of your surrounding.you soon focus a certain book,and usually it is only much later when you realize you have spent too much time there and must hurry off to make the forgotten appointment.this opportunity to escape the realities of everyday life is the main attraction of a bookstore.a music shop was very much like a bookstore.if it is a good shop,no assistant will approach you with the greeting.you neednt buy something you dont want.in a bookstore an assistant should remain in the background until you have finished reading.then,and only then, is his services necessary.答案:time spent in a bookstore can be most pleasant, you are a book-lover or merely there to buy a book as a present.you may even have entered the shop just to find a shelter from a sudden shower. the reason,you can soon become totally unaware of your .you soon focus a certain book,and usually it is only much later you realize you have spent too much time there and must hurry off to the forgotten appointment.this opportunity to escape the realities of everyday life is the main attraction of a bookstore.a music shop very much like a bookstore.if it is a good shop,no assistant will approach you with the greeting.you neednt buy you dont want.in a bookstore an assistant should remain in the background until you have finished reading.then,and only then, his services necessary.短文改错patience is of great importance in our daily life.once i waited a bus to come at a stop.30 minutes past,but no bus came.both sad and annoyed,i decided to walk on feet.but no sooner had i left when the bus arrived.i thought if i