高考英语书面表达0201 文字提纲式练与评（1）.doc

2013高考英语书面表达02-01：文字提纲式练与评（1）第二部分 2013届高考英语书面表达专题练评试题来源(江苏省石庄高级中学2013届高三开学摸底考试)(改编自2012年高考安徽卷书面表达)假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流，现请你就“高中生对文理科的选择”的话题用英语写一篇发言稿，代表你校所有的学生向他们介绍你所做的选择，并说明选择的理由（从毕业生的就业形势、自己的理想，家长、老师对你的影响等等方面去考虑）。注意： 1.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2.词数150左右；参考词汇：文科 arts; 理科:sciencegood afternoon, everyone.welcome to our school! _ so much for my speech. thank you!讲 评这是一篇发言稿，重头戏是“说明选择的理由”，需要考生自己做合理的联想，理由要合情合理。第一 攫取要点通过审题，我们先攫取以下要点：这是一篇发言稿，所以要有客套话开始，进而引出话题：代表学校所有学生在这儿给来自美国的客人介绍自己“文理科选择”的经历，感到很荣幸。“我”所做出的选择是什么；“我”的理由：毕业生的就业形势、自己的理想，家长、老师对“我”的影响。第二 挖掘要点 既然是谈介绍自己“文理科选择”的经历，那就必然涉及到“我”当时面临选科时的感受：比如：觉得很难选择。说完感受后，顺理成章就可以谈到自己的选择：比如：经过深思熟虑后，“我”决定选择理科(或是文科，考生视自己具体的经历而定) “我”的理由：围绕题目中的提示“毕业生的就业形势、自己的理想，家长、老师的影响”去进行合理的想象来挖掘要点。毕业生的就业形势：比如：根据常识我们知道：中国就业市场理科毕业生需求量高于文科毕业生；第三 化解难点1.代表学校所有学生在这儿给来自美国的客人介绍自己“文理科选择”的经历，感到很荣幸。 on behalf of all the students in our school, i feel extremely honored here to address you guests fromamerica.ill share with you my experience of choosing the main subject between science and arts.on behalf of all the students in our school, i feel it is an honor to introduce you guests from america how i chose the main subject between science and arts. . on behalf of all the students in our school, im very glad to tell you guests from america something about my experience of choosing the main subject between science and arts. 2.当“我”当时面临选科的时候，“我”觉得很难选择。when i was faced with such a choice, i felt it not an easy choice to make faced with such a choice, i felt it ifficult to decide to make which choice. when i faced such a choice, i was confused which choice i should make.3.经过深思熟虑后，“我”决定选择理科。 after careful consideration, i decided on science as my main subject of study. after taking everything into account, i made up my mind to choose science as my main subject of study. everything taken into consideration, i was determined to choose science as my main subject of study.4.中国就业市场理科毕业生需求量高于文科毕业生。 science graduates are in greater demand than arts ones in the employment market of china.in china, it is easier for science graduates to find a job than arts ones.in china , it is easier for science graduates to apply for a job than arts ones.5.选择理科有助于实现“我”童年当一名科学家的梦想。the science major can help me achieve my childhood dream of becoming a scientist.the reason why i have chosen science is that it can help me realize my childhood dream of becoming a scientist.studying science can make me realize my childhood dream of becoming a scientist.6.家长认为“我”学理科有更好的前途，所以希望我学理科my parents wish me to study science at college because they believe i will have a brighter future as a science student.my parents think a science student will have a brighter future so they wish me to study science.第四 过渡自然 (请注意红体字)参考答案（选择理科）good afternoon, everyone.welcome to our school! on behalf of all the students in our school, i feel extremely honored here to address you guests from america, sharing with you my experience of choosing the main subject between science and arts.参考答案（选择文科）good afternoon, everyone.welcome to our school! on behalf of all the students in our school, i feel extremely honored here to address you guests from america, sharing with you my experience of choosing the main subject between science and arts.to tell you the truth, faced with such a choice, i felt it not an easy choice to make. after careful consideration, though, i chose arts as my main subject of study. the reasons are as follows. first, science graduates are in greater demand than arts ones in china, but i am talented at not science but arts. second, the arts major can help me achieve my childhood dream of becoming an artist. third, my parents wish me to study arts because they think it is much easier for arts students to be admitted to a college. last but not l