北京中考英语模拟考试作文汇编 外研版.doc

2012年北京中考书面表达汇编第一部分：北京市中考作文评分标准 . 1第一档：（1513分）完全符合题目要求，表达思想清楚，内容丰富。使用多种语法结构和丰富的词汇，语言通顺，语意连贯，具有逻辑性。允许个别语言错误。第二档：（129分）符合题目要求，表达思想基本清楚，内容完整。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯。有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。第三档：（85分）部分内容符合题目要求，表达思想不清楚，内容不完整。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，影响整体理解。第四档：（40分）与题目有关的内容不多，不能表达出自己的思想。只是简单拼凑提示内容，所写内容难以理解。第二部分：2012北京市年一模、二模英语书面表达范文. 2 第三部分：北京历年中考书面表达范文. 16第二部分：2012北京市年一模、二模英语书面表达范文【海淀一模2012】昨天你高兴地看到许多同学在校园里自觉地做了一些事去保护环境。请你以“learn from them”为题给你校英语周刊投稿。内容包括同学们在校园里的具体做法以及你要向他们学习什么。提示词：pick up the trash, plant, reuse, save参考范文：learn from themnowadays more and more people have done a lot to protect the environment. yesterday, i was glad to see many students volunteer their time to make our school environment better. some students picked up the trash on the playground, some students planted the trees, and other students made posters calling on people to lead a low-carbon life. i was moved by what they did. the environmental protection is not only the business of the government, but also the responsibility of each of us. even a small effort can make a great difference so i made up my mind to learn from them. i will turn off the lights when i leave the room, and i wont keep the water running when i am not using it. besides, reusing some old things i plan to throw away will be my choice. whats more, i will remind people around me to take part in such activities.action speaks louder than words. lets work together! 【海淀二模2012】参考范文：dear jack, im glad to hear from you. its my honor to be with you and show you around beijing. now i will tell you about my plan for your two-day stay here.on the first day, i am going to take you to my school and study with me. in the morning, you can choose 3 classes to listen to. in the afternoon, there will be different kinds of clubs after class. i am sure you will fall in love with my school. on the second day, i plan to have a bus tour to enjoy the sights of beijing. we will get off at tianan men square, where we can feel the perfect mixture of the past and the present. after walking on the magnificent square, we can visit the palace museum. here you can see some wonderful buildings and learn about chinese history better. so, whats your decision? i just cant wait to meet you and youre always welcome！ yours,li fei【丰台一模2012】21世纪英文报初三版开展题为“my best friend in middle school life”的征文，作为初三学生，你应征写文，内容包括：他/她是谁? 突出特点是什么？他/她留给你深刻印象的一件事(如初识、一件难忘的事等)，以及你对你们友谊的展望或期待。（好友的名字用mary或 jack代替）提示词语：kind, friendly, help, hope 参考范文：my best friend in my middle school is jack white. he impressed me deeply with his kindness when we met for the first time. i had a fall when we new students lined up on the playground. jack came over then and helped me. since then, we have become good friends. tom is not only kind, but also smart. he does well in his studies, although not at the top level, and have time for relaxing activities. he always looks happy. ive learned a lot from him. i hope to keep this friendship with him as long as i can, because our life needs friendship. 【丰台二模2012】假设你是学校的安全宣传员，请利用下面本地学生道路伤害事故原因统计图表，写一篇英文短文，向你校的外籍学生介绍那些事故的主要原因，提醒他们注意个人交通安全，针对这些主要原因提出几点保障出行安全的建议,最后，表达你对他们在这里安全、愉快生活和学习的良好祝愿。（不少于60词）参考范文1：road safety is important for every student, especially for the new comers from other countries or places.for the safety of our new friends, id like to tell you first about top two causes of the student accidents that happened here last year. most of them happened just because some students ran the red light, then because they crossed roads carelessly, like not using the crosswalk or listening to music while walking across. those accidents have taught us a big lesson. so please follow the road safety rules while youre using the road. for example, do not run the red light anytime. use a crosswalk to cross a road. look both ways carefully when you are crossing a road.thats all for my story and tips. i hope they can be of some help to your safety. at the end, i wish you all a pleasant, safe life here. 参考范文2：road safety is important for every student, especially for the new comers from other countries or places.for the safety of our new friends, id like to tell you first about top two causes of the student accidents that happened here last year. most of them happened first because some students ran the red light, then because they crossed roads carelessly. those accidents have taught us a big lesson. so please follow the road safety rules while youre on the road. for example, do not run the red light anytime. use a crosswalk to cross a road. look both ways carefully before you go across. all this is good for your road safety. do remember it anytime. at the end, i wish you all a pleasant, safe life here. 【朝阳一模2012】假设你叫李利，是英国中学生大卫的笔友。你收到了他的来信，请你给他写一封回信，回答他的问题，并就这些问题谈谈你的认识和对学校生活的感受。hi! li li,my teacher asks me to write a composition about school life in china. i want to know something about it. i hear your teachers are very strict with you. is that true? how long do you have to stay at school every day? and do you have a lot of homework to do after class? how do you like your school life? im looking forward to hearing from you soon. yours, david参考范文：【西城一模2012】根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。提示词语供选用。某英文报纸就他/她的微笑（his/ her smile）话题征文，请你投稿。 微笑，是对他人表示友善和关爱。微笑可以给人激励，可以使人奋进。请你结合自己的经历谈谈在你的生活中谁的微笑打动了你，为什么他/她的微笑会打动你，你有什么体会。提示词语：show, encourage, difficult, brave, learn to do, feel good, cheer up, try ones best参考范文：smiles are beautiful and important. a smile given to the right person at the right time can brighten that persons day.i was once moved by a smile from my friend. three years ago, when i made a speech on my first day of class, i was so nervous that i couldnt say a word. tony, one of my classmates, sitting in the front row, smiled at me and spoke in a low voice, “yes, you can.” i was greatly encouraged by his smile. his smile was important because it gave me self-confidence. i will never forget my friends smile because ive learned that something so simple can make a big difference.【西城二模2012】参考范文：【东城二模2012】参考范文：【石景山一模2012】某英文杂志正在举办以“how do you get on well with your classmates ?”为主题的征文比赛，假设你是李明，请你写一篇短文参赛，文中请先简单介绍自己，然后说说你平时是怎样与同学相处的，并谈谈你对同学之间友谊的认识或看法。 提示词语：name, together, help, fun, friendship参考范文：how i get on well with my classmates my name is li ming, a fifteen-year-old boy in grade 3 in no.1 middle school. i like making friends and most of my classmates are my good friends.at school, we not only study but also play together. after school we either do homework or have fun together. besides, we often help each other when we meet difficulties. no man is an island, as the saying goes: a man without friends is an angel without wings. i am sure i can fly higher and farther with the wings of friendship.【昌平二模2012】还有一个多月就要中考了。为取得好成绩，老师让我们思考怎样改进学习，提高学习效率。你是怎样想的？你准备怎样改进自己的学习？ senior high school entrance exam, efficiency (效率), improve, think, find, listen, do, ask, hope参考范文： senior high school entrance exam is coming soon. our teacher asked us to think how to improve our learning and get better efficiency. i think it important and necessary to do so. i have learned a lot in school. ill go over what i have learned and find out where my difficulties are according my revision plan. and then ill ask my teacher and classmates for help. keeping healthy and good mood will also do good. i hope i will get good scores and enter my ideal school.【昌平一模2012】请阅读小明的英国笔友mike发来的电子邮件，以小明的身份，写一封不少于60词的回信。请不要使用真实姓名。信的开头和结尾已经给出（开头和结尾不计词数）。hi xiaoming,how have you been? are you still busy with your school work?my school is having a drawing competition now. were asked to draw about the earth in 2050. therere 2 pictures drawn by my classmates in the attachment. i want to ask your opinions on them. which one do you think it would be like in 2050? and why do you think so?look forward to your ideas.all the best,mattachment: picture a picture bhi mike,thanks for your email and sending me the pictures. best wishes,xiaoming参考范文：a.the drawing competition sounds very interesting to me. there must be many smart pictures and ideas about the near future.what i believe will happen in 2050 is still a question to myself at present. but i guess picture a explains the cities in 2050 better, because almost everyone in the whole world have been trying to do their best to protect the environment for long, such as, driving less, or recycling water. whats more, our government is working hard for improving our living conditions. as a result, there will be cleaner streets, easier traffic and life in 2050. do you agree with me?b.the drawing competition sounds very interesting to me. there must be many smart pictures and ideas about the near future.what i believe will happen in 2050 is still a question to myself at present. but i guess picture b describes the cities in 2050 well. although some people are trying to save the environment now, therere still many others having no ideas about the environment protection. for example, i could see a lot of bottles or cans thrown on the way and many fish dying in the dirty rivers. as a result, there wont be great changes but dirtier in 2050. do you agree with me?【通州一模2012】根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。英语老师要组织一个经验交流会，他要求每位同学写一篇发言稿。内容包括：谈谈你对英语学习的认识，介绍你是怎样学习英语的，你希望英语老师在课外活动方面开展哪些活动。提示词语：important, useful, read, listen, speak, english film 参考范文：english is used widely in the world. i think its important for us to learn it well. english is one of my best subjects. but at the very beginning, i am not good at it. then i did a lot to improve my english. firstly, its very important for me to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that i can go over my lessons later. secondly, i try to catch every chance to practice listening and speaking, both in and out of class. im not afraid of making mistakes. i try to read more in english. i believe that nothing is impossible if i put my heart into it. i am so interested in english that i hope my english teacher will hold an english party or english corner for us. then we can listen to beautiful english songs and see interesting english films. i think we can not only improve our listening ability but also have more chances to talk with others in english. 【通州二模2012】假设你叫张明，收到了你的笔友tom的一封信，请你给他写一封回信。在信中回答他的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。dear li ming，i have a problem these days. i dont think our english teacher likes me. she wasnt satisfied with me because i got a c in the exam. my classmate lucy got a c, too. but she praised her. she said lucy had tried her best and spent most time on english, but i didnt. it makes me unhappy. i think its unfair. do you have the same problem? what do you think of my english teacher? what should i do? yours, tom参考范文：dear tom，i have the same problem as you. i can understand you. but i dont think your idea is right. she wasnt satisfied with you because she thought you should work harder. she is strict with you. its good for your study. i think you had better spend more time on your study, and try to improve your english. your teacher will be pleased when you have a great progress. as a student, we should work hard at our lessons and try to understand our teachers. yours， ling ming【大兴一模2012】根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给的英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。某英文报纸就“绿色出行”话题开展征文活动，请你投稿。环境保护，从我做起。目前越来越多的人提倡骑自行车出行。你对此有何认识？你对骑自行车上学有哪些感受？对未来环境你有哪些好的愿望？提示词语：duty, protect, environment, ride bikes, go out, helpful, air, clean, do exercise, traffic jam, hope, believe参考范文：its our duty to protect our environment. more and more people ride bikes when they go out nowadays. its helpful to keep the air clean. i usually ride to school. i only take a bus on a rainy day. on my bicycle i can breathe the fresh air and do some exercise to keep healthy. on the other hand, i can keep away from the traffic jam and make sure i can arrive at school on time. to my joy, i can also do a bit for keep the air clean by riding a bicycle.i hope everybody will join us and take care of our environment in this way. i believe the air around us will be cleaner with the help of us all.【大兴二模2012】根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60个词的回信，信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 假设你叫张华，美国中学生杰克是你的网友，你们约好今年暑假期间他要来你家生活、学习，你收到了他的电子邮件。请给杰克写一个回复，回答他的问题，并谈谈你自己的美好愿望。hi! zhang hua, im going to fly to china and live with you during this summer holiday. i think its a good chance for me to learn chinese from you. but i dont know if i can get used to the life at your home. though chinese food is very delicious, its hard for me to cook a meal on my own. can you give me some help? what shall we do together? i hope to hear from you soon. yours, jack参考范文：hi! jack, im glad you will spend this summer holiday with me at my home. dont worry about the food. my parents will prepare each meal for us. if you dont get used to eating our chinese food, we can buy some western food in the supermarket near my home. i also think its a good chance for us to learn from each other. in our free time i will take you to visit the great wall and other places. during the trips i can practice my spoken english with you. im sure you can also make great progress in chinese. i hope you will get used to the life here soon. so you can have a good time together with our family. perhaps next year, i will have a chance to go to the usa and live with you. im looking forward to your coming. yours, zhang hua【怀柔一模2012】根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。某英文报纸就中学生业余生活话题征文，请你投稿。“中学生业余生活调查”的结果显示: 目前很多中学生喜欢“宅”在家里上网或看电视，而不去参加户外活动。请针对这种情况，谈谈你的看法并给同龄人一些建议。提示词语： surf on the internet, watch tv , play sports, do outdoor activities 参考范文：nowadays, many middle school students prefer to surf on the internet or watch tv all day in their spare time. but they dont want to do any outdoor activities. i dont think this is good for us to do so. instead, we should spend our spare time in a better way. first, wed better do sports regularly. by doing this, we could not only keep healthy but also relax ourselves. it is also a good idea to go out with our friends. such as watching movies, climbing hills or joining some clubs. in a word, as middle school students, it is really important to lead a healthy life.【延庆二模2012】学校志愿者协会招募新成员，打算在暑假期间组织志愿者活动。假设你是li hua，请你写一篇60词左右的短文给志愿者协会，报名参加此次活动。内容应包括：你自己的简要介绍；你要去哪个地方做志愿者？你能做什么事情？你对志愿者工作有什么感受或体会？请不要写出你的校名和姓名。提示词：li hua，student, class four, grade three , the old peoples home, sing, dance, 参考范文：in the lake of my memories, there is a photo which always shines like a pearl. its a gift from my former teachers and classmates in shanghai the best one ive ever got.before i came to beijing, they gave me this photo. i was shocked that the photo was taken a year ago during our spring outing. all my teachers and classmates were in the photo. at the back of the picture, there are 48 signatures and best wishes from them. i read them one by one. i didnt realize that my tears were running down my cheeks until my friends hugged me.i love this special present so much because it shows me the wonderful time which i spent with my dear classmates and teachers. besides, it is their wishes that fill my heart with love and warmth all the time. ill always treasure it as the most valuable pearl in the world. 【延庆一模2012】根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信，信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所完成的回信中。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。成长中每个人都要面对烦恼，并解决问题。假设你叫张华，是美国中学生琳达的朋友。你收到了她的电子邮件，请给她回复，回答她的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。dear zhang hua, last saturday, my friends visited me and asked me to go out to play with them. but my parents didnt allow me to go out and they even talked to my friends about it for a long time. i felt embarrassed in front of my friends. whats more, my parents often told me not to play with them because their grades are not good. do you have the same problem? i need your help. yours, lindadear linda,im glad to hear from you. i hope what i said can help you.yours,zhang hua参考范文：dear linda,im glad to hear from you.yes, i sometimes have the same problem. first of all, i think you should have a talk with your parents. maybe they will say you dont understand them. but at least they wi