北京市高考英语二轮复习专题精讲 第17讲 书面表达一1（上）(1).doc

第17讲 书面表达一经典精讲(上)题一：假设你是李华，你的新西兰笔友nick 将于八月来四川旅游，特来信询问有关旅游景点情况。请根据下表所提供的要点，写一封回信，并表示盼望他的到来。旅游资源许多世界著名的风景名胜，如：九寨沟（海子；清澈见底；色彩斑斓）都江堰水利工程（2，000多年历史；仍在发挥作用）相关信息气候适宜，交通方便注意： 1. 词数100左右，信的格式及开头以为你写好（不记入总词数）。2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 参考词汇：省份province 海子lake 都江堰水利工程dujiangyan irrigation projectdear nick, im glad to hear that youre coming to sichuan in august._yours sincerely,li hua题二：假如你是李晓华，住在江城。你的加拿大笔友bob来信谈到他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡江城的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括表中的内容：自然情况位于长江边、风景优美、适合居住成就经济发展迅速，新建了不少工厂、住房、道路存在问题水、空气污染，交通拥挤对江城发展的看法(内容由考生自己拟定)注意： 回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名。2. 词数120左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。3. 参考词汇:经济economy 题三：假定你是李华，你的美国朋友jack将要来中国游览黄鹤楼，请根据下面的提示给jack写一封信介绍有关黄鹤楼的情况。 提示如下：黄鹤楼位于湖北省武汉市，高54.1米；始建于1600多年前，在1981-1985年间政府曾 重修，起初用于战争，现在对公众开放；曾有很多诗人登楼望远，写下了优秀诗篇；吸引众多中外游客，得到很高评价。 题四：假定你是李华，你的英国朋友alice将要来中国游览你的家乡青岛，请根据下面的提示给alice写一封信介绍有青岛的情况。提示如下：1. 位于山东省东部。 2. 以蓝色的大海，美丽的海滨而闻名，是避暑胜地。 3. 每年夏天来自全国各地成千上万的人们到这里沿海漫步、游泳、购物、观赏秀丽景色。 4. 近年来城市发生巨大变化，对发展我国对外贸易起重要作用，成为国际港口城市。题五：假定你是李华，你的英国朋友alice将要来中国游览你的家乡安徽，请给alice写一封信介绍有安徽的情况。题六：假定你是李华，你的英国朋友alice将要来中国游览杭州的西湖，请给alice写一封信介绍有西湖的情况。题七：假设你是李华，是北京师范大学的学生， 明年夏天即将毕业。请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下自己的基本情况。要点如下：1. 年龄23；2. 喜欢上网，爱学习，对英语最感兴趣，口语非常流利。3. 性格开朗，自信，喜欢与人交往，有较强的组织能力和团队协作精神；4. 喜欢教师这个职业，希望能成为一名人民教师，实现自己的梦想。注意：词数100左右；参考词汇：专业major题八：请根据下面的表格提示用英语写一篇短文介绍一下姚明。词数：100左右出生日期1980.9.12身高2.26米体重134公斤最喜欢的食品肉最喜欢的颜色蓝色出生地上海座右铭相信自己个人经历1997：进入上海篮球队1998：入选国家队2000：入选亚洲全明星队2002：加盟休斯顿火箭队（houston rockets）2007：于叶莉结婚题九：world youth (monthly) 有一“人物”专栏，刊登各国青年人物的图片。你校校友王小平的照片被采用。请根据以下资料写一段说明，以便随图发表。（100词左右）姓名王小平国籍中国出生年月1966年2月职业计算机高级工程师简历1984年7月毕业于西安四中，同年进入西安交通大学学习。1989年起在西安的一家计算机公司工作。主要事迹1、93年获计算机博士学位； 2、一家美国公司欲高薪聘用，但被他拒绝；3、1998年因特殊贡献获金奖。题十：姓名安在旭（ahn jae wook）年龄29性别男职业歌手、演员国籍韩国（south korean）简历1994年，毕业于汉城艺术大学(seoul arts university)1994年， 在电视剧“song of blind bird” 中扮演了韩国的第一位盲人医生kang young woo1997年， 出版了第一张专楫“forever”2000年， 出版了一张“forever”的中文版(chinese version) 2001年4月22日， 在中华世纪坛(the china millennium monument)为支持北京申奥(beijing olympic bid)与中国歌手同台演出。2001年5月18日，在北京的音乐会演中加入韩国 n.g.r演唱组演出。今年他已经计划到中国的其它的城市演出。备注一位深受中国青少年喜爱的歌手注意：1. 100120 2. 用文段形式做人物介绍第17讲 书面表达一经典精讲(上)题一：dear nick,im glad to hear that youre coming to sichuan in august. youve made the wise choice to travel here. sichuan province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as jiuzhaigou and dujiangyan irrigation project.jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lakes, of which the water is clear and looks colorful. it can excite visitors imagination. another attraction is dujiangyan irrigation project. it was built over 2,000 years ago and is still playing an important part in irrigation today. besides, the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trop more enjoyable. im sure youll have a good time.im looking forward to your coming. yours sincerely, li hua 点评：本文要点齐全、语法正确；本文使用了一些好的句式、定语从句和过渡词，提高的文章的档次。题二：dear bob, its very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. now id like to tell you something about my hometown jiangcheng. the city stands on the bank of the changjiang river. it is a beautiful place for people to live in. its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. new factories, houses and roads have been built. more schools and hospitals are available for its people. however, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. in my opinion, jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. i would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that well have a better hometown in future. yours, xiao hua点评：本文要点齐全、语法正确；本文使用了一些好的句式、宾语从句、精彩的短语和过渡词，提高的文章的档次。题三：dear jack, im glad that you will come to china to visit the yellow crane tower. let me introduce it to you. the yellow crane tower is one of the well-known places of interest in china. it lies in wuhan, hubei province, and is about 51.t meters high. it was built more than 1,600 years ago and rebuilt from 1981 to 1985 by the government. at the beginning, it was only used for wars, but now it is open to the public.if you climb up the tower, youll see a beautiful view. many famous poets wrote good poems about it. in fact, the scenery around the tower is really a model. as a result, it has attracted lots of tourists from home and abroad, most of whom think highly of yellow crane tower.in construction, its one of the best man-made projects in china. why not come here to enjoy yourself as soon as possible?looking forward to seeing you very soon.yours, li hua 点评：本文简洁明快地介绍了黄鹤楼，层次清楚，用词得当；复合句的适当运用给文章增添了几分生动。题四：dear alice, im glad that you will come to china to visit my hometown qingdao . let me introduce it to you.the city of qingdao is in the east of shangdong province. it is famous for the blue sea and beautiful beaches. it is a wonderful place for summer holidays. tens of thousands of people from all parts of the country visit qingdao every summer. they walk along the beach, go swimming or do some shopping. they can see fine view of the city. great changes have taken place in qingdao in the recent years. it has played an important part in the development of the foreign trade of our country. it has become an international port citylooking forward to seeing you very soon.yours, li hua 点评：本文简洁明了地介绍了青岛这个海滨城市；本文使用了一些精彩的短语，提高的文章的档次。题五：our province anhui province is located in the southeast of china. it is an area rich in natural resources. mount huangshan is the most beautiful sight in china as well as in the world. the weather in anhui is neither too cold in winter nor too hot in summer. anhui is famous for its tea and wine. its capital city hefei is a city of hi-tech. there are more than ten universities in hefei. the college graduates make up a strong force of labour. the ustc (university of science and technology of china) sends hundreds of students to study in the usa each year. an american professor interprets ustc as the united states training center, isnt it interesting?点评：本文首先介绍了安徽省的位置，然后抓住了安徽省的一些鲜明特点：如有全国著名的旅游胜地黄山、驰名中国的茶叶和酒以及著名的中国科技大学等一一进行了描述，使读者在短时间内获得了大量的信息。题六：the city i like besti have been to several other cities . hangzhou is the one that i like best.hangzhou is a beautiful city. the west lake with mountains all around is the prettiest part. it takes on a different look with the change of seasons. in spring, the path around the lake is lined with green trees and pink peach flowers. it fills me with strength and energy. in summer, sitting by the quiet and peaceful lake with green lotus leaves and white or pink lotus flowers everywhere helps me to forget all my worries. when i step on the golden leaves in autumn, it gives me a feeling of good harvest. in winter, the trees and paths covered with white snow bring me a pure and noble feeling. the whole city is just like a big garden. no wonder its compared to the paradise on the earth. in addition , there are many places of interest worth visiting.therefore, i like hangzhou better than any other city.点评：1. 这是一篇描写西湖的短文。西湖文明于世。作者抓住杭州的西湖这一主要景点，通过对春、夏、秋、冬西湖多变的景致的详尽描述，为读者展示了一副人间仙境，唤起了读者心中对西湖的赞叹。2. 为了增强文章的表达力，作者多处使用了复杂句式。如： when i step on the golden leaves in autumn, it gives me a feeling of good harvest.（含有when引导的时间状语从句的复合句） hangzhou is the one that i like best.（含有that引导的定语从句） the west lake with mountains all around is the prettiest part. (含有with复合结构作定语)3. 使用非谓语动词：in winter, the trees and paths covered with white snow bring me a pure and noble feeling.（含有过去分词作定语）；sitting by the quiet and peaceful lake with green lotus leaves and white or pink lotus flowers everywhere helps me to forget all my worry. (含有动名词作主语)4. 使用了一些高级短语：take on（呈现）; be lined with（两边排列着）; step on采在上; a feeling of一种的感觉; be covered with（被覆盖着；of interest（有趣的），etc.5. 为了使上下文连接紧密而使用了过度词：in addition, therefore, etc.题七：i, a 23-yea-old student, studying in beijing normal university, will graduate next summer.i have wide and various interests, of which surfing the internet is my favorite. i think its fun to study my lessons. my major is english, and i have great interest in it. so im always doing well in english exams. besides, my oral english is quite fluent. whats more, as an outgoing and confident person, i love to communicate with others, so im easy to get along with. therefore, i have developed good organizational skills as well as team spirit.what is most important for me is that i like teaching very much, which is the most glorious under the sun. im looking forward to becoming a teacher to realize my childhood dream. 点评：本文思路清晰、结构合理。作者在介绍时，多处使用了复合句，这就增加了文章的表达力同时也体现的作者深厚的语言功底；此外，为了使下文衔接紧密，作者还使用了besides, therefore, what s more等过渡词语。 题八：yao ming, who is now 2.26meters tall and 134 kg in weight, was born in shanghai on september 12, 1980. it is said that he likes meat best and his favorite color is blue. his motto is that one must believe in oneself.he joined shanghai basketball team in 1997and became a member of china national team in 1998. two years later he was chosen as a member of asian all-star basketball team. in 2002, he was selected into the houston rockets in the nba draft. and on august 6,2007, he got married to ye li, a beautiful chinese girl.he is a top player both in china and all over the world.点评：本文简洁明了地介绍了中国著名篮球运动员姚明；本文使用了一些好的句式、精彩的词汇短语，提高的文章的档次。题九：this is wang xiaoping, a senior engineer of a famous computer company in china. he was given a gold medal in 1998 for having played an important part in scientific research. he was born in china in february, 1966. having graduated from xian jiaotong university. nine