高考英语冲刺模拟作文精选六篇.doc

2015年高考英语冲刺模拟作文精选六篇假如你是李华，最近你从报纸上看到一家涉外酒店招聘暑期兼职工的广告，请你根据下列要点提示写一封应聘信。1.李华，女，18岁，身体健康。2.擅长英语，口语流利。3.性格外向，交际能力强。注意：1.词数120左右。2.书信格式已经给出，不计入总词数。3.可以适当拓展。dearsirormadame,_yours,lihuadearsirormadame,iamwritinginresponsetoyouradvertisementinthenewspaper.mynameislihuaandiam18yearsold.ithinkiwillbefitforthejobasawaitressinyourhotelthissummervacation.myadvantagesareasfollows:firstly,iamhealthyandstrong.icanworkforlonghoursinsummer.secondly,myenglishisexcellent.icanspeakenglishfluentlyandhavenodifficultycommunicatingwithforeigners.finally,iamoutgoingandgoodatcommunicatingwithothers.asaresult,iampopularamongmyclassmatesandteachers.iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemethechancetoworkinyourhotel.imlookingforwardtoyourreply.yours,【解析】试题分析：要求考生给一家招聘暑期兼职工的涉外酒店写应聘信。要符合提示所给要求，保证字数在120左右。亮点分析：文中运用了较好的从句和复合句，如开头用复合句介绍自己“mynameislihuaandiam18yearsold”简单却能使内容清晰，条件状语从句“iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemethechancetoworkinyourhotel.”等；文中多处运用到好的固定短语，如“inresponseto”“befitfor”“havenodifficultyindoingsth”“begoodatdoingsth”等；第二部分根据提示介绍优点，较好的运用了连接词“firstlysecondlyfinally”，使文章逻辑层次分明，条理清晰；最后有适当的扩展，并且结尾有礼有节，是一篇较好的考场作文。考点：考查应用文写作假如你是新华中学的学生李华。某学生英文报正在招聘兼职的学生记者，你向应聘。请根据以下要点给该报社写一封自荐信。信的开头已经给出。1.写信目的: 对兼职记者感兴趣，决定应聘。2.自身优势: 知识面广, 英语水平高，写作能力强；3.有过类似的经历（学校广播站记者）；4.性格外向，善于交际，乐意与他人合作。5.个人要求: 希望能收到回复，并被聘用。写作要求1只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。3信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总数。评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。dear sir,i am a student from xinhua middle school and i am glad to learn that you need a few more part-time english reporters. dear sir,i am a student from xinhua middle school and i am glad to learn that you need a few more part-time english reporters.interested in the job, i am writing to apply for it because i think i am quite fit for it. as a student, i have not only a wide range of knowledge but also a good command of english. besides, i am so good at writing that i have ever had such a similar experience as working as a reporter for my school broadcasting station. also i am easy-going, skilled at communicating and always willing to work with others cooperatively. i am looking forward to your timely reply and hope that i will be lucky enough to take the job.假设你是李华，前儿天你参加了 cloud travel agency组织的长白山三日游。下面是该旅行社的广告，请根据下面广告中箭头所指内容对其不实之处向消费者协会写一封投诉信。注意：1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好。dear sir or madam,im writing to express my complaint about the service of cloud travel agency. _dear sir or madam,im writing to express my complaint about the service of cloud travel agency.a few days ago, i joined a three-day trip to changbai mountain with this travel agency. i found a few differences between their ads and action.as they say, they provide a large air-conditioned bus, but we only rode in a shabby bus without any air-conditioner. yes, they served us lunch, but the food tasted terrible, some even with sand. we didnt enjoy any kind of shower; we only bathed in cold water. as for sightseeing, the guides led us to several expensive souvenir shops, which wasted us much time. as a result, two scenery spots were left unseen in the end.we do hope something can be done to prevent such things happening again.regards,li hua试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。根据下面广告中箭头所指内容对其不实之处向消费者协会写一封投诉信。要点是以该旅行社的广告呈现出来的，动笔前要好好审题，仔细的阅读旅行社的广告会发现有4点和实际不符合，要把要点说明清楚，审题时注意本文使用一般过去式，描述要点时要运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。as they say, they provide a large air-conditioned bus, but we only rode in a shabby bus without any air-conditioner.和as for sightseeing, the guides led us to several expensive souvenir shops, which wasted us much time.这两句话写得都很好。点评：考查应用文关键在于审题，全面包括要点。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，还有运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。假设你是李华，在互联网上看到英国高中生tom登的一则启事：希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言和文化。请你以李华的名义用英文给tom发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：1. 你怎样得知tom的愿望；2. 你愿意成为他的朋友；3. 你打算如何帮助他；4. 你盼望他的回复。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 电子邮件的格式已为你写好，但不计入总词数。dear tom,ive learned _yours sincerely,li huaone possible version:dear tom,ive learned it from the internet that you want to make a chinese friend so as to learn the chinese language and culture. im glad that you show such great interest in china and i would like to be your friend.ill try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the chinese culture. when you have an opportunity to come to china, ill teach you how to speak chinese and show you around some famous historical places of interest. anyway, im going to help you as much as i can. how do you think?im looking forward to your reply.yours sincerely,li hua试题分析：考查半开放性短文写作，本文的中心思想是我想成为tom的好朋友，你是通过互联网了解到这个消息，并愿意成对方的好友。可以在如何帮助他这一方面逐步展开，从中国的历史，文化，习俗等方面出发。最后表达希望对方的恢复。点评：平时学习时多进行作文模板的记忆，万能句型的积累，高中作文写作要注意 在写作之前，首先对题目进行认真的审清，并在脑海中回想自己积累的哪些句式、句型、单词能用进来，这些单词、句型都应是经典的，不会错的。写的过程中，多注意灵活使用定语从句，包括非限制性定语从句。要熟悉英美人写文章的习惯，遇到专有地名、人名一定要用非限制性定语从句，强调唯一性。平时的英语作文就可以多尝试使用这些表达，考试时才能游刃有余，胸有成竹。假定你是李华，有一位美国朋友，smith托你在北京找工作。你看到21世纪英文报（“21st century”）上登载了一则招聘启事，email发给smith，告别此事。广告原文如下：foreign teachers wanted!the education- department of the ladder company is running an english course for children and adults.requirements:1. native english speaker2. university degree in education or related field preferred3. foreign expert certification(证明)if you are interested, please call us: tel: 86-10-68019433 e-mail: lieebjhotmail, com beijing ladder informationcompany limited注意：1.开头语已为你写好。2.介绍须包括所有内容，但不要逐条译成英语。3.报导的长度为80-120词。dear smith,i know you want to find job in beijing.one possible version: dear smith, i know you want to find a job in beijing. i read an advertisement in todays “21st century”, an english paper here. a beijing ladder information company is running a school. so they need native speaker english teachers. what they prefer is a university degree in education or other related fields, which you have. and a foreign expert certification is also requiredi think you are the right person they want. if you are interested, please directly call or write to the company. the telephone number is 86-10-68019433, and their e-mail address is: good luck,lihua书面表达。 假设你是李华，读了下面一则广告后，想要应聘。请根据广告要求和表格所给的信息，替李华写一封应聘信，介绍自己的个人情况、兴趣爱好和能力。信的开头已给出。 要求：1. 有完整的书信格式； 2. 词数：70词左右。 students wanted for summer camp (夏令营)boys and girls aged 14to 16are you good with children?kids summer camp needs help with sports computers music come and jion us! please send your e-mail to nameageschoolinterestscanlihua15no.7 middle schoolreading, computers,swimming, basketballplay the