中考英语二轮专题训练 作文训练.doc

作文训练一、在初中三年的学习生活中，父母、老师给了我们很多帮助。假设你是李明，在即将毕业之际，用英语写一段文字以表达感激之情。感谢的对象在父母、老师中任选其一。内容必须包括以下提示点：1、感谢的对象及原因；2、举例说明帮助你的事由、经过和结果；3、你的感受和打算。注意：1、文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；2、词数在80-100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数。dear _words cant show my thanks to you, _best wishesyoursli ming【答案】dear mr/mrs/miss x,words cant show my thanks to you.youve helped me a lot in my studies since i came to this school.when i was in trouble,you used to encourage me and give me some advice.at one time i failed to pass an english test and i was very sad about it.you came and cheered me up.you told me some good ways to improve english.with your help,ive made great progress in english.im so thankful to you for your kind help that ill work harder and try to do better in the future.best wishes yours li mingdear mum/dad/mum and dad,words cant show my thanks to you.youve taken good care of me in the past three years.when i was in trouble,you used to encourage me and cheer me up.once i argued with my classmates and i didnt know how to deal with it.you talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others.with your help,ive become a popular boy/girl and made a lot of friends.im so thankful to you for your love and care that ill work harder and try to do better in the future.best wishes yours li ming【亮点说明】本文用了一些短语和句式，增加了文章的色彩。如：in trouble；at one time；make great progress in; take good care of; argue with; talk with; work hard等。短文中还用了一些连词如：when，that，and等，使句子结构更加复杂化，增加了文章的亮点。二、英语课上，老师向同学们介绍了2015年度“最美孝心少年”的感人事迹，你深受感动。请你用英语写一则日记，写出自己的感受。内容要点及要求：1. 表明自己将向“孝心少年”学习；2. 你将在日常生活、学习中做些什么来孝敬父母；3. 词数：80左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。提示词（可选用）：learn from, respect, care for, do some housework, study hardmonday, june 30 sunny this morning, our english teacher told us some stories about “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2015 ”. 【答案】monday, june 30 sunnythis morning, our english teacher told us some stories about “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2013”. i was deeply moved. those teenagers set us a good example in respecting and caring for parents.i used to make my parents unhappy and now i feel ashamed about it. i think i should learn from them. i will help do some housework and take good care of my mum and dad when they are ill. i will try my best to study hard so that i can enter the key high school in our city. i hope i can become a filial piety youth like them. (88 words)【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:set an example for为树立榜样；used to do sth过去常常做某事；take care of照顾；try ones best to do sth尽力做某事；强调句式it is adj for sb to do sth，做某事对某人来说怎么样等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。三、为了配合“足球进校园”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷的身份，根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。常 识历史悠久，深受喜爱世界杯4年举行一次好 处男生女生皆可参加利于培养团队精神考生自拟(至少1点)偶 像梅西，有足球天赋梦 想考生自拟(至少1点)注意：1. 词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇：梅西 messidear classmates,im very excited to hear that china will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020. thank you for your attention.【答案】dear classmates,im very excited to hear that china will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020. football has a very long history. it is liked by people all over the world. the world cup takes place every four years. playing football has lots of advantages. first, both boys and girls can take part in it. second, it helps develop team spirit. whats more, playing football is good for our health. im a football fan. messi is my hero. he has a gift for playing football. my dream is to become a famous football player like messi. i hope china will hold the world cup some day. thank you for your attention.写作亮点：本文语言精炼，像第二自然段的football has a very long history. it is liked by people all over the world. the world cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. whats more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，简洁，但是句意表达清楚；同时，本文用了被动语态、动名词作主语、不定式作表语等等语法形式，使表达生动；用了first, second等使得短文层次清楚。四、每年夏天，溺水事故频发。 请你就此写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。内容包括： 1.我们应该如何防止此类事故发生？（两点建议） 2.如果看到有人落水，我们应该如何施救？ 3.呼吁同学们热爱生命，注意安全。 作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中提到出现的学校真实姓名。 2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 almost every year in summer, many people are reported dead from drowning accidents. how to prevent such sad accidents?【答案】almost every year in summer, many people are reported dead from drowning accidents. how to prevent such sad accidents?in my opinion, we shouldnt go swimming in dangerous places or places we know little abou, such sa reservoies and rivers . second , we had better not swim when we feel tired or hungry. if we see someone fall into the water, we shouldsave him in a perpor way . for example , we can shout loudly as we can to get those with good swimming skills to help him. life is valuable . we should take it seriously. we must remember that safety should always come first while swimming.写作亮点：这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当。如提建议的句式：in my opinion, we shouldnt go, we had better not swim.条件状语从句等。五、假定你是李华，你的英国笔友peter来信询问汉语中一些流行的网络语言的意思，请根据下列提示回一封电子邮件。 点赞（dianzan）：赞同、喜爱 任性（renxing）：随心所欲 秒杀（miaosha）：快速达到目的 土豪（tuhao）：很富有 。注意：1. 词数80-100； 2. 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不能出现真实的校名和人名； 4. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。dear peter,as the internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in chinese. here are some examples. all the best! yours,li hua【答案】dear peter,as the internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in china. here are some example.one of the most popular words is dianzan,which is often used when you quite agree with someone. another example is renxing. when you say somebody is renxing,you mean that they will do whatever they like. the phrase miaosha first came from online shopping, which means you can complete your shopping order before others. but now its widely used when you achieve your purpose in a very short time. if you descibe somebody sa a tuhao, you mean that he is very rich. you can find lots of such new chinese words. keep learning , youll know more about our language and culture.all the best!yoursli hua写作亮点：这篇短文语言无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。在具体的写作中句式丰富，如：定语从句which is often used when you quite agree with someone. another example is renxing.，宾语从句; you mean that they will do whatever they like,条件状语从句: if you descibe somebody sa a tuhao, you mean that he is very rich.等。六、 你校将开设一些特色课程，学生可根据兴趣进行选择。请根据以下内容提示为学校英文网页写一篇短文，介绍这些课程、提出你建议增设的课程并说明理由。students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest. 注意：1. 参考词汇：模型制作 model making 2. 词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。【答案】students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest. these courses will help students relax themselves after school. there are many courses for them to choose, such as english drama, football, or model making. here is more information. if you want to improve your oral english, english drama may be the first choice. it is a good chance to practice not only oral english, but also performing skills. if you are interested in football, take the football course. it is good for your physical health. besides, you can learn more about teamwork. what about model making? you will be amazed by the science world and become interested in it. for my part, a painting course can be added, because students like drawing so much. i hope these courses would be helpful and each student would enjoy a bright and colorful school life here!写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的范文。短文中作者按照题目的要求给我们介绍了学校即将开设的三个特色课程的活动内容，又发挥想象力补充了第四个课程painting course,内容完整，要点全面，语句通顺，符合题目要求。短文中作者使用了正确的时态和人称，句式表达符合英语的规范。作者还使用了丰富的句型和句式，如here are many courses for them to choose, such as english drama, football, or model making、it is a good chance to practice not only oral english, but also performing skills.、besides, you can learn more about teamwork、for my part, a painting course can be added, because students like drawing so much等。这些句型的使用从整体上提高了作文的档次，显示了作者较高的写作能力。七、假设你叫李磊，请你针对这封信的内容，给这位父亲写封回信，谈谈你的看法。要求：条例清楚，语义连贯，句式规范，字迹工整。词数80左右。 dear editor, im sorry to trouble you. i have a daughter. she is 13 years old. she likes making telephone calls. as soon as he gets back from school, she picks up the telephone and calls her classmates. she talks and talks, sometimes for 2 or 3 hours. we cant use it. i tell him not to do it, but she is unhappy. what should i do? a worried father 【答案】dear sir, dont worry. you can have a word with her and tell her what to do. as a student, she must put her heart into the study. making telephones too much is bad for her study. if she goes on doing it, you can tell it to her teachers. i think they can help you. you can also find out whom your daughter calls up. you may ask their parents for help. you may buy a telephone for her. she can make telephone calls with her own telephone, but she must pay for it by herself.yours, li lei 书面表达做题策略： 1. 详细审题，判定体裁 2. 明确题材，确定时态、人称 3. 按照要求，锁定要点 4. 根据要点，选定词句 5. 文笔流畅，结构紧凑 6. 一气呵成，誊写清楚 7. 审慎推敲，消灭遗漏 8. 单词拼写，时态、语态、语气，主谓、标点皆须细致 9. 遵我八法，水到渠成！ 八、卫生健康饮食：健康一直是人们关注的问题。我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据下面提示内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的发言稿（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。主要内容有：保持健康的重要性，保持健康的方法或结论，你对健康的看法（如：多吃水果蔬菜，保持饮食平衡，多锻炼以健身强体，减少不良习惯）dear boys and girls， 【答案】dear boys and girls，here is my advice about how to keep healthyas a middle school student , first youd better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping ropethen you should pay attention to your diet or mealsdont eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruitthird you need enough sleep or restnext keep yourself happyas people often say smiling makes youngerlast you mustnt drink wine or smokethey are bad for your healththat is my advicei hope you are healthy and enjoy your lifethank you, bye!九、人生要经历很多次考试，很多人都有不同程度的考试压力，请你根据表格中提示的内容以“how to deal with the exam stress”为题写一篇英语短文。适当的压力积极思考，认真学习;及时复习，防止遗忘。过重的压力无法入睡，非常疲倦; 害怕考试，导致失败;应对的措施合理计划，好的习惯，足够的锻炼，健康的饮食，才能感到轻松并取得好成绩。提示词：actively(积极的), review(复习), fear the exams(害怕考试), fail(失败), form some good habits(养成好的习惯), diets(饮食), relaxed(轻松的)要求:1.用上所给要点和提示词（可适当发挥），使短文连贯、通顺;2.词数80左右，短文首句已给出，不计入总词数;3.文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。how to deal with the exam stresseveryone may have the exam stress. a little bit of stress can be a good thing to us. 【答案】possible version: how to deal with the exam stresseveryone may have the exam stress. a little bit of stress can be a good thing to us. if we have proper stress, we can think actively and work harder. besides it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them. so we can pass the exams easily.however, if we have too heavy stress, we cant sleep well at night and we may feel too tired. we may fear the exams too much and fail in the end.in my opinion, to deal with stress, wed better plan and prepare well. we should also form some good habits, such as enough exercise and healthy diets. then well feel relaxed and do well in the exams.写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头考试带来的压力的好处，接下来介绍考试压力的不利之处，最后指出我们解决考试压力。此处用了remind us to，feel too tired