浙江省台州市英语高考复习研讨会资料高三写作训练(吕娅）.ppt

高三阅读教学中的写作训练 温岭中学吕娅 writing orientedreading englishwritingskills languageacquisition stylesofwriting information organizationofthearticle vocabularyandsentencestructures 再创语境 迁移运用结构句式和词汇 resonatethetopicsoftheunitinterestthestudentsauthentic example1 createanewsituationforpractisinglanguagestructures 选修8 cloning unit2 cloninghasalwaysbeenwithusandisheretostay ithappensinplantswhengardenerstakecuttingsfromgrowingplantstomakenewones butatlastthedeterminationandpatienceofthescientistswasrewardedin1996withabreakthrough infactwearealongwayfrombeingabletocloneexactanimals writeapassageaboutwenchuanbigearthquake usingthestructuresandsomeexpressionsinthereadingcloning sth have hasalwaysbeenherewithusandit they is areheretostaysth sb berewardedwithsth elsesth happensinsth sb when where sb is arealongwayfrombeingabletodosth thefollowingaretakenfromthess writingsinclass topicsthatintereststudents 李魏 李广垠 吴霓霜 孙超 蒋林 naturaldisastershavealwaysbeenwithusandareheretostay merelyamonthago aterribleearthquakehappenedinwenchuanwhenquantitiesofschoolsandbuildingswereleveledandthousandsofpeoplewereburied butwherethereisadisaster therearealwaysloveandhope asisknowntousall manybraveandunselfishsoldiersdevotedthemselvesinrescuework theywereundoubtedlyrewardedwiththewonderstheybroughttothewounded althoughthefutureisbrightandfullofhope wearestillalongwayfrombeingabletorebuildourhometownagain socheerupandwewillfinallysucceed 王林萍 林璐 缪天衡 刘斌 earthquakehappenedinwenchuanwheremostofthecitywasruinedandthemajorityofthepeoplewerekilled butthechinesepeopledidn tloseheart theconcentrationhasalwaysbeenwiththepeopleinquake hitareaandistheretostay thereliefworkandgreateffortswererewardedwithmanypeople slivesandtheirstrongbeliefinreconstructingtheirhometown althoughwearealongwayfrombeingabletorebuildthecity everycontributioncounts ifeveryonegivesahand thefutureofsichuanwillbemuchbrighter 王开 颜开 陈泽 anearthquakehappenedinwenchuanwhenitwasburiedinruinsinaminute lovingcarefromthewholecountryhasalwaysbeenwithusandistostay thesoldiersandvolunteers greateffortsandpatiencewererewardedwiththesuccessfulreliefwork althoughwearealongwayfrombeingabletorebuildthecity webelieveoureffortswillberewardedwithabetterfutureofwenchuan 潘安娜 梁心悦 郭威 卢益 anearthquakehappenedinwenchuanwherealmostthewholecitywasruined ourconcentrationhasalwaysbeenwiththepeoplethere afterseveraldays fight thesoldiersandgovernment sworkwasrewardedwithmanypeople slifeandtheirstrongbeliefinthepartyandourgovernment althoughwearealongwayfromtherebuildingofthecity ibelievewithourdeterminationandcontribution wecanfinallysucceedinbringingbacktheruinedcitytolife afewdaysago astrongearthquakehitsichuanprovinceinchina causingmillionsofpeopletolosetheirlivesorbecomehomeless however lovehasalwaysbeenwiththemandistheretostay 钱俏 example2 createanewsituationforpractisingwordsandexpressions 选修8 meetingyourancestors unit5 pickoutthewordsandexpressionswhichyouthinkcanbeusedtodescribethefollowingsituation filledwithexcitementandwonder youhavebeenlookingaheadtothespecialdaywhenyoucaninviteyourgirl boyfriendhomeandhaveafeastwithyourfamily andthatdayarrives students writing whensarahsuggestedtakingherboyfriendhomefordinner herparentsweresurprisedbutoverjoyed shewaslookingforwardtothatspecialday worryingaboutwhetherherparentswouldapplaudherchoice ifonlyshecouldlookaheadtothefuture thespecialdaycame itwas6 00pmalready buthedidn tturnupyet hersensewasbecomingdizzywithworrywhensuddenlytherewentthedoorbell herspiritsbegantoriseandjumpedupfromthechair runningtoopenthedoor students writing itishe shescoopedtheyoungman smilingwithrelief honey you vefinallyarrived duringthemeal herboyfriendbehavedasgentlyaspossible onleaving hetouchedherlipsandherface itwasaperfectdayforthem 李竹 张昕玲 高雅文 刘开 example3 somewordsandexpressionsusedinstudents ownstories 词汇的理解 运用 掌握过程无主题写段落 自由编写 给学生搭建一个平台 任由他们自由畅快 淋漓尽致地展开想像 创造出自己的故事 不在于形式的如何 而在于语言的运用 继而掌握 example3 askstudentstocreatetheirownstoriesusingthenewwordsandexpressions 选修9 australia unit3 yourownstorywiththesewordsandphrases barrierassociate withglance glimpseatadequate enormousberesponsiblefordefence offencecorrespondwith students writing1 jacklikestravellingaroundtheworld inthepasttenyears hehasvisitedlotsofplacesofinterestsuchasthegreatbarrierreef whichhasenormousnumberofcreatures duringhistravelling jackisalwayscorrespondingwithhisfriends tellingthemtheinterestingstories oncehewenttoexploretheamazonjungle hepreparedadequatefoodwithhisguider alen alenisresponsibleforhisjobandshowedjackthesplendorecologyintheamazonjungle timepermitting notonlydidjackhaveaglanceatthebeautifulviews butalsoexperiencethenativelife nowhekeepsgoodtermswiththelocalpeople jackenjoyshislifeandhewillcontinuehisdiscovery 陈逸婧 students writing2 althoughthemainlandwasassociatedtotaiwanbysendingtouriststhereinthenewyear thebarrierbetweenthemappearedtougherandtougher recently taiwandismissedthebanningofweaponimportfromtheusa investingmillionsoftaiwandollarsbuyingadvancedplanestostrengthenitsislanddefence governorsoftaiwanmilitarydepartmentsaidtheywantedtomakeadequateprecautionsagainstanypossibleoffenceofthepla ithinkitisundoubtedlyaseriousmilitaryprovocationagainstone chinapolicy taiwanshouldberesponsibleforwhathesaysandwhathedoes 陈宇轩 students writing3 kevingarnett afamousnbaplayer foundhiswaytothegreatestreputationinhislifeafterthe03 04nbaseasonwhenhereceivedthemvpcup it shis20ormorepoints 14 3reboundsand6assistspergamethathelpedtheminnesotatimberwolvesgetthesecondplaceintheplayoff aswhathesaidafterreceivingthehonor it stheassociationwithhisteammatesandhispassioninoffenceanddefencethatcreateenormouschemicalreactionsinthegames whichhelptheteamalot andthroughsomanyseasonsk g experienced it shisadequatehardworkthatenableshimtobreakthebarriersonthewaytothepeak 王倚天 重整信息要点 改编仿写议论文体 example4 ashortpassageintalkingsectionadaptedtoanargumentativewriting 选修9 sailingtheoceans unit2 wbp 60talkingshouldtheemperorcontinuewiththispolicy therearealwaysatleasttwosidestoeveryargument soitisimportantthattheemperorexamseachsidecarefullybeforehedecidesfuturepolicy soifchinacontinuestosailfurthertomaketradinganddiplomaticconnectionswithothercountriestherewillbeeconomicbenefits theremayalsobesomeindirectbenefitstoo itmayfrightenawaypiratesfromsouthchinasea but concentratingresourcesinnavalexpeditionsmayleavethenorthernborderopentoattacksbyenemiesfromthenorth theyareaconstantthreattopeople slivesandsecurityinthatpartofthecountry voyagesareofcourseimpressiveandtheymakepeopleinothercountriesawareofchina sgreatness buttheyarealsoveryexpensiveandtakemanysoldiersawaythatcouldbedefendingchinainthenorth itcouldbearguedthatifthesevoyagesstop chinawillloseinfluenceandopportunitiestoincreaseitsoverseastrade butitcouldalsobearguedthatforeigntradeisnotsoimportanttochina seconomicdevelopment chinahassuchalargehomemarketbecauseithassuchalargepopulationthatitdoesnotneedforeigntradetodevelopeconomically readingfordevelopingarguments whatisthe policy about howmanysidesarethereforargumentscausedbythepolicy listtheargumentsfrombothsidesfororagainstthevoyagesasfollows shouldtheemperorcontinuewiththispolicy argumentsforthevoyages argumentsagainstthevoyages rewritethesepoints sentencesinasmanywaysasyoucan basedontheargumentsyou velisted rewritethereadingpassagewiththetitle tocontinuethevoyagesortostop includingthesepoints somepeopleareforthepolicysomeothersareagainstthepolicyyouropinions hundredsofyearsago inchina therehappenedafierceargumentoverwhetherchinashouldcontinuethevoyageswithothercountriesornot opinionsweredividedonthispolicy somepeoplewereforit arguingthatmakingtradinganddiplomaticconnectionswithothercountrieswouldbeofeconomicbenefits andthereweresomedirectbenefitsaswell itmightfrightenawaypiratesfromsouthchinasea besides voyageswereimpressiveandcouldmakeothercountriesawareofchina sgreatness othersmaintainedthattheforeigntradewasnotsoimportant theyheld students writing1 students writing1 theideathatifthevoyagescontinued moreresourceswouldbeconcentratedonthenavalexpedition whichmightleavethenorthernborderexposedtoattacksbytheenemiesfromthenorth itwasaconstantthreattopeople slivesandsecurityofourcountry furthermore havingsuchalargepopulation chinahadalargehomemarket asfarasiamconcerned chinashouldcontinuethevoyages notonlyfortheeconomicbenefitsbutalsofortheadvancedscienceandtechnology whichcouldenablechinatodevelopfasterandbetter nomatterwhetheritwasinthepastorinmoderntimes weneedtokeeppacewiththeworld 王婷婷 havingexaminedsomanydifferentopinions ipreferthelatterone china asabigcountry hassuchalargehomemarketthatitdoesn tneedforeigntradetodevelopeconomically ontheotherhand thevoyagesareveryexpensiveandtakemanysoldiersaway whocouldbedefendingchinainthenorth comparedtotheoverseastrade allpeople ssecurityseemsmoresignificant students writing2 student sownopinion 程锡佩 example5 agroupofsentencescloselyrelatedtothetopicusedasadictationfirstanddevelopedintoapassage withyourownopinionsasanending 9 选修 australia unit3 australiansarebigmeateaters theyarealsobigfansofthe barbie whichisaustralianforbarbecue australiansarealsobigsnackers also australiansconsumealotofsugar dictation1 example5 9 选修 australia unit3 allthepublicparkshadbeautiful largeoutdoorgrillsforthepeopletouse about100lbsperperson peryear thisisthehighestsugarconsumptionrateintheworld oneoftheirfavoritein betweenmealfoodsisameatpiefilledwithchoppedmeatandgravy andtoppedwithtomatosauce theyeataverage85 5lbsofbeefandveal and48lbsoflambperperson peryear dictation2 example5 9 选修 australia unit3 passagedeveloped opinionsorsuggestionsgiven sentencedictations australiandiet australiansarebigmeateaters theyeataverage85 5lbsofbeefandveal and48lbsoflambperperson peryear theyarealsobigfansofthe barbie whichisaustralianforbarbecue allthepublicparkshadbeautiful largeoutdoorgrillsforthepeopletouse australiansarealsobigsnackers andoneoftheirfavoritein betweenmealfoodsisameatpiefilledwithchoppedmeatandgravy andtoppedwithtomatosauce australiansalsoconsumealotofsugar about100lbsperperson peryear thisisthehighestsugarconsumptionrateintheworld soifyouareinterestedinbarbecueoryouareabigmeateaterorabigsnackeraswell justcometoaustraliaandenjoythediet personallyspeaking itisobviouslyunhealthytohavesuchanunbalanceddiet asaresult agreatmanyaustraliansarefoundbig sized worryingabouttheirhealthrelatedtotheunlimitedmeat obviouslythisisnotabalanceddiet butitisjustaswellthatwiththeincreasedinfluxofimmigrantsfromallovertheworld especiallyfromasia theaustraliandietisstartingtochangeforthebetter 欣赏 借鉴 鼓励 细化作文讲评课 appreciationofss writingworkasanassessorbeasuccessfulwriter 2008年北京奥运会和残奥会刚落下帷幕 某英文杂志社就在全国中学生当中进行了一次 我最喜欢的奥运冠军 评选活动 假设你是某中学高三学生杜娟 你最喜欢的奥运冠军是跳水冠军郭晶晶 请根据以下提示 为郭晶晶撰写履历并为其投票 书面表达 example6 参考词汇 雅典athens注意 词数120左右 开头和结尾已写好 不计入总数 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shehadadreaminhermind beinganolympicchampion andsheachievedherdreaminthe2000 birthdayandtraining shebeganherdivingcareerin1988 whenshewasonly7yearsold attheageof8 shebegantrainingfordivinginbaoding whereshewasborn astimewentby shebecameskilfulandexperienced asayounggirlwhohadagiftfordiving shewasselectedaspartofthenationalteam birthdayandtraining atoughandalongtimetrainingshetooklasted12years afterwhichshebegantowin thetrainingistoughandrequiresanenormousamountofstrength fitnessanddetermination birthdayandtraining inhersparetime shepreferstolistentomusic thusshecanrestinherownspiritualworldforalittlewhile sherefusestoacceptanyphysicallimitations shelikesdevotingherselftomusicasmostyoungpeopledo sheisfascinatedbymusicaswellasdiving personalhobby i minfavorofher seeingherperformance iwillenjoythebeautyofthediving sometimesireallywanttotryitbymyself sheletsmeknowthatsportsarealsoakindofart allinall isupportherandvoteforher yourcomments weallwanttobeasuccessfulperson likeguojingjing butinreality theroadtosuccessistoughandfar butifwetryourbest wearesuretogetthegoldenappleoneday believethatyoucanuseyourspirittoaccomplishanything itisherdevotiontosportsthatfascinatesme sheissuchacourageoussportswoman therefore shedeservesthetitle yourcomments iappreciateherfightingforherdreams idohopeshecankeepupandbechampionforever nomatterwhethershewillbeselectedas themostpopularolympicchampion sheisaheroineinmyheart sheismyfavoriteathletebothonandoffsportingarena yourcomments workasanassessor whatdoyouthinkdecidesyourfinalgradeofthewriting goodorganization smoothly flowingsentences accurate varioussentencestructures someproperconnectives clearandpleasant lookingcalligraphy workasanassessor rationale initiatestudent centredlearning theyarethemasteroftheirlearning learnbydoing appreciateandlearnothers writingskills reflectontheirownwriting youmusthaveagoodknowledgeoflanguage includingvocabularyandgrammar youhavetoreadbothintensivelyandextensivelyinordertoaccumulateinformationforfuturewriting youalsoneedtoreadcriticallyinordertodevelopyourownwayofreading writingandthinking youcanreflectonyourreadingthroughyourwriting viceversa writingcangiveyouasenseofachievementanddirectyourfuturereading tobeasuccessfulwriterrequiresyourhardwork 几点强调 developaclearandcoherentframework usefactsorexamplestobackupyourarguments well chosenexamplescanmakeourwritingvividandconvincing rememberthewordlimit donotcopy createyourownstyle payspecialattentiontoopeningandending improveyourhandwriting 书面表达如今在中国 大批农村人往城里挤 想找到更好的工作 想接受更好的教育 想过上更好的生活 而一拨拨城里人开着小车进村庄 只因羡慕乡下的绿色生态和惬意的生活方式 请你以 citylifeorcountrylife 为题 借助以上提示 发挥想