高考英语 灵活运用连接词语提高写作表达能力 （2）课件.ppt

高考英语写作专题 灵活运用连接词语 提高写作表达能力 归纳总结 篇章结构连贯是三大评分条款之一 因此 我们在写作时 除按逻辑组合信息点外 还必须学会灵活运用连接性词语 除连接并列句的连接词和引导主从复合句的连接词之外 特别推荐使用以下连词性词语 解题技巧 1 连接两个功能对等的单词或短语时 应填并列连词and or but等 2 若两个句子 有两个主谓结构 之间 没有句号或分号 也没有连词 那空格处必定是填连接词 否则 句子结构就不完整 根据两句之间的意义和逻辑关系 或者根据句式结构 确定是并列句 多要求考生填and but while when or等 还是某种主从复合句 然后根据各类从句的特点 结合连接词的意义和用法 确定填具体的某个连词 考点1 并列连词 and 同 和 when andjustatthistime就在这时 notonly but also 不仅 而且 neither nor 既不 也不 or 或者 否则 otherwise 否则 orelse 否则 either or 不是 就是 but 但是 可是 只是因为 yet 可是 not but 不是 而是 while 而 却 for 因为 和so 所以 因此 注 1 when作并列连词 主要用于was weredoingsth whensth sb did was wereabouttodosth whensth sb did was wereonthepointofdoingsth whensth sb did等句型中 表示 当某人或某物正在或正要做某事 就在这时突然又发生了另一事 注 1 when作并列连词常用的句型 注 2 祈使句 and or 陈述句 句型 2 在 祈使句 and or 陈述句 句型中 祈使句表示条件 and or后的句子表示结果 考点2 引导状语从句的连词 when while as before after since till until whenever where wherever because as since for so suchthat sothat so that such that if unless if not although though as while whether or 以及 疑问词 ever 和 nomatter 疑问词 as as notas so as than the 比较级 the 比较级 asif或asthough 考点3 引导名词性从句的连接词 名词性从句有主语从句 表语从句 宾语从句和同位语从句 引导这些从句的连词有 1 连词that 只起连接作用 没有任何意思 不作任何句子成分 在宾语从句中可省略 2 连词whether 有 是否 之意 但不作句子成分 引导宾语从句时 还可用if 3 连接代词 whom whose which what等均有各自的意义 在从句中作主语 宾语 定语等 其中what除有 什么 多么 外 还有 所 的 之意 相当于thething s that 4 连接副词 when where why how等 有意义 在从句中作状语 5 whoever whatever whichever等也可引导名词性从句 意为 无论 不管 考点4 引导定语从句的关系词定语从句就是在复合句里充当定语的从句 它通常紧靠在所修饰的名词或代词后面 引导定语从句的关系代词和关系副词及使用场合如下表 who that whom who whose which that which that whose when where that inwhich why 注 1 先行词是occasion常用when 先行词是case situation scenes等时常用where 2 关系副词when和where有时可用 介词 which 代替 why可用forwhich代替 3 以下情况只能用that引导定语从句 当先行词是指物的all little few much any anything everything nothing none theone时 或先行词被all little few much any every no等修饰时 先行词是序数词或最高级形容词时 或者先行词被序数词 包括last next 最高级形容词及theonly thevery等修饰时 先行词包括人和物时 当主句是以who或which开头的疑问句时 为了避免重复 多用that引导 4 不能用that引导定语从句的情况 在非限制性定语从句中 不以能用that引导 直接在介词后作宾语时 不能用that引导 要用whom whose或which 且不能省略 当先行词是指人的all any few one s anyone everyone those people he等时 只能用who 当先行词与关系代词之间有较复杂的短语或从句隔开时 连接词在高考写作中的运用 写作内容 上周 我们以 谁是你的偶像 为题 在2600名学生中进行了一次调查 survey 以下是调查数据 2007广东高考英语基础写作题 根据以上数据 写一篇短文 包括以下内容 1 调查时间 调查问题以及调查对象 2 男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异 3 父母 在男女生偶像中的排序差异 4 男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同 5 你的偶像及理由 写作要求 1 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容 2 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称 评分标准 句子结构准确 信息内容完整 篇章结构连贯 2007广东高考英语基础写作题 lastweek wedidasurveyamong2 600studentson whoisyouridol thesurveyshows1 halfofthegirlschoosefilm2 tvstarsasidols 3 48 oftheboysprefersportsstars 4 thedatashows parents rankthesecondforthegirls 5 thefourthfortheboys 6 thepercentageoftheboyschoosing greatfigures isthesame7 thatofthegirls asforme thomasedisonismyidol8 hisinventionshavegreatlychangedourlife 2007广东高考英语基础写作题参考答案 that 要注意连词活学活用 and while as but however as because 写作内容 tom和peter是邻居 又是好朋友 他们有很多共同点之处 又有不同点 请阅读下面表格 使用5个规范的英语句子描述所给的全部信息内容 广东高考英语基础写作题 2 评分标准 句子结构准确 信息内容完整 篇章结构连贯 tomandpeterare 1 neighbors 2 goodfriends theyhavemuchincommon 3 theyalsodifferfromeachotherinmanyways bothofthemworkveryhard 4 theyarebothgoodatmathematics 5 english 6 tomlikeslisteningtopopularsongs 7 peterprefersclassicalmusic intheirsparetime tomoftentakespartinallkindsofsports especiallyplayingbasketball 8 peteralwaysenjoysreadingintheschoollibrary 广东高考英语基础写作题 2 参考答案 notonly butalso but and 要注意连词活学活用 and however while but 写作内容 请根据以下的情景说明 使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容 张华昨晚做了一个梦 梦见自己为北京奥运会做一名志愿者 他充当来自世界各地的运动员及官员的向导兼服务员 给他们指路 为他们递送毛巾 笔 纸等日常用品 必要时还帮助运动员搬行李 张华同来自世界各国的外国朋友亲切交谈 在交谈中 张华让外国朋友更多地了解北京和中国 外国朋友感谢他 并且称赞张华的英语说得很好 尽管志愿者工作辛苦 但张华认为很有意义 写作要求 1 短文的标题为 张华的一个梦 2 短文必须使用5个句子介绍包括以上要点的全部内容 可以适当增减细节 使内容连贯 评分标准 句子结构准确 信息内容完整 篇章结构连贯 广东高考英语基础写作题 3 广东高考英语基础写作题 3 参考答案 onedreamofzhanghua slastnight zhanghuahad dreamedasweet wonderfuldream inwhichhevolunteeredtoserveforthe2008beijingolympics olympicgames asavolunteer he1 actedasaguidefortheofficialsandathletesfromallovertheworld showingthemthewaytotheirdestinations 2 wasanattendant deliveringdailysupplies suchastowels penspaperandsoon totheofficials2 athletes 3 necessary hehelpedtheathletestocarryluggage inaddition 4 hetried didhisbesttohelptheforeignfriendsfromdifferentcountriesknowmoreaboutbeijingandchina theythankedzhanghuaverymuch5 thought that zhanghua senglishwasverygood zhanghuacouldspeakenglishverywell zhanghuawasgoodatenglish 6thevolunteeringworkwassimple7 tiring zhanghuathoughtitwasverymeaningful8 hewasquitesatisfiedwithwhathehaddone 要注意连词活学活用 notonly butalso and when because and although and and 写作内容 你的英语老师要求你在班上用英文向同学们介绍你英语写作的方法和心得 请根据下表提供的中文提纲 选择相关的信息写一篇发言稿 广东高考英语基础写作题 4 写作内容 广东高考英语基础写作题 4 1 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容 2 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称 3 开头与结尾已经给出 ladiesandgentlemen nowiwouldliketotellyouhowilearnenglishwriting that sall thankyou 评分标准 句子结构准确 信息内容完整 篇章结构连贯 广东高考英语基础写作题 4 参考答案 ladiesandgentlemen nowiwouldliketotellyouhowilearnenglishwriting firstly ioftenrecitegoodandbeautifulenglisharticles 1helpsmethinkinenglish2iimitateenglishwriting secondly ialsoreadenglisharticleswidely3icantakeinasmanylanguagematerials4possible thirdly inordertoexpressmyselfcorrectly makemyselfunderstoodcorrectly ithink5theyareimportantforustolearnaboutsomegrammar listentotheradio6practicespeakingenglishalot fourthly ikeepadiaryeveryday7icanlearnbywriting besides inaddition ioftenrefertoothers articlestoknowwhatineed8whaticanlearnfromothers that sall thankyou 要注意连词活学活用 which when sothat as that and sothat inorderthat and 灵活运用 请在方框中选择恰当的词语填空 完成下列短文 使其篇章连贯 通顺自然 然后将这些短文熟读背诵 limingusedtobeahealthyboy 1 overayearago hegotintothehabitofeatingalotofjunkfoodandsnacks 2 hespentalotoftimelyingonthesofa watchingtv anddidlittleexercise 3 heputonsomuchweightthathefounditdifficulttoclimbthestairs asaresult but besides iboughtamobilephoneon20thapr 2008 tendays 1 itdidn tringorsendshortmessages 2 itookittotheseller butwastoldthatthemodelhadbeensoldoutandihadtowaitatleastthreemonthsforanewone 3 iwenttotherepairman later then afterthat lastweek wedidasurveyamong2 600studentson whoisyouridol 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