英语人教版九年级全册How to write an article .docx

题型四书面表达类别1咨询建议类 Writing一：导入：（学生前一天写的作文）这次考试结束以后，你将怎样度过一个有意义的暑假，请用英语写一篇文章给你自己和小伙伴们一些好的建议，内容必须包括以下要点：走亲访友，和家人一起共度美好时光。和好朋友们一起看电影，听音乐假期我们应该加强体育锻炼，增强体质。你还有什么别的建议(至少两条)。要求：1字数80100，不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥。2文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名。3行文连贯，条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。4标题和开头已给出，不计入总字数。How to Take a Meaningful Summer Vacation after the ExamIt is necessary to take a meaningful summer vacation after the exam. There are kinds of activities for us to take part in. _【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取信息：1. 本文为“暑期生活的建议”，因此文体为说明文；2. 写作时必须用到给出的所有提示要点，还要提出至少两条建议。考生应当从自己熟悉的话题入手，合理适当地发挥；3. 建议说明类的文章时态主要为一般现在时，也可以穿插使用一般将来时或现在进行时；4. 写作时主要使用第一人称，描写他人时使用第三人称；5. 词数：80100(标题和开头已给出，不计入总字数)。【写作指导】怎样度过一个有意义的暑假要点提示素材串联开头：引出话题有意义的是暑假很人必要(It isnecessary to.)。正文：提出建议建议1：走亲访友；和家人一起共度美好时光(visit friends and relatives；spend happy time with our family)；建议2：和好朋友们一起看电影、听音乐(see a film；listen to music)；建议3：假期我们应该加强体育锻炼，以增强体质(take more exercise；keep healthy)；建议4：复习功课(review)；建议5：帮助父母干家务(do some housework)。结尾：表达期望希望所有人度过一个愉快的暑假(have a pleasant vacation)。【高分范文】How to Take a Meaningful SummerVacation after the ExamIt_is_necessary_to_take_a_meaningful_summer_vacation_after_the_exam._There_are_kinds_of_activities_for_us_to_take_part_in First, we can visit our friends and relatives or spend happy time with our family. Second, seeing a film, listening to music or hanging out with our friends will be also wonderful. Third, we should take more exercise to keep healthy. Whats more, we had better review what we have learned in middle school. Finally, it is necessary for us to do some housework, which can help our parents a lot. Above all, I hope all of us can have a pleasant vacation.二:讲解：话题（与生活相关，与“我”相关）Leaving school（毕业时分）Growing pains and gains（成长的烦恼与欢乐）I have a dream（我有一个梦想）Things I hate to do（我不喜欢。）Love around me（我身边的爱)I want to do something for my school(我为学校做件事）Im proud of myself（我为自己感到自豪）三：点评作文What do you think of this article?The most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays.1. What was the thing you did in the winter holidays ? (1)2. Give some descriptions about it, such as where/when/how /who, etc. (4)3. Why do you think its the most unforgettable thing you did? (2)The winter holidays are one of the most exciting holidays in the year. The most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays is making a birthday cake with my mother on my birthday. My mother bought the things we needed from the supermarket. We mixed the flour and eggs, then added some special things to make the cake soft. Finally, we put it into the oven. I shared the cake with my family members. It was really delicious. I will never forget that day.What is missed in this article?My troubleWhat was your trouble in your study ? (2)How did you face the trouble ? (3)How did you feel after solving it ? (2)My spoken English used to be very poor. I tried to improve it, but failed . So I told it to my English teacher and wished him to give me some advice . He told me that I could improve my spoken English by speaking more English. He said, The more you practice speaking English, the more progress you will make. Then I followed his advice and spoke as much English as possible. At last , my spoken English improved .What is missed in this article?Environment around us1. What do you think of the environment around us ? （4）2. As students, what should we do ? （3）The environment is important to us all. We need fresh air, clean water and so on. There used to be many trees around us, the air was fresh and the river was clean, but now they disappeared for one reason or another and were replaced by dirty water and polluted air. Because of the terrible pollution, peoples health is getting worse and worse. Whats more, the green house effect is changing our climate, which may lead to even more serious situation.四：写作步骤（一）、认真审题，结构合理（二）、理清思路，列出提纲（三）、连词成句，初步成形（四）、检查修改，内容无误Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.1. I climed slowly and was very tried.2. I think it is an unforgetable thing because I helped sb.3. On a friday afternoon, I went shopping with my mother.4. I cant forget that day. Because it is the last time we can celebrate her birthday together.5. What a crazy day it was, I will remember it forever.6. I will remembered that day forever.7. I thought it is hungry.8. My grandmother always tidy up my room.9. How unforgettable this things is!10. In my fathers help, I became more patient than before.11. To cut a long story to short, .12. I went to Shihua by a bus with my mother.13. My mother told me dont give it up.14. I saw an old lady lay in the middle of the road.15. I sat on a seat , listening music.16. We played snow in front of house.17. Then a lady asked who had broken her window. We all were afraid.18. We should do things by our own hands.19. It is tired work.20. In my life have many things happened.22. He encouraged me to look for the watch by heart.Common Errors in English writing1. 是否有大小写错误(capital letters or lowercase letters) 是否有拼写错误 (spelling mistakes) 是否有标点错误 (punctuation mistakes)4.是否有语法错误 (grammar mistakes) 主谓是否一致 动词的时态 语态的使用是否正确 词组的搭配是否合乎习惯 （五）、遣词造句，争取文采加-短语（上下连贯)whats more, in addition, more importantly,on the other hand,not only but also 减-重复、可有可无的合-逻辑关系的上下简单句-状语从句 条件 if/ unless因果 because结果 so That 目的 so that让步 although, though比较 than, asas时间 when替-考试手册上的词组常用的句型五、评分标准结构（10分）+内容（10分）+文采（5分）-六：Conclusion:How sho