英语人教版九年级全册Learn to write better.ppt

LearntoWriteBetter Learntowritebetter 学校 清徐县西谷乡初级中学学段 九年级姓名 孟小红 课标解读 书面表达是中考中的主观题 培养写作技能 训练语言表达能力是新教材英语语言教学的主要内容之一 新课标要求学生能在所学词汇 语法和句型的基础上造简单的句子 能仿照学过的题材和所给的范例写简单的书信 便条 通知等 能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系 能简单的描述人物和事件 书面表达是中考英语测试的一个重要方面 综合考查学生运用所学的英语知识进行语言表达能力 中考评分标准 13 15 涵盖了所有内容要点 运用了较多的语法结构和词汇 有少量错误 1个句子结构 时态 语法等方面的错误或1 2个名词复数 第三人称单数 拼写 标点符号 大小写等方面的错误 但是是由于使用较复杂的表达方式所致 具备较强的语言应用能力 有效的运用了句子的连接成分 使内容紧凑 充实 体现了活跃的思维和清晰的逻辑 具备较强的语言运用能力 Afterschool alotofyoungpeoplegotothemall Dotheylikethemall Here stheresult YuYuesaysshegoestothemallbecauseherfriends there Sheherselfdoesn treallylikeit Becausetheairisn t Also it susually Sosheprefers outside Andsheaddswhenshegoesintostoresshealways toomuchmoney ButLiuJunsayshelovesthemall Becausethere salwayssomething Therearealotoffree there It sjustfunto people Healsolikestolookatbooksinthe Inaword differentpeoplehavedifferenthobbies Wearesupposedtorespectthem fresh crowded hangout being spends happening watch concerts bookstore YuYue sopinion 观点 reasons LiuJun 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