英语人教版九年级全册unit 4 writing.pptx

Unit4Iusedtobeafraidofthedark九年级全一册2014年3月第一版郑州市第六十九中学李洋 Unit4Iusedtobeafraidofthedark writing LearningGoals 1通过师生互动和口语练习 复习usedtodo句型的用法 2通过范文赏析 能总结出 成长变化类 作文的结构 并能找出文中佳句 3结合所总结的作文结构 能独立完成写作训练并进行互评与展示 BeforewritingLet s Lookatwhatpeople slifeusedtobelikeinmytime Whatdidpeopleusetoplay Peopleusedtoplaypijin butnowweplaycomputergames Whatdidpeopleusetodrink Peopleusedtodrinkthiskindofsoda butnowwedrinkcocacola Howdidpeopleusetoconnectwithothers PeopleusedtouseBPcalls butnowweusesmartphonesore mails Wheredidpeopleusetolive Peopleusedtoliveinlowhouses butnowweliveinapartmentsorflats Howdidpeopleusetogotowork PeopleusedtoridebikestoworkButnowwegotoworkbye bike Talkaboutyourchanges 参考句型 Iusedto butnowI more hobby Freetimeactivities appearance personality 展示要求 按字母顺序分组 按数字说出对应数量的表示变化的句子 Let smeetanewfriendTina sheisthesameageasyou Doyouwanttoknowwhatchangeshavetakenplaceinherlife Tinaisa15 year oldgirl nowsheisinGrade9 Shehaschangedalotsinceshebecameamiddleschoolstudent Sheusedtohavelonghair butnowshehasshorthair Sheusedtobeafraidofspeakinginfrontofcrowds butnowsheisoutgoingandbrave Inthepast shehadmuchtimetoplaywithherfriends butnowsheisbusywithherhomeworkeveryday Inherfreetime Sheusedtogototheconcertwithherfather butnowsheseldomhasthetime Shespendsallhertimeonherschoolworkinordertogetintoabetterhighschool Shereallymissesherolddays MyLifein20Years Howtowriteagoodpassage In20years IwillliveinBeijing Mylifewillbewonderfulandinteresting First IwillbeafamousactorbecauseIwillmakealotofexcitingmovies Second therewillbeallkindsofrobotsinmyhouse theycandomanythingsforme Third Iwillhaveahappyfamily Althoughwewillbebusy itwillberelaxingforustotraveleveryweek Forthisdreamlife Iwilltrymybest I msuremydreamwillcometrueoneday linkingwords连接词 and but besides however A Structure 结构 2分 B Content 内容 5分C Language 语言 6分Anymistakes spellingorgrammar 有无拼写或语法错误 Anylinkingwords 有无连接词 Anygoodphrasesorsentences 有无好词好句 D Handwring 书写 isalsoveryimportant 2分 Goodphrasesorsentences好词好句 WritingPractice 要求1以 HowIhavechanged 为题 写一篇不少于80词的英语短文 2写自己和自己生活中发生的变化3变化须包括外貌 心理 性格 爱好 日常活动等 Whilewriting 组内互评 展示提升1小组互评作文 从文章结构 内容 语言 书写 按照作文评分标准给出分数 2画出好词好句 圈出连接词3每组评出一篇优秀作文与全班分享 Afterwriting 第一档 13 15分 符合题目要求 内容完整 层次结构清晰 表达清楚 语言无误 第二档 9 12分 基本符合题目要求 内容较完整 层次结构较清晰 表达较清楚 语言有少量错误 第