英语人教版九年级全册Unit 7 Section B.ppt

WritingCourse Unit7 Teenagersshouldbeallowedtochoosetheirownclothes ZangXinChongqingNo 7HighSchool Pre writing WritingPreparation Pre writing WritingPreparation Shealwayswithhermother Anna Name Age 15Hobby MusicProblem argues Pre writing WritingPreparation Haveyoueverarguedwithyourparents Why Pre writing WritingPreparation Whatoftenhappensbetweenparentsandchildren Lookatthesepicturesandthinkofsomephrases Parents ChildrenProblems Pre writing WritingPreparation Parents not childrentowatchTVChildren studyallthetime allow haveto Pre writing WritingPreparation Parents repeatonething Children cannot it againandagain stand Pre writing WritingPreparation Parents have requirements 要求 Children cannotit high reach Pre writing WritingPreparation Parents alotChildren havenototalk talk chance Pre writing WritingPreparation Children theexamParents get fail angry Pre writing WritingPreparation Children play Parents withchildren computergames fight Pre writing WritingPreparation PairWork Discusstheseproblemswithyourpartner andtalkaboutyoursolutions Pre writing WritingPreparation Problem1 Iamnotallowedtodomanythings likehangingoutwithfriends Problem2 Myparentscareaboutgrades notmyfeelings Problem3 Pre writing WritingPreparation Myproblemisthat However Iwanttosolvethisproblem Youcansharelikethis Pre writing WritingPreparation learntowiththem aletter happinessandsadness toeachother ommunication share listen write talk C Parents ChildrenSolutions eachother understand Pre writing WritingPreparation Sweettips Themostimportantthingincommunicationistohearwhatisn tbeingsaid 沟通最重要的地方是去倾听没有说出的部分 Pre writing WritingPreparation DoyouhaveanysuggestionsforAnna Whynotwritealetter Pre writing WritingProcess Readtheletterandputsentences A C inthecorrectplaces ReadingComprehension Pre writing WritingProcess Dearmom Thesedayswehaven ttalkedwitheachother Thatmakesmesounhappy Iknowyoulovemeandtakegoodcareofme Butifwedon tcommunicate youwillneverknowwhatIwant Don tyouknowIneedtobeabletorelax However dearmom Iwanttosolvetheproblemsbetweenus First Iwanttogetyourtrustandrespect Third I llbegoodathomeandsharehappinessandsadnesswithyou Iloveyou mom Ihopewecangetalongwellwitheachotherinfuture Yours Anna C A B Pre writing WritingProcess Dearmom Thesedayswehaven ttalkedwitheachother Thatmakesmesounhappy Inmyopinion thecommunicationbetweenparentsandchildrenisimportant Iknowyoulovemeandtakegoodcareofme Butifwedon tcommunicate youwillneverknowwhatIwant What smore youalsowantmetostayathomeanddohomeworkallday Don tyouknowIneedtobeabletorelax However dearmom Iwanttosolvetheproblemsbetweenus First Iwanttogetyourtrustandrespect Second Iwilltrymybesttounderstandyou Third I llbegoodathomeandsharehappinessandsadnesswithyou Iloveyou mom Ihopewecangetwellalongwitheachotherinfuture Yours Anna Pre writing WritingProcess Dearmom Paragraph1 Thesedayswehaven ttalkedwitheachother Thatmakesmesounhappy Inmyopinion thecommunicationbetweenparentsandchildrenisimportant Pre writing WritingProcess Dearmom Paragraph1 Opinion Beginning Paragraph2 Iknowyoulovemeandtakegoodcareofme Butifwedon tcommunicate youwillneverknowwhatIwant What smore youalsowantmetostayathomeanddohomeworkallday Don tyouknowIneedtobeabletorelax Reason1 Reason2 Dearmom Paragraph1 Opinion Beginning Paragraph2 Arguments Reasons Paragraph3 However dearmom Iwanttosolvetheproblemsbetweenus First Iwanttogetyourtrustandrespect Second Iwilltrymybesttounderstandyou Third I llbegoodathomeandsharehappinessandsadnesswithyou Pre writing WritingProcess Dearmom Paragraph1 Opinion Beginning Paragraph2 Arguments Reasons Paragraph3 SolutionsParagraph4 Iloveyou mom Ihopewecangetwellalongwitheachotherinfuture Yours Anna Pre writing WritingProcess Pre writing WritingProcess Beginning Opinion Inmyopinion Arguments What smore First Second Third Ontheonehand ontheotherhand Solutions Ending Conclusion Inaword Allinall Thestructureofargumentation议论文的结构 Ithink Pre writing WritingProcess GroupWork Whatdoyouthinkoftheproblemsbetweenparentsandchildren Thegroupleaderchoosesoneopinion Twostudentscompleteoneitemtofinishthechartinyourgroup Pre writing WritingProcess 1 Teenagersthinktheyshouldusemobilephonesintheirfreetime 2 Teenagersthinktheyshouldbeallowedtoplaycomputer Thestructureofthecomposition Pre writing WritingProcess WatchingTVisawaytorelax Someprogramsarehelpfulforstudying TeenagersthinktheyshouldbeallowedtowatchTVintheirfreetime TeenagerscanwatchTVatweekends Don twatchTVuntilfinishinghomework Inaword ifteenagerscanmakeaplantowatchTV itwillbeOKforthemtowatchsomeTV Pre writing WritingProcess 1 Teenagersthinktheyshouldusemobilephonesintheirfreetime 2 Teenagersthinktheyshouldbeallowedtoplaycomputer Thestructureofthecomposition While writing WritingPractice 1 写作要求 随着年龄的增长 青少年发现和父母很难沟通 其主要原因在于青少年认为他们可以在空闲时间玩手机 玩电脑 而父母则认为手机和电脑会让青少年分心 应该禁止使用 请围绕上述话题谈谈你的看法 2014年湖南长沙 While writing WritingPractice 要求 1 观点明确 2 论据 理由 充分 3 提出合理的解决方法 意思连贯 表达准确 可适当拓展 80词左右 开头已给出 不计入总词数 While writing WritingPractice 2 思路点拨 1 审题 时态为 人称为 体裁为 2 文章格式 开头 提出观点 和结论 3 条理 和逻辑 4 结构 好的开头和好的 5 亮点 适当的例子和美句等 一般现在时 第三人称 议论文 论据 解决方法 连词 结尾 While writing WritingPractice 3 习作在线 Howtodealwiththeproblemsbetweenparentsandteenagers Withteenagersgrowingup theyfinditdifficulttocommunicatewiththeirparents Inmyopinion Post writing WritingAssessment Askyourpartnertoscoreyourcompositionpolitelyaccordingtothechart 同伴互助 请同伴根据下表给你的习作打分 Post writing Writin