09高三英语作文训练之十一：作文综合模板.ppt

英语书面表达模版 一 宝应中学张礼义 词汇 句型 高级 和语法多样化 较复杂 1 覆盖了所有的要点2 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分 使全文结构紧凑4 语言得体 要点全 连接词 如何算是一篇好文章 语言地道 规范 1 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法 1 有一些人认为 2 另一些人认为 3 我的看法 一对比观点题型 70 的同学认为1父母不应该陪读2父母陪读让我们养成依赖的习惯 不利于我们将来自控能力的培养 不利于我们培养良好的学习习惯 3父母陪读影响了他们的工作 学习和休息 30 的同学认为 1父母应该陪读2父母陪读能使我们腾出更多的专心学习 使我们身体更健康 3父母陪读能帮助我们确立学习目标 督促我们完成学习任务 鼓励我们独立解决困难 培养我们养成良好的学习习惯 deareditor deareditor itisbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecentlythati mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwerecentlyhadaboutwhetheraheateddiscussionwasheldaboutwhether manyparentsaccompanytheirchildrenstudyingatschool ourparentsshouldaccompanyusstudyingatschool ourparentsshouldaccompanyusstudyingatschool wedohavedifferentopinionsonthismatter therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit mostofus about70 think holdtheviewthatourparentsshouldnotaccompanyusstudyingatschoolsinceitmakesusfallintothehabitofdependence sothatwewon tformthegoodhabitofstudying what smore itisharmfulforustoformthehabitofcontrollingourselves atthesametime moreoveritaffectsourparents work studiesandrest whileabout30 ofmyclassmatesdon tagree thinkitnecessaryforourparentstoaccompanyusstudyingatschool accompanyingusstudyingatschoolcanletushavemoretimetospareforourstudies besides weshallbemorehealthyfortheircooking ontheotherhandourparentscanhelpussetupouraim urgeustofinishourtask encourageustoovercomedifficultiesandgetusintothegoodhabitofstudying whileothersthinkitnecessaryforourparentstoaccompanyusstudyingatschoolinthefollowingthreereasons firstly accompanyingusstudyingatschoolcanletushavemoretimetospareforourstudies secondly besides weshallbemorehealthyfortheircooking thirdly finally ourparentscanhelpussetupouraim 换一种说法 frommypointofview ithinkitnecessaryforourparentstoaccompanyusstudyingatschool thereasonisthaticanhavemoretimeformystudy asamatteroffact therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice forme thelatterissurelyawisechoice thetopicof 主题 isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit somepeoplesayaistheirfavorite theyholdtheirviewforthereasonthat 支持a的理由一 whatismore 理由二 moreover 理由三 summary whileothersthinkthatbisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons firstly 支持b的理由一 secondly besides 理由二 thirdly finally 理由三 frommypointofview ithink 我的观点 thereasonisthat 原因 asamatteroffact therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice forme theformerissurelyawisechoice 示范卷 四 请参照模板重写 wedohavedifferentopinionsonthismatter therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit someofusthink holdtheviewthatlisteningshouldnotbecancelledsinceitisamongthefourbasicskills sothatwecannotignoreit what smore listeningisoneoftheimportantchannelsforustogetinformationfromtheoutsideworld atthesametime moreoverinternationalcooperationisbecomingmoreandmorefrequent soitshouldbestrengthenedtoday whileothersofmyclassmatesdon tagree theythinknoteveryonehastocommunicatewithforeignersinthefuture besides listeningtestisunfairtothestudentsintheareaswhereradiosignalscannotbepickedupeffectively ontheotherhandthereisabigdifferenceinteachersandequipmentbetweenthecountrysideandthecityforcertainreasons frommypointofview ithinkitnecessarytokeeplisteningtest thereasonisthatiloveenglishandiwanttolearnitwell people however differintheiropinionsonthismatter somepeopleholdtheideathat intheirpointofview ononehand ontheotherhand therefore thereisnodoubtthat asfarasiamconcerned ifirmlysupporttheviewthat itisnotonlybecause butalsobecause themore themore haveatry 学习英语要不要从儿童开始一些人认为 1应该2记忆力好 可以记住很多单词3能为以后的英语学习打下坚实的基础另一些人认为 1不应该2儿童时期既要学汉语拼音又要学英语 容易混淆3会影响今后的汉语学习和英语学习 2 给出一个观点 要求考生反对这一观点或者提出自己的看法 你校正开展一场题为 youngteachersorelderlyteachers whichdoyouprefer 的讨论 有人认为年老教师教学耐心 讲解细致 经验丰富 而你却认为年轻教师好 opinionsaredividedonthisquestion somestudentsbelievethattheylikeelderlyteachers teachingbecausetheythinkelderlyteachershavemoreteachingexperienceandthattheytendtobepatientandcarefulwithexplanations however iprefertobetaughtbyyoungteachers firstly westudentshavemuchincommonwiththem sotheyareourfriendsaswellasourteachers secondly theyaremoreenergeticandenthusiastic usuallytheycanmaketheirclasseslivelyandinteresting besides theyaremorereadytoacceptorcreatenewideas includingteaching thirdly mostyoungteachersdevotethemselvestotheirwork makingthemteachcreativelyandeffectively formwhatihavesaid inaword ipreferyoungteacherstoelderlyteachers 二解决方法题型 要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 问题现状 怎样解决 解决方案的优缺点 inrecentdays wehavetofacetheproblem a theproblemisbecomingmoreandmoreserious thepresentsituationisworrying first 说明 的现状 second 举例进一步说明现状 thepresentsituationisworrying first naturalresourcesarebecomingmoreandmorescarce second assomepeoplearenotawareoftheimportanceoftheenvironmentalprotection theproblemswithitremainextremelyserioustosomedegree thegapbetweentherichandthepoorhasthetendencytobecomewiderandwider confrontedwitha weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation toourgreatjoy manymeasureshavebeentakentosolvetheproblems foronething 解决方法一 foranother 解决方法二 finally 解决方法三 toourgreatjoy manycountrieshavetakenaction luckily manymeasureshavebeentakentosolvetheproblems ononehand theyhavemaderelevantlawsandregulationsandputlargeamountsofmoneytotheenvironmentalprotection ontheotherhand popularizededucationaswellasinternationalcooperationisbeingcarriedout personally ibelievethat 我的解决方法 看法 consequently i mconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingusbecause 带来的好处 if 这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状 再对比事物本身的利弊 有时也会单从一个角度 利或弊 出发 最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度 或对事物前景提出预测 说明事物现状 事物本身的优缺点 或一方面 你对现状 或前景 的看法 三说明利弊题型 近期 中学聘请外教之风愈演愈烈 请你结合下表对其利弊发表自己的观点 nowadaysmanymiddleschoolspreferto generally itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows first besides what smore meanwhile nowadaysmanymiddleschoolsprefertoemployforeignteachers generally itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows first schoolswillbebetterknown besides what smore it sgood