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WelcometoourClass 2013 10 25 句子合并的语法精彩 以上两个简单句 我们怎样才能合并成一个高级的句子呢 最重要的是 我们要理解句子间的逻辑关系 然后用并列句和复合句表达出来 请看下面两个简单句 1 他考试不及格 Hedidn tpasstheexam 主语 谓语 宾语 Hefailedintheexam 主语 谓语 状语 2 他的家人很失望 Hisfamilyweredisappointed 主语 系动词 表语 最重要的是 我们要理解句子间的逻辑关系 然后用并列句和复合句表达出来 1 As Becausehehadn tpassedtheexam hisfamilyweredisappointed 2 Hedidn tpasstheexam sohisfamilyweredisappointed 3 Thathisfamilyweredisappointedwasbecausehehadn tpassedtheexam 4 Thereasonwhyhisfamilyweredisappointedwasthathehadn tpassedtheexam 5 Thathehadn tpassedtheexammadehisfamilydisappointed 6 Itmadehisfamilydisappointedthathehadn tpassedtheexam 7 Itwasthathehadn tpassedtheexamthatmadehisfamilydisappointed 8 Hedidn tpasstheexam anditmadehisfamilydisappointed 9 Hedidn tpasstheexam whichmadehisfamilydisappointed 10 Afterhisfamilylearnedthathehadn tpassedtheexam theyweredisappointed 11 Hisfamilyweredisappointedatthenewsthathehadn tpassedtheexam 当然 合并简单句不一定非要用并列句和复合句 我们也可以用含非谓语的动词的句子来表达 我们应该知道 状语从句 定语从句 名词性从句都可以相应的转换成介词短语或非谓语动词短语做状语 定语 主语 宾语和表语 这样 我们就可以将复合句转换成高级的简单句 Nothavingpassedtheexam hemadehisfamilyfamilydisappointed Withhimnotpassingtheexam hisfamilyweredisappointed Becauseofhisnotpassingtheexam hisfamilyweredisappointed Hisfamilyweredisappointedtolearnthathehadn tpassedtheexam Thereasonforhisfamily sbeingdisappointedwashisnotpassingtheexam Hisnothavingpassedtheexammadehisfamilydisappointed Forthereason hisnotpassingtheexam hisfamilyweredisappointed Hedidn tpasstheexam makinghisfamilydisappointed Nothavingpassedtheexam hemadehisfamilyfamilydisappointed Afterlearningthathehadn tpassedtheexam hisfamilyweredisappointed Havinglearnedthathehadn tpassedtheexam hisfamilyweredisappointed 句子合并的方法多种多样 重要的是清晰句子结构 理清句子逻辑关系 学会分析句子成分 即时练习 根据汉语意思 完成英文句子 1 他很忙 他没来 1 hewasbusy hedidn tcome 2 be busy hedidn tcome 3 Itwasbecausehewasbusy hedidn tcome 4 Hewasbusy hedidn tcome 5 Hedidn tcome hewasbusy 6 hedidn tcomewasbecausehewasbusy 7 Hisnot come wasbecausehewasbusy 8 Thereasonwhyhedidn tcomewas hewasbusy 9 hewasbusymadehimunabletocome 10 he beingbusymadehimunabletocome 11 Hewasbusy and madehimunabletocome 12 Hewasbusy madehimunabletocome 13 Hewasbusy make himunabletocome 2 杰克出生在英国 他在美国长大 1 JackwasbornintheUK hegrewupintheUS 2 hewasbornintheUK JackgrewupintheUS 3 bear intheUK JackgrewupintheUS 4 Jack wasbornintheUK grewupintheUS 5 Jack bear intheUK grewupintheUS 写作的基本能力是 信息句子化 在简单句的基础上运用语法知识合并句子 体现句子的多样化 增添语言色彩 从而使写作获高分 请看下面一篇基础写作学校英语论坛针对目前城市交通拥堵 污染严重的问题进行了 治堵方案大家谈 的讨论 以下是讨论概要 治堵方案1 少开私家车 多人共乘一辆小车 2 政府完善公共交通以方便市民 3 修建绿道 greenlanes 鼓励骑自行车 好处 省钱 省时 节能 环保 写作内容 请根据以上概要写一篇短文 包括以下内容 1 存在的问题 2 解决的方案 3 方案的好处 经过审题 我们可以列出以下的信息点 1 Wehadadiscussion 2 Ourstreetsarecrowdedwithtraffic Therearetoomanyprivatecars 3 Theairisseriouslypolluted 4 Somesolutionsareputforward Everyoneisencouragedtooffersuggestions 5 Carownerscouldreducetheuseofprivatecars 6 Theycouldsharetheircarswiththeirfriendsandworkmates 7 Thegovernmentshoulddosomethingtoimprovethepublictransportsystem 8 Thegovernmentshouldbuildmoregreenlanes 9 Thepublictransportsystemshouldbemoreconvenientforcitizens 10 Peopleshouldbeencouragedtousetheirbicycles 11 Money timeandenergywillbesaved 12 Themeasuresarefriendlytotheenvironment 请运用我们刚才所提及的名词短语 介词短语 with的复合结构 非谓语短语 并列连词和复合句来整合信息 名词短语整合信息点2 3 运用介词短语充当定语整合信息点2 3 2 3 4 11 12 运用非谓语整合信息7 8 9 5 8 10 2 3 5 6 运用with的复合结构整合信息6 12 运用复合句整合信息 Increasingnumbersofprivatecarscontributetoheavytrafficjamsandseriousairpollution Peoplearemoreawareofthefactthatincreasingnumberofprivatecarshasgivenrisetoseriousproblemsliketrafficjamsandairpollution 2 3 Weheldadiscussioninthehopeofcomingupwithsomepracticalsolutionstoendtheshamefulconditionoftrafficjamsandairpollutioninourcity 2 3 4 Bytakingtheabovemeasures notonlycanwesavemoney timeandenergybutalsowecancontributetoacitywithbetterenvironment 11 12 Thegovernmentshouldimprovethepublictransportsystemtomakeitmoreconvenientforpeople 7 8 9 Buildingmoregreenlanesisobviouslyagoodwaytoencouragecyclinginsteadofdriving 5 8 10 Thereisawidespreadconcernoverenvironmentalpollutionandtrafficjamscausedbyprivatecars 2 3 First carownerscouldsharetheircarswiththeirfriendsandworkmates thusreducingtheuseprivatecars 5 6 Hopefully withpeoplesharingprivatecarswitheachother ourcitywilldefinitelybeanenvironment friendlyplacetolive Whenitcomestotrafficjamsandairpollution somepeoplecomeupwiththeideathatcarownerscouldreducetheuseofprivatecarsbysharingcarswiththeirfriendsandworkmates 定语从句整合2 3句 Withthedevelopmentofeconomy moreandmorepeoplehavetheirowncars whichinturnleadstosuchproblemastrafficjamsandairpollution 状语从句整合7 9句 Ifthegovernmentcouldimprovethepublictransportsystem itwouldbemoreconvenientforpeopletotravel 名词性从句整合2 3 6句 Recentlytheissueoftrafficjamsandairpollutioncausedbyprivatecarshasbeenbroughttotheconcernofallpeople especiallyusstudents whocameupwithsomepracticalsuggestioninadiscussion 信息点1 4 Inouropinion citizenscouldreducetheuseofprivatecarsbysharingwiththeirfriendsandworkmates 信息点5 6 Besides whatreallymattersisthatthegovernmentimprovesthepublictransportsystemtomakeitmoreconvenientforpeopletotravel 信息点7和9 Meanwhile thegovernmentshouldhavemoregreenlanesbuilttoencouragecycling 信息点8和10 Bytakingtheabovemeasures notonlycanwesavemoney time andenergybutalsowecancontributetoacitywithbetterenvironment 信息点11和12 谢谢您的光临 高考大纲中常用哪些连接词 1 表示递进 在同一话题上补充内容另外 还有 and andthen even whatismore worse better besides also moreover inaddition 2 表示转折关系但是 然而 相反 but however yet instead ontheotherhand otherwise onthecontrary 3 表示因果关系因为 因此 所以 for so therefore asaresult becauseof dueto owingto thanksto 4 表示解释说明 thatis tosay inotherwords namely suchas forexample forinstance