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书面表达微策略一：句子的配置 句子的配置简图1.非限制性定语从句简单句（功能：为说理提供铺垫）1)众所周知，上课最有效、最重要的吸收知识的方式。Attending classes is the most effective and important way to absorb knowledge.As is known to us all，attending classes is the most effective and important way to absorb knowledge.2)正如每人所知，词汇是语言的一个重要组成部分。Vocabulary is an important part of language.As everybody knows, vocabulary is an important part of language.2.七大状语从句简单句 （功能：为事情的发生提供背景）1)每次看到这个礼物，我都禁不住想起我的朋友。(时间状语从句)I cant help thinking of my friend.Whenever I look at the gift , I cant help thinking of my friend.2)虽然试卷上有些问题好像不熟悉，但是它们很容易回答。（让步状语从句）I cant help thinking of my friend.Though some of the questions seem unfamiliar to me , I cant help thinking of my friend.3)如果我来选择，我更喜欢在假期去旅游。（条件状语从句）I prefer to go travelling during the holidays.If I have to make a choice, I prefer to go travelling during the holidays.4)正如你所言，一些人尚未意识到食物浪费。（方式状语从句）Some people are unaware of food waste.Just as you put it, some people are unaware of food waste.5)因为教师节即将来临，我们班决定举行一场晚会来庆祝这个重要的日子。（原因状语从句）Our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day.Since Teachers Day was approaching , our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day.6)为了这些孩子的生活条件，他们的父母前往大城市打零工。（目的状语从句）Their parents rush to big cities to do odd jobs for money.In order that their living conditions can be improved ,their parents rush to big cities to do odd jobs for money.7)有人的地方，就会有矛盾和冲突。（地点状语从句）There are contradictions and conflicts. Where there are people, there are contradictions and conflicts. 3.调整语气的“帽子语”简单句（功能：加强或削弱所说的事情的肯定语气）1)毫无怀疑，他们的事迹一定会感动中国。Their deeds are certain to move the whole China.There is no doubt that their deeds are certain to move the whole China.2)广为人知，中国高考在每年的6月7-8日两天举行。The college entrance examination in China falls on June 7 and 8 each year.It is widely known/acknowledged that the college entrance examination in China falls on June 7 and 8 each year.3)好像你们的培训费没有什么折扣。There are no discounts in your tuition fees.It seems that there are no discounts in your tuition fees.4)无可否认，家庭作业在学习中占重要作用。Homework plays an important role in study.There is no denying that homework plays an important role in study.5)显然，这种教育只关注知识而不关心孩子们的全面发展。This kind of education centers only on knowledge instead of childrens all-round development.Its obvious/clear that this kind of education centers only on knowledge instead of childrens all-round development.4.非谓语简单句 或 简单句非谓语（功能：a.相当于状语从句，为事情的发生提供背景或交待结果; b.替代2个并列谓语的使用）1)只有少部分接受调查的学生不同意这个观点，他们说这种坏习惯很难戒除。Only small part of the students surveyed disagree.Only small part of the students surveyed disagree, arguing that bad habits are difficult to get rid of.(伴随状语或相当于原因状语从句)2）看到我们为他准备的蛋糕和礼物，奶奶激动地笑着。Grandma felt so exited that she couldnt help smiling.Looking at the cake and gifts prepared for her, Grandma felt so exited that she couldnt help smiling.(相当于原因状语从句)3)在复习过程中，我们可以每天做一些语法小练习，加强自己的语法。In the course of general revision , it makes sense to do some grammar drills every day .In the course of general revision, it makes sense to do some grammar drills every day, making your English improved.(做结果状语，或相当于结果或目的状语从句)4)父母亲为我们买大量学校资料，希望我们更加努力学习，取得更大进步。Our parents have bought a lot of learning materials.Our parents have bought a lot of learning materials, hoping that we can work harder and make greater progress.(替代并列动词的功能，类似于Our parents have bought a lot of learning materials and hope that we can work harder and make greater progress.)5)喝完水后，这个小男孩手拿空瓶子走向附近的垃圾桶。The boy walks towards a nearby dustbin with the empty bottle in his hand.Having drunk up the water, the boy walks towards a nearby dustbin with the empty bottle in his hand.(相当于after引导的时间状语从句)6)为了使脚干燥舒适，这双鞋配备有一台微波电扇。The shoes are equipped with a micro-fan.To keep the feet dry and comfortable, the shoes are equipped with a micro-fan.（相当于一个目的状语从句）7)他们的父母亲到大城市打工挣钱，把他们丢在家里。Their parents rush to big cities to do odd jobs for money.Their parents rush to big cities to do odd jobs for money, leaving them at home .(非谓语做结果状语，相当于 并列动词的功能：Their parents rush to the big cities to do odd jobs and left them at home)5.小品语简单句（功能：掌握后使考生易于下笔，自然地完成文章的开头或过渡）1）按照时间表，我们今天有一场英语口语竞赛。We have a spoken English Contest today.As scheduled ,we have a spoken English Contest today .2)作为一名学生读者，我写信是想谈谈你们出版社出版的英语课本。Im writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your publishing house.As a student reader, Im writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your publishing house.3)对于学生而言，你最好选择你感兴趣且适合自己的课外活动。Youd better choose the after-class activities which interest you and suit you.To students , youd better choose the after-class activities which interest you and suit you.4)具体点说，我们可以从四个方面来培养这个习惯。We can develop the good habit from four aspects.To be practical, we can develop the good habit from four aspects.5)就我而言，我觉得全体师生都应该致力于创造一个绿色的校园。I feel all the students and teachers are supposed to make our campus a green place to stay on. As far as Im concerned ,I feel all the students and teachers are supposed to make our campus a green place to stay on. 6)随着中国经济的快速发展，越来越多的家庭拥有私家车。More and more families own their private cars. With the rapid advance of Chinas economy ,more and more families own their private cars.7)父母亲应该鼓励孩子依靠自己，克服困难，而并非为孩子做一切。Parents should inspire their kids to depend on themselves an overcome difficulties.Instead of doing everything for their children , parents should inspire their kids to depend on themselves an overcome difficulties.8)在如今家长眼里，孩子们很幸福，因为深受照顾。Children are quite happy because they are given care and love.From the point of todays parents ,children are quite happy because they are given care and love.9)在我的帮忙下，奶奶成功地学会使用那部手机。Grandma managed to operate the mobile phone at last.With my help , Grandma managed to operate the mobile phone at last.10)多亏老师的帮忙和鼓励，我终于通过了数学考试。 I passed the math exam in the end.Thanks to the teachers help and encouragement ,I passed the math exam in the end.11)作为一名高中生，我坚定的认为是时候采取措施减轻学生负担了。I firmly believe its time that we should take immediate action to free students from heavy academic burden.As a senior high school student ,I firmly believe its time that we should take immediate action to free students from heavy academic burden.12)与美国中学生相比，中国学生的学习要累的多。Chinese high school students have to make greater efforts at school.Compared with American high school students, Chinese high school students have to make greater efforts at school.13)幸运的是，我的同桌发现了我的忧郁，并帮了我。My deskmate discovered my depression and offered to help me out.Fortunately , my deskmate discovered my depression and offered to help me out.14)基于我的个人经历，我提出如下建议。Here Id like to put forward the following suggestions .Based on my personal experience , here Id like to put forward the following suggestions .15)根据这项调查结果，42的调查对象更喜欢阅读电子书。Forty-two percent of the respondents preferred reading e-books.According to the findings, 42 percent of the respondents preferred reading e-books.16)在这种情况下，我们应该提供帮忙，把老人扶起来。What matters is that we offer to help the old man up.In this case/Under this circumstance , what matters is that we offer to help the old man up.17)当谈到这个话题，难忘的记忆涌向心头。Unforgettable memories flood into my mind.When it comes to this topic , unforgettable memories flood into my mind.18)在某种程度上，体育课是我们在学校唯一放松和开心时刻。PE class is our only chance to relax and enjoy ourselves in school.To a certain degree/extent , PE class is our only chance to relax and enjoy ourselves in school.19)在我看来，我们应该表达对父母的爱。We ought to show our affection for our beloved parents.From my point of view , we ought to show our affection for our beloved parents.6.对简单句中的主语、宾语、表语的定语从句化（功能：使简单句中的主语或宾语或表语更详细、更精确）1）I can well remember an accident . I can well remember an accident that happened on a rainy Sunday.2）Thanks to our math teacher , the students have turned out to be interested in the subject. Thanks to our math teacher, the students who used to dislike math have turned out to be interested in the subject. 3) The loud noise disturbs the people.The loud noise disturbs the people who live around the square.4) I still remember the day.I still remember the day when I failed my physics and felt upset.7.对简单句中的主语、宾语、表语的名语从句化（功能：a.代替it, this ,that等,使作者思想更具体清晰 b.对做形式主语宾语的具体化）1)It is the time when we enjoy the moon together. What I love most is the time when we enjoy the moon together.2)I do believe that.I do believe that happiness results from offering help to others.3)I was very angry about it.I was quite annoyed that I often forget those new words.4)Its a good virtue.Its a good virtue that we prefer to give rather than receive.5)I find it beneficial.I find it beneficial that we can improve our writing skills by keeping diaries in English.6)One of my worries is that.One of my concerns is that physics is my disadvantage.8.对简单句中的形容词/副词的结果状语从句化、让步状语从句化、感叹句化（功能：使文章语言文字更生动活泼）1)My school life is dull.I feel that my school life is so dull that I even decide to give up.2)I was excited to see the new bike.I was so excited to see the new bike that I couldnt wait to ride it.3)We work hard , but failure will accompany us like shades.However hard we work , failure will accompany us like shades.4) Its an unforgettable lesson.What an unforgettable lesson I learned from the incident!9.对简单句中的主语、宾语、表语的非谓语化（功能：使简单句中的主语、宾语或表语更详细、更精确）1)The school DV Contest will give you a good chance to share what you record with more people. The school DV Contest organized by the English Club will give you a good chanc