北师大版高一必修三教案：Unit 7 The Sea period7.docx

the seventh period writingteaching goals 教学目标1. target language语言目标 a: words and expressions terriblehorrible, freezingcold, largehuge, frightenedterrified, get awayescape, get betterrecover, continue to livesurvive, rememberrecognize b：important structurestructure of an attraction reportparagraph functionscontentopening paragraphgeneral introduction: location, basic information, special feature and so on.developing paragraphsgood pointsbad pointsconclusion paragraphcomments: dos and donts2. ability goals能力目标help students to master the structure of a report.3. learning ability goals学能目标 learn to write a report by following a certain structure given by the teacher.teaching important points教学重点by imitating, practicing and paragraph-by-paragraph writing help students learn the basic procedures of writing a good report. teaching difficult points教学难点 help students give comments and express their own idea clearly. teaching methods教学方法team work learning, activity-based learning, co-operative studyteaching aids教具准备a projector and some slidesteaching procedures & ways教学过程与方式step i revision activity one: check the words and expressionst: please paraphrase the words with a similar meaning.let the ss match the words according to their memory.words exercise:terriblehorrible, freezingcold, largehuge, frightenedterrified, get awayescape, get betterrecover, continue to livesurvive, rememberrecognize activity two: present your storyt: next i will call a student to present your story to the class.sa: here is mine.sample story: one day i swam across a strip of water to an island. there were many beautiful shells. though i found many beautiful shells, i found it impossible for me to take them back to the shore i came from, for i could see many dangerous sharks in the sea playing happily. suddenly, an idea struck me. i pulled off my shirt and cut it into pieces and tied them together into a long rope. then i cut my leg and dipped some blood in one end of the rope. i threw the end of rope with blood into the sea while i pulled the other end and ran very fast toward the other end of the island. soon after that, the sharks began to chase the rope because they had smelled the blood. after i succeeded in cheating the sharks to the other side, i ran back and dived into the sea without any delay. in the end, i was able to reach the other side of the shore.step lead-inactivity one: make commentst: read the comments from the tourists and tell me what opinion they want to express.let the ss read the comments and find their real purpose.sa: the first speaker gave two opinions about the performance of the dolphins.sb: the second speaker expressed his satisfaction with the iceberg, but he was not content with the conditions.sc: the third speaker also expressed two sides of opinions. one is to show his satisfaction with the scenery, but he was not content with the food.sample comments:1. the performance of the dolphins was good, but it was cruel to train them and make them do tricks. 2. seeing the real iceberg was really exciting, but if they could provide better conditions for the exhibition it would be better.3. on the one hand, we loved most of the attractions. on the other hand, i dont think we enjoy the food.activity two: make commentst: use the notes and words below to make comments about underwater world. sa: seeing real seals and penguins from the polar area was really exciting, however, the food in the caf was too expensive. sb: these unusual fish were interesting, but the dolphin show was cruel.sc: sea theatre brought us great fun. on the other hand, virtual reality voyage was not realistic.sd: the views from caf were very good, but the taste of food and coffee was terrible.activity three: read and match the headingst: read the report below and match the headings with the report.sa: the first paragraph is general description.sb: the second paragraph is the list of good points.sc: the third paragraph is the list of the bad points.sd: the fourth paragraph is conclusion.step iii pre-writingactivity one: know the requirement of writingt: suppose your summer job is to help write a tourist guide book about your area. write a report about a place you have visited. before you start writing, choose a topic for it.ss: discuss with each other and think out a topic for your writing.sa: in our area we have beijing animal park. sb: i want to choose the great wall as my topic.sc: i would take fragment hill as my topic.activity two: language preparationt: work on your own and list the good points and bad points about your topic. then i will call a student to present your works.let the ss think out the good points and bad points.sa: present the list of good and bad points of beijing animal park. good points:1. the largest animal park in china.2. tigers walk around like a king.3. monkeys are very naughty.4. elephants look very friendly.5. children can feed animals.6. bears are very lazy and funny.bad points:1. in busy season, too crowded2. not enough seats for people to rest3. not enough toilets, people have to wait in line4. less show programs5. not enough educating themesactivity three: learn to open and conclude a reportt: when you are required to write a report, you are to give a general introduction of it. in your introduction of this topic, you may include the location, the special feature and other basic information to introduce a place. please write a general introduction for your topic. the ss try to include the content in the introduction. and then present their opening paragraphs. sample opening paragraph: beijing animal park attracts tourist from all over china. it covers a large area with many different parts and this will take tourists at least half a day to see all the parts. it is located in the northwest of beijing in haidian district with convenient traffic.t: in the presentation sa listed the feature, location and traffic of beijing animal park. the introduction is well written and catches the readers attention easily. now lets see how we conclude our topic. now please read the given report on page 16 and see what the content of the conclusion paragraph of the report is.ss: there are some pieces of advice on how to enjoy a visit without much trouble.t: in most reports after you have listed the good or the bad points, you may show your own comments on it. so the conclusion of the report is mainly about your own comments or advice. now please write down some dos and donts to conclude your topic.let the ss think about the valuable advice and write down them. show ones conclusion to the class.sample conclusion: never forget to see the monkeys, especially when you are taking children. remember to take a camera and take photos of the animals. however, dont choose holidays for your visit and make sure to take your own food. activity four: get familiar with the structuret: since we have the basic knowledge of the language needed in the passage, now please look at the structure. then write down your report following the structure. look at the structure and memorize it. then try to get a general understanding of an attraction report. sample structure:structure of an attraction reportparagraph functionscontentopening paragraphgeneral introduction: location, basic information, special feature and so on.developing paragraphsgood pointsbad pointsconclusion paragraphcomments: dos and dontsstep iv writingactivity one: draftingt: please write a passage following the structure and use the language listed by yourselves. the ss write the report.activity two: checking t: after you have finished, please read through your report and check it by yourself.the ss check their works.activity three: pair checkt: pair checks your works to see if the grammar is ok and the sentence structures are well organized.the ss do pair check.one possible version:beijing animal park attracts tourists from all over china. it covers a large area with many different parts and this will take tourists at least half a day to see all the parts. it is located in the northwest of beijing in haidian district with convenient traffic. on the one hand, there are several good points about visiting the park.1. beijing animal park is the largest animal park in china, which feeds and owns the largest number of animals in china. therefore, we can enjoy seeing animals from all over the world.2. tigers walk around like a king on the tiger hill. 3. monkeys are very naughty and catch any food from the tourists.4. eleph