人教版必修五Unit 5 first aid Using language学案.docx

unit 5 first aid using language学案本单元的写作任务为介绍急救措施，为指导性说明文，该类说明文旨在为读者提供解决问题的方法及具体步骤。一、基本结构第一部分：对要说明的现象或事物作简单介绍，引出主题。第二部分：按照一定的顺序对要说明的现象或事物进行客观描述。第三部分：简要总结全文。二、增分佳句1we should check whether he/she is conscious or not.我们应当检查他/她是否清醒。2use the mouthtomouth method within five minutes.在五分钟内进行人工呼吸。3dont move him/her leave him/her where he/she is.不要搬动他/她，让他/她待在原地。4cover the wound with a bandage or a piece of dry clean cloth.用绷带或一块干净的干布把伤口包扎起来。5wash the wound with cold running water.用凉自来水冲洗伤口。6please call 120 for ambulance at once.请立即拨打120叫救护车。题目要求请根据下面表格提供的内容，用英语介绍一些急救常识。病症急救措施注意事项呼吸停止人工呼吸捏住鼻子，口对口吹气直到病人恢复呼吸。大出血止血用干净手帕或布压在出血点，按住不放。煤气中毒或食物中毒开门窗，通风换气，带病人和有毒物质去医院。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为说明文；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第二人称；3确定时态：主要使用一般现在时。二、构思第一部分，引出话题：人们需要牢记的急救措施。第二部分，按照先后顺序介绍三种(呼吸停止、大出血及中毒)急救措施及注意事项。第三部分，简要总结：这些建议在人们的日常生活中很有用。第二步：核心词汇想周全1stop_breathing停止呼吸2breathe_into_his_mouth 口对口吹气3bleed_badly/heavily 大出血4let_the_fresh_air_in 通风换气5eat_or_drink_poison_by_mistake 误吃或喝有毒物品第三步：由词扩句雏形现1如果某人停止呼吸，你必须立即进行人工呼吸。(if引导的条件状语从句；主谓宾结构)if_a_person_stops_breathing,_you_must_start_his_breathing_at_once.2用手指捏住他的鼻子，口对口吹气，直到他恢复呼吸。(祈使句；until引导的时间状语从句)close_his_nose_with_your_fingers_and_breathe_into_his_mouth_until_he_begins_to_breathe_again.3若某人大出血，用块干净手帕或布压在出血点，按住不放。(if引导的条件状语从句；祈使句；and连接的并列句) if_a_person_is_bleeding_badly,_press_a_clean_handkerchief_or_a_piece_of_cloth_on_the_bleeding_point_and_hold_it_there.4若某人煤气中毒，开门窗，通风换气。(if引导的条件状语从句；祈使句；不定式作目的状语)if_a_person_is_poisoned_by_the_gas,_open_the_doors_and_windows_to_let_the_fresh_air_in.5若有人误吃或喝有毒物品，带着病人和有毒物品立即去医院。(if引导的条件状语从句；祈使句)if_someone_has_eaten_or_drunk_poison_by_mistake,_take_him/her_and_the_poison_to_hospital_at_once.6这些建议在人们的日常生活中很有用。(主系表结构)these_suggestions_are_very_valuable_in_our_daily_life.第四步：句式升级造亮点把句6改为“be of n”结构 these_suggestions_are_of_great_value_in_our_daily_life.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇here_are_some_common_practices_for_first_aid_that_everyone_should_keep_in_mind.if_a_person_stops_breathing,_you_must_start_his_breathing_at_once._close_his_nose_with_your_fingers,_and_breathe_into_his_mouth_until_he_begins_to_breathe_again._if_a_person_is_bleeding_badly,_press_a_clean_handkerchief_or_a_piece_of_cloth_on_the_bleeding_point_and_hold_it_there._if_a_person_is_poisoned_by_the_gas,_open_the_doors_and_windows_to_let_the_fresh_air_in._if_someone_has_eaten_or_drunk_poison_by_mistake,_take_him/her_and_the_poison_to_hospital_at_once.these_suggestions_are_of_great_value_in_our_daily_life.its very important for us to know some knowledge of first aid.we should know first aid in order to deal with common injuries.in our daily life, we often need temporary treatment when someones nose is bleeding or when someones skin is mildly burnt.in an emergency, we should put our hands on the proper settlement and apply our first aid knowledge into practice.besides, we need bravery and quick action.for the purpose of performing first aid properly, we can know about some common symptoms and remember the first aid processes over and over again.however, if the situation is complex or the injuries are unbearable, it is necessary to call for the ambulance.the medical treatment is more professional.it does not mean that first aid is of little use.on the contrary, the timely help will be of vital importance.remember that first aid can make a difference！对我们来说，了解一些急救知识是非常重要的。为了处理常见损伤，我们应该懂一些常识。在我们的日常生活中，当有人鼻子流血时，或是有人皮肤轻度烧伤时，我们经常需要实施