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朱伟老师考研写作笔记，仅供参考。考试趋势（Trend）大作文 20分99年开始：cartoon 漫画 chart 图表话题：05年开始 当年热点话题的擦边球（hot-spot）05-1 对应 04年（马加爵） 家庭和睦06-1 对应 05年 超女 idol over-worship07-1 对应 06年 世界杯考“民生”教育、家庭、道德观念考研作文没有创新分，选择最简单的切入点，成为中心思想。08年 07/08奥运会你一条腿，我一条腿；你我一起，走南闯北 fight together / cooperate / teamwork漫画底下的中文就是文章的中心思想，尤其是其中的动词和形容词，反映感情色彩。推荐：中国新闻漫画网 民生、教育、家庭版块中国传统价值观（traditional Chinese values） 网络 网络的“近”与“远” global village indifferent 文化火锅(hot-pot)作文类型只有两种：单项话题 占历年80%以上 双向话题 低于20%11年1月：the slide of quality Pollution Lack of responsibility Sustainable development预测12年1月 harmony（一） 个体的和谐发展1. 节约与浪费Thrifty a. 节约的Frugality n. frugal a.WasteBurn the money e.g. 天价月饼 什么是美（beauty）？ 自然美 natural beauty / unaffected beauty 人造美 artificial beauty Plastic surgery 整容2. 尊重中国传统文化中西方节日对比（二） 个体、他人及社会的和谐发展成功 success1. the criteria of successpersonal affluencecharity 2. 不满足感是否是成功的关键因素？Is the discontent the key factor for success?山寨 “Shanzhai” cellphone / movie star Copycat diploma 山寨学位 Plagiarism 抄袭合作 teamwork 创业 build up ones own business Innovative undertaking（三） 人与自然的和谐发展私家车 private vehicle / automotive堵车 traffic jam空气污染 air contamination乱砍乱伐 deforest v. deforestation n.泥石流 mudslide土地流失 landslide关于历史古迹的破坏与保护话题 句子/ n. + with who / which / that v.-ing / v. ed/en e.g. He, loving her, was dead. There is a man swimming there.Dear XXX,This letter aims to / I am writing this letter to extend my decision for quitting job. I hope that you could take my current situation into consideration.Honestly speaking, / Apparently speaking, / Frankly speaking, my salary appears remarkably / unbelievably / incredibly low compared with my same-level co-workers. After all, I have got / obtained my bachelors degree so that I should have earned a little bit more. However, it is a great pity that I find it impossible for me to get any chance of self-promotion.Actually, it takes me a lot of time to make up my mind for departure. Thanks a lot for granting me opportunities to share 3-year brilliant memory and / as well as experience here. Sincerely wish our company a more splendid-shining future.Structure:What? Description + topic(一) description （虚开头）chart 图表（总） tablebar chartpie chartcurve diagram 曲线图间接虚开头： As is vividly described in the chart直接虚开头： This curve diagram orderly arranges the information of e.g. These two pie charts regularly compare the percentage distribution concerning over the period from to , indicating that例子：数据上涨 increase / rise up / go up / rocket up / soar下降 decrease / go down / drop / slump持平 level off / stabilize / break even波动 wave / fluctuate / back and forth“数据加分” 计算出百分比e.g. An American girl is coming towards us in a traditional Chinese Miao costume.An deliciously pretty American girl, with an angel-like smile, graceful and sweet, is coming towards us in a traditional Chinese Miao costume.Gracefully and sweetly, a deliciously pretty American girl, with an angel-like smile, is coming towards us, dancing with swinging locks.05年1月：Desperately and helplessly, a pathetic / miserable elder is being kicked just like a football among these evil feet.Actually, / Conspicuously, it seems like a wake-up call / morning call to send us a luminous message that (主题句) n.(主题) has been put under the spotlight and aroused the wide con