学Unit1Friendship Period5Using languageWriting课件（30张）.ppt

unit1 unit1friendship howtowritealetterforadvice misswanghasreceivedaletterfromxiaodong heisalsoaskingforsomeadvice readthelettercarefullyandhelpmisswanganswerit readingandwriting dearmisswang i mastudentfromhuzhouseniorhighschool ihaveaproblem i mnotverygoodatcommunicatingwithpeople althoughitrytotalktomyclassmates istillfindithardtomakegoodfriendswiththem soifeelquitelonelysometimes idowanttochangethissituation butidon tknowhow iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgivemesomeadvice yours xiaodong readtheletterandanswerthequestions whatproblemdoesxiaodonghave 2 whatisxiaodongaskingfor heisnotgoodatcommunicatingwithpeopleandcan tmakegoodfriendswiththem heisaskingforsomeadvicetochangethesituation makealistofyourideastochangethesituationandgiveyourreasons pairwork 建议信是书信的一种形式 属于应用文 建议信是写信人向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告 有可能是写给个人 就收信人遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点 也可能是写给某个组织或机构 就改进其服务等方面提出建议或忠告 写作指导 首段 一般指明提建议的初衷 中段 围绕问题 婉转地提出有针对性且具有说服性的建议 注意充分考虑对方的实际情况 表达时用语要得体 尾段 简单予以希望 希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助 同时阐明你所提供的建议仅供对方参考 注意 时态应以一般现在时为主 由于是给别人提出建议 所以人称应该以第二人称为主 语言要委婉 精炼 同时要简洁 表达清楚 常用表达 建议信开头 youhaveaskedmeformyadviceon andiwilltrytomakesomesuggestions thanksfortrustingme it smygreatpleasuretogiveyousomesuggestions advice tipson i msorrytohear learnthat however thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice i msorry that youarehavingtrouble difficulty problemsin ithinkyoucanmakeitifyoufollowtheadvicebelow i dliketoofferyousomeadvice 表达建议 iwouldliketosuggestthat ifiwereyou iwould asfarasiamconcerned inmyopinion itseemsbetterthat whynot itwouldbeagoodideaif foronething foranother inthefirstplace firstly first secondly second lastbutnotleast 最后但不是最不重要的 建议信结尾 theseareonlymypersonalsuggestions tips ihopeyouwillfindthemuseful helpful iwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouinfurtherdetail i mwillingtodiscussthismatterwithyouwhenever iwillhighlyappreciateyourconsiderationofmyadvice suggestions tips ihope dearxiaodong i mgladtoreceiveyoure mail youaskmesomethingabout 建议主题 thefollowingismyadvice 建议信写作模板 inmyopinion youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions 建议的内容 ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals andiwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoufor yourssincerely useful furtherdetails it sagoodhabitforyoutokeepadiary itcanhelpyourememberpastevents youcanexpressyourfeelingsandthoughtsinit itwillhelpyouimproveyourenglishifyoukeepadiaryinenglish whynothaveatry learningtip 写作任务 假设你叫李华 下面是你的美国朋友tom给你写的一封信 请根据来信内容给他写一封建议信 注意 词数100左右 开头已给出 但不计入总词数 deartom i msorryyouhavehadaquarrelwithyourfriend yours lihua 写作指导 这是一封建议信 建议信是书信的一种形式 属于应用文 建议信是写信人向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告 有可能是写给个人 就收信人遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点 也可能是写给某个组织或机构 就改进其服务等方面提出建议或忠告 建议信要给出写信的原因 建议的内容 提出建议的理由 且语气一定要得当 既要委婉礼貌 又要有说服力 就本篇习作而言 可以把全文分为三段 第一段 表明写作意图 给tom提供一些建议 第二段 针对tom的问题 给出具体的建议以及理由 第三段 简单予以希望 希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助 常用表达 开头 i mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon youhaveaskedmeformyadviceon andiwilltrytomakesomesuggestions it smygreatpleasuretogiveyousomesuggestions adviceon iwouldliketogiveyousomesuggestions adviceon i msorry that youarehavingtrouble difficulty problemsin hereareafewsuggestionsabout herearesometipsforyou 正文 iwouldliketosuggestthat itisnecessary important itseemstomethatyoucould whynot ifyoudothis itwouldbeagoodideaif first itisimportantto then italsohelpsto besides itshouldbeagoodideato 结尾 ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestions advice ideasuseful helpful ihopemysuggestionswill iwillbeverygladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful practical 参考范文 deartom i msorryyouhavehadaquarrelwithyourfriend herearesometipsforyou first don tbetooworried mostfriendshavedisagreementsfromtimetotime second whynotsaysorryforwhatyoudidwrong ifyoudothis yourfriendwillknowyouvaluehis herfriendshipandwanttomakeupwithhim her atthesametime he shewillsurelyrealizehe shewasatfault too third talkwithyourfriendaboutyourdeepestfeelingsandthoughts onlyinthiswaycanyouunderstandeachotherbetter ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful yours lihua 范文点评 1 范文脉络分明 层次清晰 作者在第一段开门见山地提出主题 第二段就如何解决问题提出具体的建议 第三段就所提建议表达期望 2 first second third的恰当使用 不仅加强了文章的逻辑性和连贯性 而且使文章结构紧凑 3 saysorryforwhatyoudidwr