初中英语人教版七年级下册日记体写作.ppt

写作课 日记类 ByHeLi AvisittotheOldPeople sHome What stoday What stheweatherliketoday MondayMay14th 2017 Sunny Howtowriteadiarywell Adiary a 人称 1 格式 b 时态 c 写作顺序 星期 日期 左上角 天气 右上角 题目可写可不写 如写 在第一行正中间 2 特点 过去时态 事情发生的先后顺序 第一人称 Let sdiscuss Howtowriteadiarywell theOldPeople sHome tookthebus to 书面表达 请根据以下信息 写一篇日记 arrivedthere werehappy didalotofthingsforthem cleanedthehouses didsomewashing sanganddancedforthem playedgamestogether madeandatedumplings saidgoodbyetothem Lookatthepicturesandretellthestories Wedidalotofthingsforthem WetookabustotheOldPeople sHome Wearrivedthere Theoldpeoplewereveryhappy Wedidalotofthingsforthem Wecleanedthehouse Wedidsomewashing Wesanganddancedforthem Weplayedgamestogether Wemadeandatedumplingstogether Wesaidgoodbyetothem 言之有物 切中题意 语言准确多样 运用得体 earlyinthemorning fortyminuteslater when first thewholemorning then afterthat finally at6 00 Earlyinthemorning wetookabustotheOldPeople sHome Fortyminuteslater wearrivedthere Theoldpeoplewereveryhappywhentheysawus Wedidalotofthingsforthem First wecleanedthehousesanddidsomewashing Ittookusthewholemorning Then wesanganddancedforthem Afterthat weplayedgamestogether Finally Wemadeandatedumplingstogether At6 30 Wesaidgoodbyetothem WetookabustotheOldPeople sHome Wearrivedthere Theoldpeoplewereveryhappy Wedidalotofthingsforthem Wecleanedthehouses Wedidsomewashing Wesanganddancedforthem Weplayedgamestogether Wemadeandatedumplingstogether Wesaidgoodbyetothem 英语文章结构 三段式 开头小结 点明主题 具体细节描写 结尾小结 升华主题 逻辑清楚 体现整体性 Itwasafinedaytoday MyclassmatesandIdecidedtotheOldPeople sHome Althoughweweretired weallfelthappy Wethinkitisawonderfulexperienceforus Andwewillneverforgettoday Earlyinthemorning wetookabusthere Fortyminuteslater wearrivedthere Theoldpeoplewereveryhappywhentheysawus Wedidalotofthingsforthem First wecleanedthehousesanddidsomewashing Ittookusthewholemorningtodothese Then wesanganddancedforthem Afterthat weplayedgamestogether Finally Wemadeandatedumplingstogether At6 30 Wesaidgoodbyetothem MondayMay14th 2017 Sunny AvisittotheOldPeople sHome Itwasafinedaytoday MyclassmatesandIdecidedtotheOldPeople sHome Earlyinthemorning wetookabusthere Fortyminuteslater wearrivedthere Theoldpeoplewereveryhappywhentheysawus Wedidalotofthingsforthem First wecleanedthehousesanddidsomewashing Ittookusthewholemorningtodothese Then wesanganddancedforthem Afterthat weplayedgamestogether Finally Wemadeandatedumplingstogether At6 30 Wesaidgoodbyetothem Althoughweweretired weallfelthappy Wethinkitisa