中考英语作文辅导资料.doc

中考英语作文辅导资料一 写作技巧辅导1. 十句作文法：所谓十句作文并非一定是10句，很多考生的高分作文（80字以下）的句子数量都在8至10句之间（以句子长短和结构不同而变化）。作文结构基本模式为：第一段（开头）：一句主题句， 一句扩展句（也可以没有）第二段 （正文）：一句主题句， 若干个扩展句（5-6个，要视内容而决定扩展句 的多少）第三段（结尾）： 结尾句2. 范文讲评：根据下面表格所提供的信息，写一则通知，告诉你的同学关于你们郊游的计划。时间星期日（月日）地点人民公园交通工具坐公共汽车前往出发时间早上：到达公园时间早上：活动安排上午：划船；游泳；在饭馆吃午餐下午：英语角活动（English corner activities）；照相返回时间下午：要求：、词数：个词左右；题目及文章的 开头已给出，但不算在词数内。、表格中所列内容必须都用上，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 、不要使用真实姓名及所在学校名称， 否则答案作废。Notice Good morning, everyone! Ill tell you a piece of good news. We are planning an outing. _ 范文：Good morning, everyone! Now Ill tell you a piece of good news.(主题句) We are planning an outing. (主题句) We are going to the Peoples Park by bus on July 10th, Sunday. (扩展句) Well leave at 7:00 a.m. at the school gate and arrive there at 8:30 a.m. in the morning. (扩展句) Then you can go boating and swimming. (扩展句) Lets have lunch in a restaurant and join the English corner in the afternoon. (扩展句) If you would like to take photos, youd better take a camera. (扩展句) The time to return is 4:30 p.m. (扩展句) Please get ready for the outing. (扩展句) Wish all of us have a good time. (结尾句) 点评：本文是仿照十句作文法而写的一篇优秀考场作文。文章围绕“Notice”这一主题展开，把表格所提供的信息陈述清楚，要点齐全。文章中语句简练，语句变化多样，有简单句、并列句和复合句，也用上了祈使句，过渡自然，结尾表明作者自己对这次郊游活动的祝愿，增强了感染力。3. 课堂操练：你叫林海（英文名叫Joe），你的朋友John发给你的电子邮件中提到了关于学校准备开办英语学习班的消息，你对此事很感兴趣，请给John回一封邮件，询问有关英语学习班的详情。邮件的要点如下：1对英语学习班很感兴趣。2希望可以练习英语，结识朋友。3问英语学习班的上课时间、地点、内容以及费用。注意：1邮件要通顺、连贯。2词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计人总词数。3不能在答卷上透露个人的任何信息（例如具体的学校和姓名等），否则答案作废。 Dear John,Thanks very much for the information about the English evening class.(主题句)Im looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. (结尾句) 范文Dear John, Thanks very much for the information about the English evening class.(主题句) It sounds very interesting to me. (扩展句) You know I want to practise my English and make some new friends. (扩展句) I think this English evening class will be helpful to me. (扩展句) Could you please tell me a little more about the class? (扩展句) When does it begin and how much does it cost? (扩展句) Where will the class be held? (扩展句) Also, do you have any more information about what we will do in class? (扩展句) Im looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. (结尾句) Yours Joe二 写作词汇辅导连接词：1. 总体介绍：n Firstly, Secondly,Thirdly,Finally/At last/In the end, n To begin with,（首先，.）；Subsequently, （后来，）n Day after day（日渐一日）/ year after year（年复一年）n At the meanwhile（与此同时）；To conclude（总之，.）2. 补充说明：Besides, /Also, / Moreover,/Furthermore,/ In addition,/ Whats more,3. 举例That is to say；For example/ instance4. 对比：n On one hand, On the other hand, On contrary,（相反，）n While5.因果n because/Because , ； , so /,； therefore,n Thus,/ Therefore, In short,/howevern As a result, / As a consequence, .6. 转折Though/Although , ./ though； , but / , however；In spite of .换词拒绝滥词-赶快升级good/fine “好的”terrific 极好的， fabulous 极为美好的， amazing 奇妙的，perfect 完美的excellent 优秀的， marvelous 非凡的， glorious 非常愉快的 fine/nice “天气好”pleasant 令人愉快的 ，cheerful 令人快乐的，enjoyable 令人愉快的glorious 令人快乐的， pleasing 令人满意的， big “大的”huge 巨大的， large 大的， enormous 庞大的giant 巨大的， gigantic 大得惊人的， immense 广大的三 复合句训练： 避免总使用简单句高级句型It is adj.(for/of sb.) to do sth.so adj. that太的，以致,/ too adj. to do sth.太以致不能做某事spend some time /some money(in) doing sth. 化一些时间/一些金钱做某事 It takes sb. Some time to do sth.花某人一些时间去做某事。in order to ,为了 so that以便中考英语作文满分必备的10个“万能”句型1. 不用说 It goes without saying that = （It is） needless to say （that） = It is obvious that 例：不用说早睡早起是值得的。It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.2. 在各种之中， Among various kinds of ， /= Of all the ， 例在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.3. 就我的看法；我认为In my opinion, = To my mind, = As far as I am concerned, = I am of the opinion that 例：In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。4. 随着人口的增加 With the increase/growth of the population, 随着科技的进步 With the advance of science and technology, 例：With the rapid development of Taiwans economy, a lot of social problems have come to pass.随着台湾经济的快速发展许多社会问题产生了。5. 是必要的 It is necessary （for sb.） to do / that 是重要的 It is important/essential （for sb.） to do / that 是适当的 It is proper （for sb.） to do / that 是紧急的 It is urgent （for sb.） to do / that 例：It is proper for us to keep the public places clean.It is proper that we （should） keep the public places clean.我们应当保持公共场所清洁。6. 花费spend on sth. / doing sth. 例：我们不应该在我们不感兴趣的事情上花太多的时间。We shouldnt spend too much time on something we arent interested in.7. how 引导的感叹句例：那至少可以证明你很诚实。At least it will prove how honest you are.8. 状语从句A）如果你不，你就会 If you dont ， youll 例If you dont keep working hard, youll lose the chance.如果你不坚持努力工作，你就会失去这次机会。B） 如此 ，以至于 so that 例：At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up.当时，我非常伤心，最后都想放弃了。C） 每当我听到我就忍不住感到兴奋。Whenever I hear ， I cannot but feel excited.每当我做我就忍不住感到悲伤。 Whenever I do ， I cannot but feel sad.每当我想到我就忍不住感到紧张。Whenever I think of ， I cannot but feel nervous.每当我遭遇我就忍不住感到害怕。Whenever I meet with ， I cannot but feel frightened.每当我看到我就忍不住感到惊讶。Whenever I see ， I cannot but feel surprised.例：Whenever I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot but feel sad.= Every time I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot help feeling sad.每当我想到我家附近那一条清澈的小溪我就忍不住感到悲伤。9. 宾语从句我认为，/ 我认为不 I think / I dont think that 我想知道是否 I wonder whether 例：He doesnt think I should stop him joining the club.他认为我不应该阻止他参加这个俱乐部。10. Since + S + 过去式， S + 现在完成式。例：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.自从他上高中，他就一直很用功。 四：平常多背诵积累经典美句，运用到作文中为作文添加亮点要引用谚语时，先来这样一句引出谚语：As a saying goes,“.”How time flies! 时光飞逝。Every dog has his day. 谁都会有走运的时候。A fool may give a wise man counsel. 愚者千虑，必有一得。Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。Ale will make a cat speak. 酒后吐真言。 There is no smoke without fire. 无风不起浪1. A years plan starts with spring. 中文：_一年之际在于春2. Every minute counts. 中文：_分秒必争3. A bad thing never dies. 中文：_坏事遗臭万年4. Friends must part. 中文：_天下无不散之筵席5. Every coin has its two sides 6. .有志者,事竟成Where there is a will there is a way.7. 9.欲速则不达.More haste, less speed. 11.好的开端是成功的一半.Well begun is half done.33.良药苦口.A good medicine tastes bitter.34.知识就是力量.Knowledge is power.35.金钱不是万能的.Money is not everything.36.时不我待.Time and tide wait no man.37.少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲.A young idler, an old beggar.38.趁热打铁.Strike while the iron is hot.39.天生我才必有用.Every man has his price.40.看破生死的人能成大事.He who sees through life and death will meet with most success.41.世上无难事,只要肯登攀.Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.42不入虎穴,焉得虎子.Noting venture, noting gain.45.谋事在人,成事在天.Man proposes, God deposes.46.众人拾柴火焰高.Many hands make light work.47.不经风雨,怎能见彩虹. No cross, no crown.48.没有付出,就没有收获.No pain, no gain.55.眼见为实.Seeing is believing.80.He laughs best who laughs last.谁笑到最后,谁笑得最美.81.Follow your own course, and let people talk.走自己的路,让别人说去吧.99.Actions speak louder that words.事实胜于雄辩.五 多读范文,所谓熟读唐诗三百首,不会吟诗也会吟中考英语作文 题目预测及范文1、饮食与健康Today， I received the readers letter. I was shocked at it. Personally speaking， I think we should pay more attention to the food safety. The government must make some necessary laws. Whats more， some businessmen shouldnt be only interested in making money. They must care about peoples health. Wed better not eat anything in dirty places though some food is delicious， because eating unhealthy food does harm to our health.Finally， I hope the family in the accident will get better soon.2、低碳生活Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think its my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And wed better not spend much money on expensive clothes. If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.3、平安校园，School is our home，we all live and study here. In order to make ourselves safe，asastudent，we should obey the school rules . We must obey the traffic rulers on the way. We shouldnt trun after each other in school；We should get on well with othersand we should not fight with others；we should not eat thejunk or bad food；We mustnt be allowed to smoke ,drink or take drugs; When you meet someone asks for money，you neednt be afraid .You should reportto the teacher or call the police. We must keep away from those bad habits and be polite to others. I hope we have a good time every day.4、梦想和未来（1）我的未来(My future) What do I want to do when Im older. Someone wants to be a doctor. Someone wants to be a basketball player because they are good at sport. Someone wants to be a writer and to make the writing.Someone wants to be a teacher because they like teaching children. I like playing the piano and I good at it. So I want to become a piano player. Playing the piano is very interesting. And you can learn something of music. A piano can make you like music. A lot of musicians and singers are love playing piano. I can become a grand pianist when I grow up. To become a pianist is a hard job. So Ill be harder and harder to practice from now on .But I believe I can do it.（2）、I want to be an inventorTVs, telephone, fridges, cars, planes, computers and many other things are important inventions. They have greatly changed our life. Many people have their ideas and wishes. They want to invent some new things for the world. I am one of them. I want to be an inventor in the future, Inventions can bring fun and happiness to our life and make our daily life more convenient. Our life will become better and better. Now I am a high school student. I will try my best to work hard at my lessons to make my dream come true.（3）想象中的高中生活输入内容已经达到长度限制还能输入9999字Hi, everybody. Hows it going? Ill become a senior high school student this September. Im very happy, but Im worried that I may meet with some difficulties in the new school. Perhaps I cant keep up with my classmates, especially in math. And Im not sure if I can make friends with others because Im not good at communicating. On the other hand, I dont know how to take good care of myself. I afraid the food in the new school wont agree with me. What can I do with these problems? Could you give me some advice? I really need your help. 5、环境污染（1）Recently, Droughts and floods often happen in some places. Why ? Some results are caused by humans. They cut too many trees .A lot of good farmland has turned into deserts. People waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers. They throw rubbish into rivers, too. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. I think what we can do is that we have to save every drop of water as possible as we can. For example, we must turn off the tap at once after we use it. We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces. Its also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me! Only in this way can we live happily. If we dont save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us. I believe if everyone makes a little thing , we can make a big difference.6、放松The Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming. In order to make a success in the exam I think its high time for us to relax a little. Or well be too nervous to work well in the exam. In order to relax ourselves, we can turn to some of our hobbies, different students have different ways - Some watch TV, some listen to music But for me I enjoy taking exercise most. Whenever I feel tired, I always spend an hour (in) walking or jogging in the park. Besides, I also play table tennis with my friends after class. In my opinion, taking exercise can not only rest our brains and eyes but also help build our bodies. I think its really helpful to both my health and my study. I hope all of my classmates can join me in getting relaxed. I wish you all every success in the coming examination！7、中学生该不该（1）上网（1）In my opinion，the Internet is helpful rather than harmful as someone else thinks. As is known to all，the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life. On the Internet，we can read news at home and from abroad and get as much information as we can. We can send e - mails or make phone calls to our family as well as to our friends. We can also attend the net school，read many books and even teach ourselves English. We can also enjoy music，watch matches and play computer games on the Internet. We can even do shopping online. Besides，we can improve our ability to operate the computer. But we should not be given to the Internet，or well get our life and study destroyed. Besides，we should keep off the harmful websites. Anyhow，this doesnt prevent the Internet from becoming our friend. （2）带手机Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. Some think it is good for students to bring a mobile phone. But some people do not think so. They think it is bad for students to bring a mobile phone. Because the students will use mobile phones to play games, sent text messages, watch movies, etc which will do harm to their study. And if a mobile phone ring in the class, the teacher and students would be disturbed. In my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school. As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information. A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information. We can also relax ourselves by playing them when were tired of our studies. The most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way and do not disturb others.3）、网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了，谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of internet shopping these days. Some students think its very convenient for us to go shopping on the internet. The shops on Internet ，for example , 360 are open for almost 24 hours a day, so we can buy something we want at any time if we like. Whats more, we neednt to wait in a queue。However, some students disagreed with them. We cant see the things while we are shopping. So we are not sure whether they are good or not. Besides, we cant enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends。8、多彩校园（我为学校骄傲）Proud of my schoolMy school is very big with several tall buildings. We have a beautiful playground with lots of trees around it. There are many flowers everywhere.My busy school life always makes me happy. I have lots of fun at school. I not only have all kinds of classes, but also take part in colorful activities after classes. I play games and do lots of sports, like playing basketball, football and table tennis.I love my school because its like a big family. The students are friendly and the teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents. I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart. Im leaving my school. Ill never forget the days Ive spent here. 9、禁烟A survey about smokers in a middle school tells that although 90% of all students never smoke, 3% of them often smoke and 7% sometimes do. In other words, 10% of the students smoke. Thats terrible.As we know, smoking is harmful to our health. Every year, thousands of people lose their lives because of it. Smoking not only does harm to your health, Smoking may cause many diseases. While smoking can also do harm to those who dont smoke。 And also wastes money. ，because, a fire may be caused by cigarette ends. In all, smoking is so dangerous that we should keep away from it. If all smokers give up smoking, we can enjoy clearer air.10、家乡变化The Changes in My Hometown I come from SuiHua in Heilongjiang province In the past, my hometown was not very big, people lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. the traffic was not very convenient that so few people came here.Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become more beautiful. The mountains are all green, the river clearer and the sky bluer. Many people all have their own cars and have a happy life everyday. And now, every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our hometown. My hometown becomes more and more famous.Im sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.11、怎样学好英语How to learn English wellAs we know , English has become an international language. It is more popular than any other language in China . English is widely spoken in the world and it is the most useful language around the world . But how to learn it well ? The best way is to use it all the time . If we can talk in English , think in English we can learn