students sheet 2_英语考试_外语学习_教育专区.doc

广州市真光中学英语科资料Paragraph Writing on Giving Solutions What is this lesson mainly aboutParagraph structure: The way in which different parts of a paragraph are organized.Internal logic within solutions: The way of thinking, or demonstrating solutions. About structureTopic： 如何用实际行动保护环境 (B)In my view, practical actions, rather than empty slogans, are more likely to make a positive difference in environmental protection. First and foremost, everyone should improve his awareness of protecting our earth, shouldering the responsibility. Besides, we are supposed to contribute our share by starting out small, like planting tress and making sufficient use of every precious drop of water. Only when we make joint efforts can we have a brighter world to live in.Topic： 如何用实际行动保护环境 (A)First and foremost, everyone should improve his awareness of protecting our earth, shouldering the responsibility. Besides, we are supposed to contribute our share by starting out small, like planting tress and making sufficient use of every precious drop of water. Task 1: Which paragraph is better organized? Why?Task 2: Pay attention to the sentence functionTopic sentence: Development sentences: Concluding sentence: . About the internal logic within solutionsTask 3: Read the following paragraphs on the same topic, and see how they are developed with different logic.Topic:日常生活的安全措施 （2011年广东省高考名校联考）(A) Internal logic: from awareness to actionsIn our daily life, taking proper precautions(预防措施) is of vital importance to live a safe and happy life. First and foremost, we should raise our awareness of self-protection and arm ourselves with the relevant knowledge. Whats more, we are supposed to remember to turn off the gas before going out. Furthermore, when going out by bike, we should go along the right side and should not ride at a high speed. All in all, life is so fragile that we cant lay too much emphasis on it.(B) Internal logic: from personal to social aspectIn our daily life, taking proper precautions(预防措施) is of vital importance to live a safe and happy life. First and foremost, everyone should arm himself with the knowledge of self-protection. None of us is allowed to use electrical appliances(电器) or light candles in the dormitories or classrooms without permission. When it comes to community(社区) safety, the government should take some effective measures to educate the poor in self-protection knowledge and medical care for free. It is also suggested that the government should give away a fire extinguisher(灭火器) for each family. All in all, life is so fragile that we cant lay too much emphasis on it.Task 4: Match the internal logic with corresponding paragraphs. Underline the topic sentences and concluding sentences.The internal logic:From awareness to actions From personal to social aspect(A) 如何减少交通事故 (2009年惠州第三次调研) It is of great significance to make efforts to prevent any traffic accident from happening. Everyone should pay more attention to road safety and develop a sense of responsibility, bearing the basic traffic rules in mind. Besides, drivers, if drunk or emotionally upset, should avoid getting on road. Accordingly, governments should take effective measures to establish a sound system(健全的体制) to reduce automobile accidents, and those who disobey(违反) the regulations(规章制度) should be severely punished. In short, we should let people realize being careful means respecting lives.The internal logic within solutions is (B) 如何用实际行动保护环境（2013年11月区调研）From my perspective, practical actions, rather than empty slogans, are more likely to make a positive difference in environmental protection. Everyone should improve his awareness of protecting our earth, shouldering the responsibility. Besides, we are supposed to contribute our share by starting out small, like planting tress and making sufficient use of every precious drop of water. Only when we make joint efforts can we have a brighter world to live in.The internal logic within solutions is . Discuss and produceTask 5: Discuss the topic in pairs. Develop your own paragraph in a logical way. Pay attention to the structure.Topic: 如何节约用水The internal logic within solutions in your passage is . Peer assessmentTask 6: Swap the composition, and judge it from the following dimensions.CriteriaGreat FailedTopic sentenceConcluding sentence Internal logic within solutionsTransitional words(过渡词). Development assignmentTask 7: Choose one of the topics below. Try to write paragraphs with different logic. Pay attention to the structure. Topics：1. 如何防止视力下降 2. 如何避免考试作弊现象 3. 如何避免食物浪费现象4. 如何正确对待艾滋病毒感染者Version 1The internal logic within solutions in your passage is Version 2The internal logic within solutions in your passage is Checklist CriteriaGreat FailedTopic sentenceConcluding sentence Internal logic within solutionsTransitional words. ReferenceUseful expressions:It is of great significance to do sth.It is of vital importance to do sth.can be listed as follows.In order to , we have a lot to do.make (joint) efforts to do sth.make a positive difference in sth.improve/ raise ones awareness of safetydevelop a sense of responsibility shoulder the responsibilitycontribute our share to sth. by doing sth.take effective/ positive/ active measures to do sth.make proper/ good/ best/ sufficient use of sth.establish