2017年高考英语一轮总复习创新模拟题：专题15 短文改错.doc

.专题十五短文改错模拟精选题Passage 1(2016山西重点中学协作体模拟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Having a good teacher do mean a lot to us students and I am lucky enough to have the oneMiss Brown, my English teacher.Miss Brown is a charming lady always worn a big smile on her face. In the first class she introduced her and then asked us to say something about ourselves with English. When it was my turn, I felt too shy and fearful that I didnt dare to say a word. She came up to me and said, “Dont afraid. You can make it. Just have a try.” At last, I did it quite good. She praised me for that I had done. Never shall I forgot my first English class in senior high school.答案Having a good teacher mean a lot to us students and I am lucky enough to have oneMiss Brown, my English teacher.Miss Brown is a charming lady always a big smile on her face. In the first class she introduced and then asked us to say something about ourselves English. When it was my turn, I felt shy and fearful that I didnt dare to say a word. She came up to me and said, “Dont afraid. You can make it. Just have a try.” At last, I did it quite . She praised me for I had done. Never shall I my first English class in senior high school.Passage 2(2016汉中市二次质检)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Smiling is auniversal language but can give us courage, confidence and comfort.I still remember how upset I am when it was my turn to recite a poem before class.Feel nervous and shy, I forgot almost everything. I decided to give up, but all my classmates, especial my teacher kept smiling at me encouragingly. Their smile warmed me so much that I got over the difficulty and eventually made it up. I think smiling not only makes us happy but also help build up our confidence. Furthermore, they will improve the relationship between us. It is smiling that brings harmony us. Only when you smile at the world does the world smile at you. Therefore, keep smiling and show your best to the world.答案Smiling is auniversal language can give us courage, confidence and comfort.I still remember how upset I when it was my turn to recite a poem before class. nervous and shy, I forgot almost everything. I decided to give up, but all my classmates, my teacher kept smiling at me encouragingly. Their warmed me so much that I got over the difficulty and eventually made it . I think smiling not only makes us happy but also build up our confidence. Furthermore, will improve the relationship between us . It is smiling that brings harmony us. Only when you smile at the world the world smile at you.Therefore，keep smiling and show your best to the world.Passage 3(2016临沂一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。This morning I saw off my aunt at railway station.There were many passenger in the waiting room.I saw an old lady crying sad because she had lost her ticket and not able to afford another one.I was thinking about helping her when a man come up to comfort her.Then he bought her a ticket with his own money.The old Lady was so moving that she could hardly say a word.She grasped his hand and asked for his name or address.But he only smile and said，“Its my pleasure.” Then he left away quickly.I was greatly moved by such a man he warmed others with his love.答案This morning I saw off my aunt at railway station.There were many in the waiting room.I saw an old lady crying because she had lost her ticket and not able to afford another one.I was thinking about helping her when a man up to comfort her.Then he bought her a ticket with his own money.The old Lady was so that she could hardly say a word.She grasped his hand and asked for his name address.But he only and said，“Its my pleasure.” Then he left quickly.I was greatly moved by such a man warmed others with his love.Passage 4(2016株洲市质检)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Hi Lana，I am 61 years old and I am fromNew Zealand. I start teaching in China last February.I decided that I reached 60 years I would like to do something different. I was lucky to have got a degree in English, that helped me find a job as a teacher in China. Now I work with two Canadian teacher. One, 57, has been here for four years, and the other, 63, have been teaching here for 6 years. He married with a lovely Chinese lady. The Chinese people are hardworking but the students are so willing to learn.How an interesting country to live in!I feel safer here than anywhere I lived. I have found her tips on teaching so usefully.Thank you!Dave答案Hi Lana，I am 61 years old and I am from New Zealand. I teaching in China last February.I decided that I reached 60 years I would like to do something different. I was lucky to have got a degree in English, helped me find a job as a teacher in China. Now I work with two Canadian . One, 57, has been here for four years, and the other, 63, been teaching here for 6 years. He married a lovely Chinese lady. The Chinese people are hardworking the students are so willing to learn. an interesting country to live in!I feel safer here than anywhere I lived. I have found tips on teaching so .Thank you!DavePassage 5(2016宁夏六盘山二模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear Joe，Thanks for you mail. Im glad to know you were interested in the 2017 Florida Winter Camp. It will be held from January 27 to February 13, during that time you will get a wonderful experience. You will have chances to improve your speaking English in the courses provided. Also, activity are arranged for you to spend weekends together with your host family, but you can learn American English in authentic situations. However, a trip to the local Disneyland will certain add up the fun of the camp. Join in the camp and you will have the knowledge of American culture and life. You are sure to benefit from it.Yours truly，Li Hua答案Dear Joe，Thanks for mail. Im glad to know you interested in the 2017 Florida Winter Camp. It will be held from January 27 to February 13, during time you will get a wonderful experience. You will have chances to improve your English in the courses provided. Also, are arranged for you to spend weekends together with your host family, you can learn American English in authentic situations. ， a trip to the local Disneyland will add up the fun of the camp. Join the camp and you will have the knowledge of American culture and life. You are sure to benefit from it.Yours truly，Li HuaPassage 6(2016漳州八校联考)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear Peter，I am writing to ask that you are able to do me a favor.I want to have a penfriend，hopefully，a girl in her early twenties，and with interests similarly to mine.In my mind，he is someone interesting in traveling，swimming，and playing table tennis.However，it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been kept one at home for some time.With such a pen friend，I hope I can share with her our experiences in traveling，taking care pets，or whatever we have in common.I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her countries.I am looking forward to hear from you soon.Best regards，Li Hua答案Dear Peter，I am writing to ask you are able to do me a favor.I want to have a penfriend，hopefully，a girl in her early twenties，and with interests to mine.In my mind， is someone in traveling，swimming，and playing table tennis.，it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been one at home for some time.With such a penfriend，I hope I can share with her our experiences in traveling，taking care pets，or whatever we have in common.I I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her .I am looking forward to from you soon.Best regards，Li HuaPassage 7(2015潍坊3月)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear Jack，Welcome to my school！Upon your arrival，there will be a party for you organizing by my classmates.You may attend to English classes to feel a differently learning style.After that，you can go to your host family that you can experience the Chinese way of life.You can have meals together chatting about whatever interest you.The host family will also show you off some famous scenic spots.You can see people selling kites everywhere because our city was home to kites.There are varieties of kites to choose.So isnt that a good idea to buy some for your friends？Write to me unless you have any questions about the schedule.Yours，Li Hua答案Dear Jack，Welcome to my school！Upon your arrival，there will be a party for you by my classmates.You may attend English classes to feel a learning style.After that，you can go to your host family you can experience the Chinese way of life.You can have meals together chatting about whatever you.The host family will also show you some famous scenic spots.You can see people selling kites everywhere because our city home to kites.There are varieties of kites to chooseSo isnt a good idea to buy some for your friends？Write to me you have any questions about the schedule.Yours，Li HuaPassage 8(2015大连一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。In the summer holiday，we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there.Its a long and bored journey.But the moment I arrived，I fall in love with the city.Its such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it.The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue.If you walk along the coast，you can feel the wind to blowing on your face.The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship.You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted.Moreover，I think the driver there drive too fast in the street.You can never be too careless when crossing the street.答案In the summer holiday，we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there.Its a long and journey.But the moment I arrived，I in love with the city.Its beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it.The streets are and the sky is blue.If you walk along the coast，you can feel the wind blowing on your face.The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship.You may also do some fishing as as it is permitted.，I think the there drive too fast in the street.You can never be too when crossing the street.Passage 9(2015山东省实验中学模拟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。As we all know，everyone have a dream.I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school.Nowadays with modern life go rapidly，many people suffer from different kind of diseases，both mentally and physically.As a result，doctors are in great need at home and abroad.My dream is to become successful doctor，helping to save peoples lives.Although to be a good doctor was very difficult，I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health.To make my dream come true，I have told me over and over again that Ill concentrate more to studies.After all，only by working hardly can one succeed.答案As we all know，everyone a dream.I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school.Nowadays with modern life rapidly，many people suffer from different of diseases，both mentally and physically.As a result，doctors are in great need at home and abroad.My dream is to become successful doctor，helping to save peoples lives.Although to be a good doctor very difficult，I will do whatever I can to keep everyone .To make my dream come true，I have told over and over again that Ill concentrate more studies.After all，only by working can one succeed.Passage 10(2015泰安期末)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Id like to give you some advices on how to learn Chinese well.First，it was important to take a Chinese course，as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practising with your fellow students.Then，it also help to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible.It will make you familiar to Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!Besides，it is a good idea learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easy.You can also make more Chinese friends，they will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try to speak Chinese as many as possible.答案Id like to give you some on how to learn Chinese well.First，it important to take a Chinese course，as youll be able to learn from the teacher and with your fellow students.Then，it also to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible.It will make you familiar Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!Besides，it is a good idea learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more .You can also make more Chinese friends， will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try to speak Chinese as as possible.Passage 11(2014昆明一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Its pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today.I have found that some of my classmates study deeply into the night.Whats more，they did not spare any time to exercise during the day.But they are less energetic than the others in class and cant always stay focusing on their lessons.Worse than that，some of them seldom have breakfast，with which is also a bad habit and will certainly do harm for their health.Obvious，its important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet.We must learn to make wise use of our time，and only in this way can we keep fit and study well.I hope my advices can help you.Thanks for listen.答案Its pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today.I have found that some of my classmates study into the night.Whats more，they not spare any time to exercise during the day. they are less energetic than the others in class and cant always stay on their lessons.Worse than that，some of them seldom have breakfast，with which is also a bad habit and will certainly do harm their health.，its important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet.We must learn to make wise use of our time，and only in this way can we keep fit and study well.I hope my can help you.Thanks for .创新导向题.原创新题Passage 1假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear teachers and schoolmates，Its great honor for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.I want to learn English well to take a better job，but I learn English in some difference ways.In class，I learn new words，useful expressions and grammar and take efforts to understand the texts under the help of our English teacher.After the class，I do a lot of exercises prepare for the college entrance examination.You also read news and watch videos on the Internet and from other source.I have a lot of fun especial when learning English with cartoon movies.Thanks for listening!答案Dear teachers and schoolmates，Its great honor for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.I want to learn English well to take a better job， I learn English in some ways.In class，I learn new words，useful expressions and grammar and efforts to understand the texts the help of our English teacher.After class，I do a lot of exercises for the college entrance examination. also read news and watch videos on the Internet and from other .I have a lot of fun when learning English with cartoon movies.Thanks for listening!Passage 2假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。It seemed that everyone is studying hard for the College Entrance Examination.There are such many books to read.Nowadays，many a parent expect too much of their children.They hope their sons or daughters study hard in order to get great colleges.It is the reason what parents are strict with their children.They dont know what they