2013年三明市中考作文复习教案.docx

建设平安校园是我们每个人的责任与义务。作为一名学生，我们更应该珍惜自己的生命，更应该注意自己的人身安全。假如你是Li Hua，并担任校学生会主席，请你就安全问题，向全校学生发出倡议，写一封安全倡议书。内容提示：(1)不带管制刀具到学校;(2)不私自下河洗澡;(3)不打架;(4)上学放学的途中应该注意安全;(5)遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。参考词汇：管制刀具：restricted knives or things;洗澡：have a bath;打架：fight;紧急情况：emergency;交通安全：pay attention to the traffic。写作要求：(1)用词恰当，要点全面，层次清晰，书写规范。(2)可适当发挥，80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。(3)严禁出现自己的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。 范文Dear students,As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe. We mustnt bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents permission. And, we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned. Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. Furthermore, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers. In a word, following these safeties rules above can make us live in peace.Yours,Li Hua16.饮食安全假如你是一所国际学校校办英文杂志的学生编辑.你看了下面这封信后，也想写一篇关于该信的读后感，内容要点包括：你对此事件的看法;解释你的理由并提出你的建议;向受害者表达尽快康复的祝愿. 范文Today, I received the readers letter. I was shocked at it. Personally speaking, I think we should pay more attention to the food safety. The government must make some necessary laws. Whats more, some businessmen shouldnt be only interested in making money. They must care about peoples health. Wed better not eat anything in dirty places though some food is delicious, because eating unhealthy food does harm to our health.Finally, I hope the family in the accident will get better soon.越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢?请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右)内容包含：遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。劝父母不能酒后驾车。你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线注：第一段已给出，不计入总数 范文With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.Traffic safety is everybodys business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Dont play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybodys business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文。提示：1. 衣着整洁;2. 保持环境卫生;3. 待人有礼，乐于助人;4. 遵守交通规则;5. 要求：1. 文章必须包括所给提示中14 项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥;2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;3. 词数：80词左右。How to Behave Well?In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.Its a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Dont throw litter or spit about. Its good manners to say Thank you and Please and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And wed better not talk or laugh loudly in public.If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.题目：请以“Saving Water”为题，并根据以下提示写一篇不少于60单词的作文。Saving Water1 What do we use water for?2 Why water is very important in our daily life?3 How do we save water?参考范文As we all know, water is essential in our daily life. We drink water every day, we use water to wash things and cook food, we also use water to make machines. People cant live without water.Though about 75% of the earth is covered with water, only 3% of it is fresh water. So we must save water by having a shower instead of a bath. We can save water by fixing dripping taps immediately and we can also save water by not washing under a running tap.书面表达是对学生在初中阶段英语学习的综合考查，涉及篇章结构、句子构成、短语使用和单词拼写等多方面内容，以下就中考书面表达的写作方法和注意事项进行指导：一、认真审题，确定时态人称，同时关注题材格式文章分类：记叙文与议论文，其中，记叙文可以分为时态：故事性文章一般用过去时，其中表达感受时可用现在时。说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时，举例时可用过去时。根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用，如过去和现在的对比等。如果句中出现了时间状语，时态则要遵循时间状语。如ago，last过去时next，in将来时等人称：注意在句子中人称的统一。例如：Thankstotheteachers，wehaveimprovedourEnglish.其中we和our就是人称的统一。格式：注意书信格式的开头和结尾。二、找全信息点，紧扣主题，突出重点切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全，找齐信息点，建议用铅笔标出，写完后再涂掉。根据题目，可适当增加合理内容。特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。三、成文时一定要表述正确，文字流畅切忌与汉语提示的一一对应，使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾，主系表等)。同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写，最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。中考英语作文高分有高招。文章结构清晰，重点句型出彩，可使文章在得分上提高一个档次。背诵以下词句，并在文章中适当应用。考虑文章的篇章结构，使用适当的连接短语，使文章结构紧凑。常用连接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/SecondAnd then，Finally，In the end，At last2.表并列补充关系的：What ismore，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，Inaddition3.表转折对比关系的：However，On the contrary，butAlthough+clause(从句)，In spite of+n/doingOn the one handOn the other handSome，while others4.表因果关系的：Because，AsSo，Thus，Therefore，As a result5.表换一种方式表达：In other words6.表进行举例说明：For example，句子;For instance，句子;such as+n/doing7.表陈述事实：In fact8.表达自己观点：As far as I know，In my opinion9.表总结：In short，In a word，In conclusion，In summary文中正确使用两三个好的句型，如：宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。宾语从句举例：I believe Tianjin will be more beautifulandprosperous。状语从句举例：If everyone does something for the environment， ourhometown will become clean and beautiful。动名词做主语举例：Reading books in the sun is bad f