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BeyondtheSimpleSentence OnNMETWriting Allthepointscovered Variousgrammaticalstructuresandwords Efficientconjunctivephrasestomakethewholepassageconsistentandcompact Grade5 VeryGood 21 25 已找到的住处 11 芳草街 下一站建新华文学校 2003年NMET书面表达 假如你是李华 你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文 来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房 请根据图画提供的信息 写信介绍住房的情况 并告知住房面积为25平方米 月租500元 注意 1 词数100左右 2 参考词汇 房租rent n 1 2 3 DearBob Thanksforyourlitter I mgladthatyou recomingtothenewbuildingHuawenschoolforlearningChinese Iwasfondofyouahorse ItisclosedtoyourschoolinNo 11FanChaoStreet Yourhorseisintwoflours Ithave3rooms achicken arestroomandamen sroom Intherestroom ithasabed alongchairandadest thehorseis25squaremiles Youpay500foramouth Ifyougotoschool youpickup11busandtakedownthenextstop Iwishyouwouldbelikethis YoursLiHua letter tolearn havefound flat close Fangcao flat JianxinChineseSchool kitchen bedroomandabathroom bedroom there s sofa desk Theflat meters Therentis500yuanamonth cantakeaNo 11busandget offat hopeyouwill onthe2ndfloorwith 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Lookingforwardtoyourarrival Yours LiHua Well polishedsample descriptivewords Lessordinarynouns verbs morecomplicatedsentences Score 23 What sthetrendofNMETwriting 1 Introductionofsubject2 Supportingdetails3 Conclusion ismorefrequentlytested tointroducebasicinformationonatopic Narrativewriting 记叙文 orExpositorywriting 说明文 Purpose Format 格式 Expositorywriting Contentof2007NMETWriting Introductionofsubject Conclusion 1 2 3 4 5 anationalstudentsportsprogram StudentsinJiangsutookanactivepartinthisprogram TheMinistryofEducationcallsonstudentstoexerciseforanhoureveryday Takingexercisehelpsusbuildupourbodyandkeepaclearmind Supportingdetails Giveninformation Mainpoints Personalopinionbasedonthedetails From10 00to11 00 studentsfrom joinedinanationalstudentsportsprogram havegoodhealthtoworkfiftyyears enjoythewholelife 1 多实少虚 Aniceperson 2 短语优先 Icannotbearit Wewantpeace generous humorous smart gentle warm hearted hospitable considerate promising Icannotputupwithit Wearelookingforwardtopeace 弃旧取新 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Whennecessary 模拟练习1 就 城市内是否可以养宠物 猫和狗 在学生中组织了一场讨论 请根据下面提供的信息 用英文给报社编辑写一封信 介绍讨论情况 并说明自己的观点和建议 反对者认为 花钱 污染环境 吵闹 伤人 增添负担 支持者认为 安慰孤独者 学会和动物相处 培养责任心 增添情趣 注意 1 信的开头已为你写好 2 词数100左右 DearEditor I mwritingtotellyouabouttherecentdiscussionthatwe vehadonwhetherpeopleshouldkeeppetsathomeincities Thanksforreadingtheletter Yourstruly LiHua 仔细研读作文指令要求及注意事项 在抓准各要点的同时 分析它们的主次关系以确立论点和论据 必要时 可以画出提纲图 如 论点 养宠物好养宠物不好论据 结论 安慰孤独者 学会和动物相处 增强责任心 伤人 吵闹 污染 增添生活情趣 花钱添负担 个人观点 可养宠物 但要避免其不良影响 Reasonsforkeepingpets Reasonsagainstkeepingpets offergoodcompany teachpeoplehowtogetalongwellwithanimals teachpeopletoberesponsible badfortheenvironment noisy attackpeople makeourlifeinteresting alotofwork awasteofmoney Personalopinion Ilikekeepingpetsbutweshouldtakemeasurestopreventsomethingbad DearEditor I mwritingtotellyouabouttherecentdiscussionthatwe vehadonwhetherpeopleshouldkeeppetsathomeincities Thanksforreadingtheletter Yourstruly LiHua Somestudentsthinkitagoodideatokeeppetsbecausetheyoffergoodcompanyforpeoplewhoarelonely 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