2010年高考英语阅卷心得.doc

2010年高考英语阅卷心得2010年高考英语阅卷工作虽然繁忙，但更重要的是它丰富了我的人生阅历，使我有机会从另一个角度来审视英语书面表达的教学，更是对我以往的英语教学进行了一次洗礼，所以归来之后迫不急待地与大家一起分享这十几天的阅卷感受。今年湖北考生48万人，英语阅卷教师215人，由三部分人员组成：高校教授，在读研究生，中学教师。每个阅卷人员都有一个用户名和密码，凭用户名和密码才能登入，登入后每个阅卷人员的一举一动都处在组长及专家组成员的监视中，你离线几分几秒，你阅卷的总量，平均速度，有效度，吻合度，自评率等等各项指标随时随地在电脑里都有反映。根据这套评分系统，每份答卷至少由两名人员评分，而且彼此看不到对方的分数，两名人员不是固定组合，电脑随机派送。如两人所给分数在一定的范围内（误差不超过3到4分），那就是有效分数，两个分数加起来取平均分，就是该答卷的最后得分。如两人所给分数超出一定的范围，由第三个人阅卷，取在范围内的平均值，就是该答卷的最后得分。如还不行，比如一人给6分，一人给10分，一人给14分，无法确定，则四评，也就是由专家组仲裁，最后给定分数。这样，相对来说，英语作文的打分是相对公平的，草菅人命的现象不多。以下就是我结合此次阅卷进行的分析总结：一、高考作文请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用。The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile. A smile can help us get through difficult situations and find friends in a world of strangers. A smile can open doors and tear down walls.注意：无须写标题； 内容只需涉及一个方面； 词数为100左右二、评分原则本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。（接受满分及零分作文）评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。评分档次的确定应在内容符合题目要求的前提下侧重于语言的表达。（去年侧重内容要点，今年注重语言流畅和优美）词数少于80，从总分中减去2分。（去年对字数偏多的给予减分，今年不做要求）评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点切题，词汇和语法结构的准确性和多样性，上下文连贯性及语言的得体性。（主要强调语句优美，如果没有具体事例，也不予减分）拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英，美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。如书写太潦草，以致影响辨认，将分数降低一个档次。（要求学生书写整洁，但无权对书写糟糕的卷面减分）三、考生主要涉及的话题：初入新环境，同学朋友间的一个微笑建立友谊。同学之间发生矛盾，一个微笑解决争端。考试失利，老师父母的微笑鼓励前进。公交车上被踩，一个微笑化解矛盾。遇见小偷，一个微笑化敌为友。上海世博会上，志愿者的微笑意义深远。汶川和玉树地震中，人们的笑脸昭示坚强和希望。四、典型错误 通过这次阅卷，我发现考生在书面表达上存在着一些典型的错误，归纳如下： 审题不认真，偏离主题，信息理解错误 抓不住写作要点，文章内容混乱 用词不准确，汉语式表达方式比比皆是 语言基本功不扎实，语法错误严重 书写不规范，卷面不整洁 下面是我摘录的一些反复出现的典型错误：Are you smile today?As it is known to us thatI am very like smile.I think A smile can help but you didnt at home.I and he are go to shopping常见的拼写错误：smile写成simle, smell, simile symbol写成symble quarrel写成quael五、2010年高考作文样卷下面是专家组给出的五档分数的好文章，也是评卷过程中教师参阅的样卷。第五档（23分） A smile is a powerful body language.When I entered my high school, I found it really hard to catch up with other classmates in study. And I nearly lost hope. Whats worse, I didnt like to talk to teachers and I even dont have any friends. As a result, I didnt know how to solve my problem. Fortunately, my teacher noticed my difficulty. She asked me to her office and wanted to know whether she can help me. There was a smile on her face which was the most beautiful one I had ever seen. And I said yes with a smile, too. From then on, whenever I meet trouble, I turn to my teacher and I really enjoy making friends now.A smile can help us get through difficult situations and find friends in a world of strangers. My teacher use a warm smile to open my heart and tear down gaps between us. I really want to thank her for kindness. Moreover, I will smile to everyone to let them know that Im ready to offer help and I want to make friends with them.(漂漂亮亮)第四档（18分）I remembered when I failed to pass exam, I felt totally upset. The score throw me into a world of darkness. On one hand, I lost confidence of my self. On the other hand, I felt sorry for my patents for they had sacrifice a lot to my study. Unexpectedly,I saw the smile coming from my classmates. The shinning smile drove my sadness off and improved our friendships. After I told my patents my exam results, to my surprise,they just smiled and said:“Thats OK,we believe you will do well in the next exam. It was just like a strong light that led me out of darkness and let me believed that I can do well.”From then on,I turn to happy and confidence because teachers smile gave me courage and I think I can do it. The smile opens door for me to achieve my goal.(清清楚楚)第三档（13分）I am a no-confidence girl,because my family is not rich and I always think I am bad for others. They have beautiful cloth and love from others.One day, my English teacher had a class about dream. It was my turn,I said “I want to be a lawyer”slowly and my face turned red .But on this time,my teacher gave me a smile. It seems that she believe me and my dream will be came true.After that, I changed. I turn to happy and confidence because teachersmile gave me courage and I think I can do it. The smile opens door for me to achieve my goal.(马马虎虎)第二档（8分）The best body language is the smile.A smile can help us get through difficult situations and find friends in our lives.Last week, I fighted with my classmate, after which, we hadnt talk with each other along time. But, we forgave each other last when we faced that we would graduate from our school,because of a smile, which was a greeting to her when we met in our school.She felt very warm.So, we became good friends again.So, I think that a smile is a good way in solving the problems among friends, we should often smile.(糊里糊涂)第一档（3分）If I give some people smile. I think I will make too many friends.If you dont know how to make friend with another people. I think you will learn smile. Smile will give the people to know that you are a good body. And you are cute when you know what time to smile is good. I think you can to make a good friend. Because good smile can take other many know you are very friendly. and than they can very like live with you. Oh,smile it is too maige. It is can change too many thing that it is badly.I hope you can good use“smile”,Its will hope you do a good friend and take too much friend make with.（一塌糊涂）六、考生应注意的问题及对策今年湖北省首次采用开放性作文，整体情况不是很好，离题现象严重，许多考生要么无话可说，要么条理混乱，要么言之无物，要么不知所云，要么套用八股文，所以平时要多训练考生开放的思维，首先一定要有自己的思想，其次才能更好的表达语言。语言表达不到位。第一、“中国式英语”严重，考试期间没时间打草稿，所想即所说即所写，想是照中文的方式想的，写出来的自然就是“中国式英语”； 第二、句子结构混乱，乱用动词形式，人称代词的主格宾格不分，谓语动词的主动被动不分，名词的单复数滥用等等。所以考生在初学英语时，一定要把握最基础的语言规则，句式，同时结合语境来说英语，切忌死做语法训练、死背孤立的单词，交流才是英语学习最有效的方法！句子类型单一，用词呆板。有不少考生通篇用简单句、陈述句、小短句，不会使用较复杂的句子，如强调句、倒装句、主从复合句和一些固定句型，因而文章显得单调乏味，档次不高。所以平时多积累，考场上才能信手拈来！不恰当使用套句。很多考生在答题时，不顾及答题要求，单纯罗列自己熟记的例句，句子虽精彩，但与主旨毫无关联，就显得画蛇添足，所