英语人教版八年级下册rcise.ppt

Unit5Whatwereyoudoingwhentherainstormcame Writing StepIBrainstorming Animportantevent thing aschooltrip thedebate辩论赛 disasters灾难 WenchuanEarthquake thefinalPEexam sdeath amathcompetition typeofthearticle 体裁 tense 时态 person theamount 数量 ofwords keypoints 每个人一生中都会经历一些难忘的事情或时刻 或快乐或悲伤 对我们影响巨大 每当回想时 种种细节仍历历在目 刻骨铭心 请描述其中一件让你印象深刻的事件 词数不少于80词 narration记叙文 一般过去时 过去进行时 第 人称 100 120词 5W1H 一 审 Whatwastheevent Whendidithappen Wheredidithappen Whatwereyouandyourfriendsdoingwhen happened Howdidyoufeelthen Whywasitimportant interesting Whydoyourememberthisevent 5W1H who What When Where How Why Why Sample AnimportanteventthatIrememberwellwasanEarthquake IthappenedinWenChuan Ithappenedat14 28onMay12th 2008 Whatwastheevent Whendidithappen Wheredidithappen Whatwereyouandyourfriendsdoingwhen happened Howdidfeelwhenyouheardthenews Whywasitimportant Whydoyourememberthisevent 5W1H who What When Where How Why Sample AnimportanteventthatIrememberwellwasanEarthquake IthappenedinWenChuan Ithappenedat14 28onMay12th 2008 Whentheearthquakehappened Iwassleepinginmydormwithtwoofmyroommates Lisawasreadingabook Nancywaseatingice cream Afterafewseconds webegantorunoutside WhileIwasrunning peoplearoundmewereshoutingandrunning Whatwastheevent Whendidithappen Wheredidithappen Whatwereyouandyourfriendsdoingwhen happened Howdidfeelwhenyouheardthenews Whywasitimportant Whydoyourememberthisevent 5W1H who What When Where How Why Sample AnimportanteventthatIrememberwellwasanEarthquake IthappenedinWenChuan Ithappenedat14 28onMay12th 2008 Whentheearthquakehappened Iwassleepinginmydormwiththreeofmyroommates Ivywasreadingabook Nancywaseatingice cream Afterafewseconds webegantorunoutside WhileIwasrunning peoplearoundmewereshoutingandrunning IrememberthiseventwellbecauseitwasthemostterriblethingIhaveexperiencedinmylife Makeitbetter Sample AnimportanteventthatIrememberwellwasanEarthquake IthappenedinWenChuan Ithappenedat14 28onMay12th 2008 Whentheearthquakehappened Iwassleepinginmydormwithtwoofmyroommates Lisawasreadingabook Nancywaseatingice cream Afterafewseconds webegantorunoutside WhileIwasrunning peoplearoundmewereshoutingandrunning IrememberthiseventwellbecauseitwasthemostterriblethingIhaveexperiencedinmylife while also Wewerescared wedidn tknowwhatwecoulddo Luckily wegottothegroundsafelyintime Tobeavolunteercanhelpothers Anditcanalsomakeusfeelgoodaboutourselves Volunteeringcan helpothers makeusfeelgoodaboutourselves volunteeringcanhelpothers itcanalsomakeusfeelgoodaboutourselves Ontheonehand notonly butalso ontheotherhand 同义句 Tip1 Useconjunctionstobuildabridgebetweensentencesandparts 使用连词 Theeventwasanearthquake IthappenedinWenchuan IthappenedonMay12th 2008 AnearthquakehappenedinWenchuanonMay12th 2008 AnimportanteventthatIrememberwellwasWenchuanEarthquakeat14 28onMay12th 2008 Whentheearthquakehappened Iwassleepinginmydormwiththreeofmyroommates Ivywasreadingabook whileNancywaseatingice cream Wewerescared wedidn tknowwhatwecoulddo Afterafewseconds webegantorunoutside WhileIwasrunning peoplearoundmewerealsoshoutingandrunning Luckily wegottothegroundsafelyintime IwillalwayskeepitinmindbecauseitwasthemostterriblethingIhaveexperiencedinmylife Weweresoscaredthatwedidn tknowwhattodo Weweretooscaredtoknowwhattodo A Irememberitwellbecauseitwasveryterribleforme B wellbecauseitwasthemostterriblethingIhaveexperiencedinmylife C IwillalwayskeepitinmindbecausenothingismoreterriblethanWenchuanEarthquake Tip2 Trytouseseniorpatterns 用高级句式 Theywerereallyhappyandexcited Theyjumpedupanddown 同义句 Theywere happy theyjumpedupanddowninexcitement Theyfeltverysad Theyjustsatandsaidnothingforalongtime Theywere sad theyjustsatdown foralongtime Theywere sad doanythingbutsitdownsilentlyforalongtime sothat sothat insilence withoutsayinganything tooto AnearthquakehappenedinWenchuanonMay12th 2008 Althoughmanyyearspassedby IstillrememberwhatIwasdoingatthattime Whentheearthquakehappened AAnearthquakehappenedinWenchuanonMay12th 2008 Whentheearthquakehappened Tip3 Usesentencestobuildabridgebetweensentencesandparts 使用承上启下的句子 Forme theimportanteventwasWenchuanEarthquake WenchuanEarthquakehasspecialmeaningtome AnimportanteventthatIrememberwell thatIwillneverforgetwasWenchuanEarthquake AnimportanteventthatIrememberwellwasWenchuanEarthquakeat14 28onMay12th 2008 Whentheearthquakehappened Iwassleepinginmydormwiththreeofmyroommates IvywasreadingabookwhileNancywaseatingice cream Soafterthat webegantorunoutside WhileIwasrunning peoplearoundmewereshoutingandscreaminginfear Luckily wegottothegroundsafelyintime IwillalwayskeepitinmindbecauseitwasthemostterriblethingIhaveexperiencedinmylife Weoftenremembersomeimportanteventsinourlife Althoughmanyyearspassedby IstillrememberwhatIwasdoingatthattime Afteralltheseyears everytimeIthinkofit Iseemtostillfeelthefear Tip1 Useconjunctionstobuildabridgebetweensentencesandparts 使用连词 Check 查 HandwritingPunctuation 标点 Capitalization 大小写 SpellingGrammar Check Handwriting Punctuation 标点 Capitalization 大小写 Spelling Grammar verygoodprettygoodbadterrible A 第四档 优 12 15分 第三档 良 8 11分 第二档 中 4 7分 第一档 差 0 3分 12 Summary Howtowriteacompositionstepbystep 1 审2 列3 美4 写 Summary Homework 1 Trytomakeyoureventmorewonderful 2 Finishwritinginyourcompositionbookcarefully ThisisadayIwillneverforget The hasspecialmeaningtome us RobertAllen KateSmith MarthinLutherKingwaskilledonApril 4th 1968 TheWorldTradeCenterwastakendownbyterroristsonSept 11th 2001 Review IgottheletterofadmissionfromSWUniversityinJuly 2004 Asolareclipse 日全食 happenedonAug 1st 2008 SteveJobspassedawayonOct 5th 2011 Alunareclipse 月全食 happenedonOct 8th 2014 WenchuanEarthquakehappenedonMay12th 2008 MyBigDay Sample AnimportanteventthatIrememberwellwasWenchuanEarthquakeat14 28onMay12th 2008 Althoughmanyyearspassedby IstillrememberwhatIwasdoingatthattime Whentheearthquakehappened Iwassleepinginmydormwiththreeofmyroommates IvywasreadingabookwhileNancywaseatingice cream Soafterthat webegantorunoutside WhileIwasrunning peoplearoundmewereshoutingandscreaminginfear Luckily wegottothegroundsafelyintime Afteralltheseyears everytimeIthinkofit Iseemtostillfeelthefear AsfarasIamconcerned IwillalwayskeepitinmindbecauseitwasthemostterriblethingIhaveexperiencedinmylife Sample AnimportanteventthatIrememberwellwasanEarthquake IthappenedinWenChuan Ithappenedat14 28onMay12th 2008 Whentheearthquakehappened Iwassleepinginmydormwiththreeofmyroommates Ivywasreadingabook Nancywaseatingice cream Soafterthat webegantorunoutside WhileIwasrunning peoplearoundmewereshoutingandrunning wegottothegroundsafelyintime IrememberthiseventwellbecauseitwasthemostterriblethingIhaveexperiencedinmylife while Theyweresohappythattheyjumpedupanddowninexcitement 2 Theyweretoosadtodoanythingbutsitdownsilentlyforalongtime 3 Volunteeringcannotonlyhelpothersbutalsomakeusfeelgoodaboutourselves 4 Ontheonehand volunteering Ontheotherhand 5 AnimportanteventthatIrememberwell thatIwillneverforgetwasWenchuanEarthquake 6 rememberitwellbecauseitwasthemostterriblethingIhaveexperiencedinmylife 7 AsfarasIamconcerned IwillalwayskeepitinmindbecausenothingismoreterriblethanWenchuanEarthquake AnimportanteventthatIrememberwellwasanEarthquake IthappenedinWenChuan Ithappenedat14 28onMay12th 2008 Whentheearthquakehappened Iwassleepinginmydormwiththreeofmyroommates IvywasreadingabookwhileNancywaseatingice cream Wewerescared wedidn tknowwhatwecoulddo Afterafewseconds webegantorunoutside peoplearo