高三英语二轮复习-第1部分-专题5-短文改错-训练4-短文改错(Ⅳ)

1 训练训练 4 4 短文改错短文改错 A A 2016 2016 太原二模 My flat is on the fifth floor of a high rise building where is opposite a busy road During the day we can hear the traffic passed outside which can be quite disturbing Fortunately there was a park just outside our building so we have a pleasant view of grass and trees from our living room with two window I often walk away through the park to get to the bus stop on the other s side I go to work by bus every day Wait for the bus takes me some time The town centre is quite near to my flat so it s convenience for both shopping and entertainment It s really a good place to live Warmly welcome to your neighbourhood 答案 My flat is on the fifth floor of a high rise building is where which that opposite a busy road During the day we can hear the traffic outside passed passing which can be quite disturbing Fortunately there a park just outside our was is building so we have a pleasant view of grass and trees from our living room with two I often walk through the park to get to the bus stop on window windows away the side I go to work by bus every day for the bus takes me other s other Wait Waiting some time The own centre is quite near to my flat so it s for both convenience convenient shopping and entertainment It s really a good place to live Warmly in welcome to neighbourhood your our my B B 2016 2016 石家庄质检 I ve learnt from the notice that you re looking for an English editor for us school paper I m written this letter to apply for the position I m Li Hua Senior Three student in our school In my view I met your requirements for one thing I m willing to devote some of my spare time to 2 serve others for another I m good at both English or Fine Arts I m either skilled in using computers I would be glad if you could offer to me an opportunity for an interview I m looking forward to your kindly reply at your earliest convenient 答案 I ve learnt from the notice that you re looking for an English editor for school paper I m this letter to apply for the position us our written writing I m Li Hua Senior Three student in our school In my view I your a met meet requirements for one thing I m willing to devote some of my spare time to others for another I m good at both English Fine Arts I m serve serving or and skilled in using computers I would be glad if you could offer me an either also to opportunity for an interview I m looking forward to your reply at your earliest kindly kind convenient convenience 导学号 90892097 C C 2016 2016 湖北七市联考 Dear Jane How s everything going I m glad to have met you and become friend with you I miss you very well and thus I m writing to tell you anything about my new life at college My new school is so beautiful as a huge garden There are green grass and colorful flowers everywhere My teachers are all kind and I believe with time go by I ll make a great progress My classmates are very friendly and I made many new friends here I feel that my new life is very excited but I also realize that it is full of challenges I ve decided to work hard so that I ll have a brightly future Of course I ll also do more exercise to keep fit I m looking forward to your reply Yours sincerely Tom 答案 Dear Jane 3 How s everything going I m glad to have met you and become with friend friends you I miss you very and thus I m writing to tell you about my well much anything something new life at college My new school is beautiful as a huge garden There green grass and so as are is colorful flowers everywhere My teachers are all kind and I believe with time by I ll make great progress My classmates are very friendly and I go going a made many new friends here I feel that my new life is very but have excited exciting also realize that it is full of challenges I ve decided to work hard so that I ll have a future Of course I ll also do more exercise to keep fit brightly bright I m looking forward to your reply Yours sincerely Tom D D 2016 2016 成都二模 Last Friday I was standing near a subway exit tried to call a taxi But no luck Then I thought of the taxi booking app my friend has recommended and I booked a taxi through my cellphone Soon it came and I stepped in feeling pretty proudly of my high tech way and satisfied with the convenience brought by the app So later I was upset to find that the driver was busy looking his cellphone to get the next order It was just then when I began to worry about my safety What s bad the driver s informations might be unreliable How can we passengers legal rights be protecting if something bad happens So be careful when you use the taxi booking app the next time 答案 Last Friday I was standing near a subway exit to call a taxi But tried trying no luck Then I thought of the taxi booking app my friend recommended and I has had booked a taxi through my cellphone Soon it came and I stepped in feeling pretty of my high tech way and satisfied with the convenience brought proudly proud 4 by the app later I was upset to find that the driver was busy looking So But Yet his cellphone to get the next order It was just then I began to worry at when that about my safety What s the driver s might be bad worse informations information unreliable How can we passengers legal rights be if something bad protecting protected happens So be careful when you use the taxi booking app next time the E E 2016 2016 柳州模拟 How can we help children in poor areas complete his basic education Since their lack of education mainly result from low family income to collect money for them is of greatly importance With enough money they will finish their education very easily than before Besides good teachers are also needed improve the teaching in such areas They can teach there but help train the local teachers What s more we can organize various event to increase these children s interest at learning We can also guide them to realize the importance of education to their future After of all their willingness to learn is the key to continue their school education 答案 How can we help children in poor areas complete basic education his their Since their lack of education mainly from low family income to collect result results money for them is of importance With enough money they will finish greatly great their education easily than before Besides good teachers are also needed very more improve the teaching in such areas They can teach there help train to but and or the local teachers What s more we can organize various to increase these event events children s interest learning We can also guide them to realize at in the importance of education to their future After all their willingness to of learn is the key to their school education continue continuing 5 F F 2016 2016 昆明质检 The mobile phone is important for the most of us now However there were some people out there who use their mobile phones impolitely Some people talk loudly in the phone in public places like restaurants buses and lifts Is it necessary for them do so Besides some people choose loud and annoyed music as their ringtones It sounds very noisy but unpleasant especially in the cinema Others make a phone call while you are in conversation with him which I think is real rude I d like to remind the