读写任务之议论文写作框架

读写任务之议论文写作框架读写任务之议论文写作框架 任务型写作是 有法可依 的 只要了解和掌握其写作框架 就能保证不离题 从而 获得比较高的分数 下面就议论文写作模式或框架谈谈具体的操作方法 一 确定标题一 确定标题 不管好坏 一定要有标题 标题是文章的点睛之处 根据所给材料和所规定的论题或 要点确立自己论述的内容或观点后进行命题 命题要体现整篇文章议论的中心 如 Opinions towards fast food Is Failure a Bad Thing Learn From Mistakes 等 二 进行概括二 进行概括 概括文章要点 要语言要精炼 概括要全面 行文连贯 表达准确 议论文则用自己 的话表达论点 论据和结论 概括时常用的句式有 1 This article deals with discusses analyzes strongly emphasizes 2 This article not only describes but also suggests 3 This article compares and summarizes key findings 4 This article gives an account of provides an analysis of provides a method of 5 This article reports the last information on 6 The problem of sth is discussed 7 This article shows tells us that 8 The author finds it necessary to 9 The author holds the idea that giving it an example of sb who 观点 例证 10 The author strongly emphasizes the benefits of getting up early such as 观点 什么的 什么 例证 三 自然过渡三 自然过渡 写完概括后 用句恰当的过渡语引出自己的观点 反对或赞成 过渡语起承上启下的 作用 使文章显得自然 连贯 常用的过渡句式有 1 I do agree with the author 2 In some way I agree with but 3 This point sounds right but 4 However I think 5 I definitely believe 6 In my opinion 7 Personally I feel that 8 As far as I m concerned 9 I can t agree more with the father Such cases are often seen in our life 10 Attitudes towards are various 四 列举例证四 列举例证 提出自己的观点后就要用具体的事例来论证自己的观点 常用的句式有 1 First Second Last 2 On the one hand on the other hand 3 For one thing and for another 4 Furthermore Besides In addition 5 Some think while others may 五 总结点题五 总结点题 总结句约 30 词 进一步总结作者的观点 提出具体做法或号召 升华文章的主题 可以用套语配名言来点题 并注意文章前后呼应 常用的句式有 1 In conclusion 2 In short 3 In a word 4 In general 5 All in all 6 All these things considered 7 To sum up 8 Therefore 实例分析实例分析 阅读下面短文 然后按照要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文 The generation gap between students and their teachers is becoming more significant with only 3 3 per cent out of a survey group of 1 000 students from 30 key middle schools in the city saying they would be willing to tell their teachers of their inner thoughts In today s educational environment teachers are positioned to be the authority figure for learning instead of also becoming a good friend in the lives of students As only students with good marks in exams are considered the apples in the eyes of the teachers most students think their teachers to be partial 偏心 I feel sad to hear such remarks said Yu Yi a well known special class teacher She recalled that in the past teachers and students would play basketball together or comment on novels while sitting on the grass during a break But today study and good marks are the only topics of conversation between students and teachers Schools are not only the place where knowledge is imparted 传授 but also where students are taught how to be an upright person Yu said The success of a person is not merely determined by intelligence but also by emotional state Yang Xiong director of the Juvenile Research Institute said the educational system which focuses on examinations should be held to be substantially responsible 写作内容 1 以约 30 个词概括学生不愿告诉老师内心想法的原因 2 然后以约 120 个词就 现代师生关系 这个主题发表你的看法 并包括如下要点 1 你是否愿意告诉老师你内心的想法 为什么 2 你希望你与你的老师之间的关系是怎样的 如何才能建立这种关系 写作要求 1 可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点 也可以参照阅读材料的内容 但不得 直接引用原文中的句子 2 标题自定 3 文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称 评分标准 概括准确 语言规范 内容合适 篇章连贯 套用写作模板进行写作 1 拟出标题 Love and Concern Make Ideal Relationship 2 进行概括 Students are becoming unwilling to confess to their teachers because they are not equal in position and teachers lay too much emphasis on the academic performances of the students 3 自然过渡 回答 你是否愿意告诉老师你内心的想法 给出观点 愿意或不愿意 直截了当 一语概之 如 我愿意告诉老师我的内心想法 While some students might have doubts I am willing to share my inner thoughts with my teachers 4 列举例证 回答 为什么 给出一两个理由 They show love and concern for their students and they are also good listeners I always find it easy to seek support and advice from them from which I benefit and learn a lot 5 回答 你希望你与你的老师之间的关系是怎样的 可以是 重要的 和谐的 朋友式的 等等 In this case an ideal relationship between teachers and students is very important In my opinion this relationship should be one filled with love care and understanding in which teachers and students show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely 6 回答 如何才能建立这种关系 即师生双方应该如何做 To build a relationship of this kind teachers should become friends of students while students ought to place more trust in their teachers and give voice to their feelings frankly 7 总结 如可说 只有这样 我们才能拥有和谐的师生关系 Only in this way can we enjoy a warm relationship between teachers and students 全文整理如下 Love and Concern Make Ideal Relationship Students are becoming unwilling to confess to their teachers because they are not equal in position and teachers lay too much emphasis on the academic performances of the students While some students might have doubts I am willing to share my inner thoughts with my teachers They show love and concern for their students and are good listeners I always find it easy to seek support and advice from them from which I benefit and learn a lot In this case an ideal relationship between teachers and students is very important In my opinion this relationship should be one filled with love care and understanding in which teachers and students show respect for each other and exchange i