重庆渝中区2016高考英语二轮训练及答案：短文改错（1）

高考资源网 您身边的高考专家 版权所有 高考资源网 1 重庆渝中区 2016 高考英语二轮训练及答案 短文改错 1 2016 年高考英语专项 改错题 1 题型解读 短文改错题检测考生发现 判断 纠正文章错误的能力 进而考 察学生的词法 句法及行文逻辑等方面的水平 考察学生在语篇中综合运用英语 的能力 2 命题特点 1 错误类型相对稳定 错词 多词 缺词三种类型 2 考点覆 盖面广 分布合理 3 难度保持平稳 3 考查类型 错词 多词 缺词 4 考点分布 近三年高考短文改错考点分布表 5 应试技巧 通读全文 掌握大意 分句阅读 整句找错 反复通读 复查验 证 6 解题注意要点 1 核对错项时 若的确有一时难以改出的地方 可以参考所改动项是否基本符合 1 1 8 的比例 即多一词 1 个 缺词 1 个 错词 8 个 2 核对改正的语法项目是否有重复 因为短文改错往往覆盖面广 一般不会出现 重复考查某个语法点的现象 3 核对答题符号是否规范 位置是否准确 看看有无遗漏符号 忽略字母大小写 和拼写等问题 2012 模拟短文改错 A If someone asks you how you can make you always1 冠词名词代词 形容词 或副词 介词连词 动词及 时态 非谓语 动词 主谓 一致 2015 年全国卷 111211300 2015 年全国卷 112210210 2014 年全国卷 110412100 2014 年全国卷 111220201 2013 年全国卷 111212110 2013 年全国卷 121120210 考查点 试卷 高考资源网 您身边的高考专家 版权所有 高考资源网 2 happy you will perhaps find rather difficult to give him2 a proper answer Did you remember the old saying No3 human being can really happy who is not giving or trying4 to give happiness to others If you will always think of5 taking more from others and give them less you won t be6 able to have happiness in your life even you are very rich 7 Here s an article for you If each of you follow it there8 will be all end of many unhappy days of yours So you should9 learn to give up your own interests when necessarily to do so 10 参考答案及解析 1 将 always 前的 you 改为 yourself 考查反身代词的用法 此处需掌握短语 make oneself happy 使自己高兴 2 find 后加 it 考查 it 作形式宾语 此处 it 是形式宾语 真正的宾语是后面的不定式短语 3 Did Do 考查动词时态 根据文意应用一般现在时 4 really 前加 be 考查谓语动词 此处形容词 happy 前缺谓语动词 be 5 删除 will 考查动词时态 在条件状语从句中用一般现在时代替一般将来时 6 give giving 考查动名词 此处 and 前后为并列关系 故改为动名词 7 even 后加 if though 或者 even though although 考查状语从句的连接词 根据文意 应改为 even if 或 even though 8 follow follows 考查主谓一致 此句的主语是 each 故用单数形式 9 正确 经分析此句正确 10 necessarily necessary 考查 be necessary to do 的结构 2012 模拟短文改错 C Good health is the most valuable possession a person can have 1 so one can not regard good health as certain to happen It s 2 important to remember that body needs proper care in order 3 to be healthy There are three things that a person can do stay 4 in good shape Firstly eat the right foods is good for health 5 高考资源网 您身边的高考专家 版权所有 高考资源网 3 Vegetables and fruits are specially important Enough sleep6 is also important Finally get plenty of exercises Sports are 7 not only good for one s body but it can also help build 8 friendship with others people If everyone were to do the three 9 the world would be a happier and healthy place 10 参考答案及解析 1 正确 经分析正确 2 so but 考查句间逻辑 根据谓文意此处为转折意义故改为 but 3 body 前加 a the our 考查名词的用法 可数名词前需加冠词或修饰语 4 do 后加 to 考查不定式的用法 两个动词连用第二个用不定式的形式 5 eat eating 考查动名词短语作主语 6 specially especially 考查副词词义辨析 此处 especially 尤其 特别地 specially 专门地 特意地 7 exercises exercise 考查名词词义 此处 exercise 意为 锻炼 故用单数形式 8 it they 考查代词指代一致 根据文意此处 they 指 sports 9 却掉 people 或 others other 考查代词的用法 其他人可用 other people 或 others 10 heathy heathier 考查形容词的比较级 此处 and 前后并列关系 故改为 heathier 2012 模拟短文改错 B Angela works at a university as adviser Students can 1 come and see her for many problems if they need help 2 or advices Most of them are worried about their studies 3 and exams Some of them have problems connect with 4 renting flats though the biggest problem was loneliness 5 Universities are exciting places but some students find difficult 6 to make friends They miss their families but feel lost in the 7 new environment They re upset Angela s job is to listen to and 8 try to understand whether they are feeling And of course she also 9 gives practical advice when she is needed 10 高考资源网 您身边的高考专家 版权所有 高考资源网 4 参考答案及解析 1 as 后加 an 考查冠词的用法 此处 adviser 是可数名词 主语为单数故其前加 an 2 see 改为 ask 考查语意的改错 根据语意应为 问问题 3 advices 改为 advice 考查名词的单复数 此处 advice 是不可数名词 故不加 s 4 problems 后加 which 考查定语从句的关系词 5 was 改为 is 考查动词时态 根据文意此处应为一般现在时 6 find 后加 it 考查形式宾语 it 的用法 动词 find 后应加形式宾语 it 后面的不定式是真正 的宾语 7 but 改为 and 考查上下文的逻辑关系 根据文意前后为递进关系而不是转折关系 8 去掉 to 考查动词短语的用法 此处没有被听的对象 故去掉 to 9 whether 改为 what 考查宾语从句的连接词 此处 what 作 feel 的宾语 10 she 改为 it 考查代词的用法 此处改为 when it is needed when needed 2012 模拟短文改错 C It is Sunday Li Ming is busy with working on his lessons1 in the afternoon at home During a break he relaxes in the2 Window expecting enjoy the sunshine Yet the heavy3 traffic seems to remind him of something Like a Senior 3 4 student facing with the college entrance exams he feels time is 5 more or less limited for him He thinks he must careful plan 6 anything in order to solve the remaining problems with7 his lessons but prepare for the coming exams Meanwhile 8 he has to take good care of him Li Ming is determined9 to try his best so that he would go to a good university 10 参考答案及解析 1 去掉 with 或 with 改为 in 考查固定短语的用法 此处应为 be busy doing 或 be busy in doing 2 第二个 in 改为 by 考查介词的含义 此处 by the window 意为 在窗户旁边 高考资源网 您身边的高考专家 版权所有 高考资源网 5 3 enjoy 前加 to 考查动词的用法 此处应为 expect to do sth 4 Like 改为 As 考查介词的含义 此处 as a student 意为 作为一名学生 5 faced 改为 facing 或去掉 with 考查 face 作动词的用法 动词 face 的用法有两种 be faced with 或 face 宾语 6 careful 改为 carefully 考查副词的用法 修饰动词用副词 7 anything 改为 everything 考查不定代词的用法 根据文意应为计划好一切事情 8 but 改为 and 考查句间的逻辑关系 此处为递进关系而不是转折关系 9 him 改为 himself 考查反身代词的用法 此处意为 他不得不照顾好他自己 10 would 改为 will 考查动词时态 此处 will 表意愿 2012 模拟短文改错 D Animals are close friend of human beings Their existence 1 especially that the existence of rare animals makes the whole 2 world lively and colorful Unlucky we have heard such news that 3 rare animals even keeping in the zoo can t escape being hurt 4 and killed You may wonder how this can happen The reason 5 is that some people lacked understanding about these animals 6 and care little about them However we should make information about rare animals 7 known to the public L