2012届高考英语 考前冲刺精品复习讲义写作（七） 北师大版

用心 爱心 专心 1 20122012 届高考英语考前冲刺精品复习讲义 北师大版 写作 七 届高考英语考前冲刺精品复习讲义 北师大版 写作 七 典例 请根据以下要点 适当发挥 写一篇不少于 120 词的英语说明文 标题 Shopping on the Internet 网上购物 要点 1 网上购物已很普遍 2 网上购物的好处 3 网上购物的缺点 写作策略 1 仔细审题 1 体裁 提纲式作文 2 时态 一般现在时 3 人称 第三人称 2 确定结构 1 概括网上购物现状 普遍 2 文章主体 网上购物的好处与缺点 3 筛选词汇 shopping advantages on the Internet with the development of 等 4 句型搜索 All they need to do is The first is that 等 5 组句成篇 常用 The first the second 等 范文赏析 ShoppingShopping onon thethe InternetInternet With With thethe developmentdevelopment ofof the Internet and the popularization of computers shopping on the Internet hashas becomebecome moremore andand moremore commoncommon in our daily life Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages ofof whichwhich the most important is perhaps its convenience PeoplePeople don tdon t have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like This is especially desirable to the old the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person AllAll theythey needneed to do is to sit in front of the computer and click the mouse TheThe goodsgoods theythey orderorder will be delivered to them immediately However However shoppingshopping onon thethe InternetInternet also has its disadvantages TheThe firstfirst disadvantagedisadvantage is that the consumers cannot see the goods or try them on in person Sometimes the real goods may not be the same as what have been seen on 用心 爱心 专心 2 the computer TheThe secondsecond disadvantagedisadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you Once cheated you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain 名师点评 开篇引出话题 比较级的叠用表明网上购物的发展趋势 非限制性定语从句 增强句与句之间的连贯性 开始进行具体 细节性地描述 强调进一步网上购物方便的特点 从内容上转折 过渡到论述网上购物的缺点 分别论述网购的缺点 总体评价 文章结构清晰 层次分明 内容丰富真实 最后 若再加总结性语言 则文章 更加完美 写作指导 Elegance 优雅 原文 So so 普通 1 Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages of which the most important is perhaps its convenience Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages and one of them is perhaps its convenience 2 This is especially desirable to the old the sick and the busy people who can t go to the shops in person This is liked by old people sick people and busy people because they can t go to shops by themselves 3 All they need to do is to sit in front of the computer and click the mouse They only need to sit in front of the computer and click the mouse 用心 爱心 专心 3 4 However shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages But shopping on the Internet has its disadvantages too 5 Once cheated you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain If you are cheated you will find that you can t go to anywhere to complain 临摹翻译 1 范文佳句 WithWith thethe developmentdevelopment ofof the Internet and the popularization of computers shopping on the Internet has become more and more common in our daily life 临摹翻译 随着社会的发展 网络在我们的生活中起着越来越重要的作用 With the development of society the Internet plays a more and more important role in our life 2 范文佳句 Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages ofof whichwhich thethe mostmost importantimportant isis perhapsperhaps itsits convenience convenience 临摹翻译 网上买书有很多优点 其中之一是有很多种类的书供你挑选 Buying books on the Internet has many advantages one of which is that there are a large number of books for you to choose from 3 范文佳句 AllAll theythey needneed toto dodo isis toto sitsit in front of the computer and click the mouse 临摹翻译 你所有能做的就是向当地的工商部门投诉这件事 All that you can do is to complain to the business management department about i t 4 范文佳句 However shoppingshopping onon thethe InternetInternet also has its disadvantages 临摹翻译 但是 网上交友也有一些不足 However making friends online also has some disadvantages 5 范文佳句 The second disadvantage isis thatthat somesome shopsshops onon thethe InternetInternet areare notnot registered registered 临摹翻译 问题是如果我们网上购物时被骗该怎么办 The problem is what we shou