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图表作文 这种作文形式是在给出标题的同时 给出图表 并附以提纲提示 图表作文一般要求考生对图表中相关数据进行描述和评论 并得出合乎逻辑的结论 这种写作形式是一种数据 形象信息转化为文字信息的过程 写作时 考生可采用先描述后议论或夹叙夹议的方法 叙述一般在为议论大基础 所以 除了直接引用表中有关典型数据外 有必要做些简单计算 切记毫无目的地引用表中过多或全部的数据 Directions Forthispart youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionofnolessthan100wordsonChangesinPeople sDiet Studythefollowingtablecarefullyandyourcompositionmustbebasedontheinformationgiveninthetable Writethreeparagraphsto 1 statethechangesinpeople sdietinthepastfiveyears 2 givepossiblereasonsforthechanges 3 drawyourownconclusions 4 Youshouldquoteasfewfiguresaspossible ChangesinPeople sDiet Inthepastfiveyears somechangeshavetakenplaceinpeople sdiet TheproportionofgrainwhichisthemainfoodforChinesepeoplehasdecreasedby4 Onthecontrary theproportionofmilkandmeatinpeople sdiethasincreased Thesechangesinpeople sdietshowsomechangesinpeople slivingstandardandlifestyle SinceChinabeganhereconomicreformin1978 variouskindsoffoodhaveappearedinthemarket Milkandmeat whichwereseldomseenonpeople sdinnertablebefore havenowbecomepopularfoodinmanyChinesefamilies AsthelivingstandardoftheChinesepeopleisrising welookforwardtoafurtherchangeinpeople sdiet Inthefuture theproportionofmilkandmeatislikelytogoonincreasing soisthepercentageoffruitandvegetables 某学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查 结果如下 根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动 并针对图表2中任何一个数据所反映的情况写出你的一个看法 ChartIshowsthedailyaverageamountoftimethestudentsoftheschoolspendondifferentafter classactivities Thestudentsputthemosttime 93minutes intotheirhomework andnextinlineiswatchingTV whichtakesup46minutes Theyputinaboutthesameamountoftimelisteningtomusicandworkingonthecomputer 34minutesand30minuteseach While25minutesisspentonsports only12minutesgoesintohousework AsisshowninChart2 only10 ofthetimeistakenupwithsportsactivities Ithinktheschoolshouldencouragethestudentstodomoreexerciseafterclass Thisway theymaybehealthierandmoreenergetic 2002年全国高考上海英语试卷GuidedWritingWriteanEnglishcompositioninover120wordsbasedonthepictureonthepictureandtheinstructionsgivenbelow 简要描述图片内容 结合生活实际 就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想 Inthepicture wecanseethatthegirl sparentsandhergrandmotherarehelpingthegirl whichmakesitimpossibleforthegirltoridebicycleonherself Whatismoreridiculous hermothereventakessomemedicine Infact thisisnotapicturejustforfun Ittellsusthatparentsshouldn thelptheirchildrentoomuch Theyshouldlettheirchildrenbemoreindependent Manyparentssharetheopinionthattheymustgeteverythingreadyfortheirchildrensothattheirchildrencouldputmoreemphasisontheirstudy Theyallfailedtoconsiderthatwithhelpofthiskind childrenwon tbeabletolivetheirownlifewithouttheirparentsinthefuture Nowadays Itisoftenreportedthatacertaincollegestudentdon tknowhowtowashhersocks Howcanshecompetewithothersaftergraduation Loveandattentionisneededinthegrowthofachild butitshouldneverbetoomuchoryou llspoilthechildandhewillaccomplishnothinginhislife 考生作文评析 本文内容较充实 详略得当 能根据写作要求 简要描述了图片内容 并能结合生活中的实例 谈出自己的感想 具有较好的语言表达能力 虽然有些语法错误 但全文流畅 结构合理 句型较多样 词汇较丰富 ThegraphshowstheriseandfallinthenumberofcaraccidentsinWaltonCityin1990 FromJanuarytoMarchitincreasedby68 fromMarchtoJuneitdroppedbyabouthalfthepreviousrate andfromJunetoAugusttherewasasteepriseof66 5 Afterthat however therewasasteadydecrease andthismakesusoptimisticthatcaraccidentsaredeclininginWaltonCity Thefiguresshownaboveindicateagreatprogressinthehealthconditionsofdevelopingcountries Theyarealsotheevidenceofbothrisinglivingstandardandlifespan Ifthistrendcontinues developingcountrieswillsoonapproachthedevelopedcountriesintermsofhealthcare Chinesefarmershaveenjoyedasteadyincreaseinpersonalincomessince1978 Accordingtothegraph theaverageearningsoftheChinesefarmersin1978wereverylow onlyaboutRMB150 However in1982 theiraverageincomealmostdoubledtoreachRMB280 Sincethentheiryearlyincomesteadilyincreased andin1998 itwasontheaverageRMB1200 increasingby800 comparedwiththelevelof1978 参考结构 Somepeoplethinkthat观点 Theyclaimthat理由 What smore 理由 But观点 asotherpeoplemaybelieve Although条件限制 still理由 However eachofthemhasitsowndisadvantages 观点 缺点 while观点 缺点 Incaseofmyself Ipreferto我的观点 because理由 参考结构 N
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