江苏省2012届高考英语二轮 专题冲刺精选书面表达（五）

用心 爱心 专心 1 江苏省江苏省 20122012 届高考英语二轮专题冲刺精选书面表达 五 届高考英语二轮专题冲刺精选书面表达 五 1 书面表达 随着高考的临近 部分住校生要求搬出学生宿舍 在学校附近租房子住 请你根据下表 提供的内容 写一篇英语短文 阐述学生和家长的观点 并表达自己的看法 现象 观点 高三部分住校生搬离学生宿舍 在学校附近租房住 多数学生 1 宿舍吵闹 影响学习和休息 2 熄灯制度限制了学习时间 许多家长 1 提供好的学习环境 2 方便照顾饮食起居 你的看法 注意 1 陈述所有要点 可适当发挥 不要简单翻译 2 词数 100 左右 3 开头已给出 但不计入总词数 参考词汇 熄灯制度 blackout rule With the College Entrance Examinations approaching day by day some senior three students are moving out from their dorms and living in rented apartments near their schools 用心 爱心 专心 2 2 阅读填空 The Great Wall of China is called the Ten thousand li Great Wall in Chinese 1 It winds its way from west to east across deserts over mountains through valleys till at last it reaches the sea It is one of the wonders of the world 2 The first part of it was built during the Spring and Autumn Period During the Warring States Period more walls were put up to defend the borders of the different kingdoms Thus the Great Wall came into being The Great Wall is wide enough at the top for five horses or ten men to walk side by side 3 Fires were lit on the towers as a warning when the enemy came It was very difficult to build such a wall in the ancient days without any modern machines All the work was done by hand Thousands of men died and were buried under the wall they built 4 Today the Great Wall has become a place of interest not only to the Chinese but to people from all over the world 5 Many of them have come to know the famous Chinese saying He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man A The Great Wall was made not only of stone and earth but of the blood of millions of men B Some of them come to China only because they are interested in the Great Wall C The Great Wall has a history of over twenty centuries D Around the world there are a lot of places of interest E It was during the Qing Dynasty that the parts were joined into one long wall F In fact it s more than 6 000 kilometers long G Along the wall are watchtowers where soldiers used to keep watch 1 2 3 4 5 3 短文改错 A terrible storm took place in a summer night The wind was so strong and many trees brought down It was already eleven o clock Li Ming he had gone to night school was not still back and his parents were very anxious Half an hour later the wind stopped and it was still raining Li Ming s parents were about to looking for him while he returned Li Ming explained the wind has pushed over many big trees as well as telephone poles blocked the roads and that the bridge had been washed away by the floods so he had to find another way back 用心 爱心 专心 3 4 阅读填空 Do you want to know more about Thanksgiving around the world 1 The August Moon Festival in China Tet Trung Thu in Vietnam Succoth in Jew Kwanzaa in Africa Pongal in India and Chusok in Korea are such festivals 2 The only difference in the festivals is date rituals and customs but the reason behind it remains the same to thank God for a huge fruitful harvest InIn ChinaChina 3 Chinese believe that the moon is the roundest and brightest on this day Unlike the famous pumpkin pie the Chinese delicacies consist of mooncakes Friends and relatives send their regards to each other by gifting mooncakes InIn RomeRome The Roman harvest festival known as Cerelia was celebrated in the honor of the deity Ceres It comes on October 4th and it was a custom to first produced fruits grains and animals to the Goddess Music parades and sports are included in the ceremony InIn BrazilBrazil The Brazilian thanksgiving is quite contemporary compared to American thanksgiving 4 InIn KoreaKorea The celebration falls on 15th of August which is known as Chu Sok meaning fall evening 5 Koreans make a dish called Songpyon unique for that occasion consisting of rice beans seeds and chestnuts Before having the food the family gathers beneath the moonlight in honor of their ancestors and forefathers A It begins on 14th night and continues for three days B In southern Brazil it is a sort of expressing thanks to harvest C It is also known as Women Festival D Thanksgiving in the west is similar to the festivals of many other countries E The list is endless F Lovers speak out their heart to each other below the bright moonlight G The Chinese August Moon Festival falls on the 15th day of 8th lunar month of their calendar 1 2 3 4 5 5 短文改错 用心 爱心 专心 4 Now I d like to tell you something took place in my school yesterday In the afternoon we are all held together for our 18 years old birthday At the first we promised that like grown ups we should be responsible for our society Then we expressed thank to our parents who experienced hardships to bring us up and our teachers who educated us heart or soul And our teachers also gave to us cards expressing our good congratulations and wishes Finally we put on wonderfully performances 答案答案 1 书面表达 参考范文 With the College Entrance Examinations approaching day by day some senior three students are moving out from their dorms and living in rented apartments near their schools Most students think although school dorms bring them fun and friendship the blackout rule to guarantee students sleeping hours doesn t leave them enough time to finish their homework Worse still the noise in the dorms not only influences their studies but also ruins their rest To many parents they d like to provide a better environment for their children so that they can study more efficiently Besides they can take care of their children s daily meals and laundry so their children can eat better and have a comfortable life In my opinion whether a student should rent a house outside his school depends on his need I am in favor of renting a house for the sake of study After all time is pressing But I strongly recommend that parents should care much about their children while they are outside school 2 阅读填空 1 F 2 C 3 G 4 A 5 B 3 短文改错 A terrible storm took place a summer night The wind was so strong in on and that many trees brought down It was already eleven o clock Li Ming had were he who gone to night school was not back and his parents were very anxious Half still yet an hour later the wind stopped it was still raining Li Ming s parents and but were about to for him he returned Li Ming explained the wind looking look while when has had pushed over many big trees as well as telephone poles the roads a