甘肃省2012届高三英语二轮专题集训 短文改错+书面表达（33）

用心 爱心 专心1 甘肃省甘肃省 20122012 届高三英语二轮专题集训 短文改错届高三英语二轮专题集训 短文改错 书面表达 书面表达 3333 短文改错短文改错 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误 对标有题号的每一行做出判断 如无错误 在该行 右 边横线上画一个 如有错误 每行只有一个错误 则按下列情况改正 此行多一个词 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 在该行右边横线上写出该词 并也用斜线划 掉 此行缺一个词 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词 此行错一个词 在错的词下划一横线 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 注意 原行没有错的不要改 Here is my idea about how a friend is like Firstly 1 a friend is someone you can share your secrets If you 2 tell him a secret never will he talks about it with anybody3 else Besides a friend is always good listener when you 4 need one After hear your sad stories he will say some5 words that is nice and warm Still your happiness makes 6 him happily too What s more a good friend is willing to7 offer the help to which you need or can at least give you 8 some advices In a word friends are those you like and9 trust and you will enjoy every minute that you spent with10 them 用心 爱心 专心2 书面表达书面表达 假如你叫李华 今年六月份将从北京新华中学高三毕业 打算到美国哥伦比亚大学留 学 现在请你根据下面表格的个人信息 用英语写一封信 申请留学 姓名 李华性别 女出生年月 1993 年 6 月 毕业学校 北京新华中学学业 各门功课优秀 申请院校 美国哥伦比亚大学申请专业 计算机科学 兴趣爱好 网络和英语电子信箱 lihua93 注意 1 信件必须包括以上内容 不能逐句翻译 可适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 2 词数 100 左右 开头和结尾已给出 不计入词数 参考词汇 哥伦比亚大学 the University of Colombia 21 世纪教育网 Sir or Madam I m writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance for my further study in computer science in your university Yours sincerely Li Hua 用心 爱心 专心3 1 how what 由 what 引导宾语从句 从句中 like 缺宾语 2 在 secret 之后加 with share sth with sb 3 talks talk will 后须加动词原形 4 在 always 之后加 a listener 是可数名词 且是泛指 5 hear hearing after 是介词 后接名词或动词 ing 形式 6 is are that 代指先行词 words 所以谓语动词要用复数 7 happily happy 形容词作宾语补足语 8 去掉 to which you need 作定语 意为 提供你所需的帮助 9 advices advice advice 是不可数名词 10 spent spend 前后时态须一致 One Possible version I m writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance for my further study in computer science in your university First please allow me to take a brief introduction of myself I m Li Hua a girl born in June 1993 I m graduating from Beijing Xinhua High School this coming June I m an all student with a keen interest in computers and the Internet Besides I m good at English I know that the University of Columbia is ranked among the most famous universities in the USA and that s the very reason why I m now applying to further my university study in your Computer Science Department 用心 爱心 专心4 I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the